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ite man this is it
8-10 lines
no hate
no crew
no dickride
no unexplained
no nonsense
no feeding
no freeposting
ill spit 1st and you drop 10 minuits after me.
Voting rules as follow:
Either breakdown of each bar format
OR
opener-
closer-
punches-
personals-
wordplay-
creativity-
originality-
vocab-
overall-
gd luck pz.
ite check in................................................ .................................................. ..................pz
ite check it,
Herbal man im like a bully, cause ill pick at you, ill start with your name,
nearlly as bad as ROOKIE, take the last two letters of and it describes your game,
i steel battles like your virginity, but unlike you im not a raper,
your raps got no lines, so i guess your simular to plain paper,
im sorry on your win list, you wont be able to add O_D,
so suprised you lost, when you open the thread to read 5-0 to me,
(h)es (e)asily (r)ejected (b)y (a)ll (l)adies, its driveing him crazy,
knowing he will never have babies, dont get effended when i tell you theres no place for gays in the navy,
ill admit it your godd but i love beating you with no real doubts,
cause maths in school tomarrows the only way this bitch is getting counts.
......................pz
ite man drop in 10 mins.n its mena say good not godd.............................................. .................................................. ............pz
ure first line said to take the last two letters of it and describes my game AL??? :confused:
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ill start keying in a lil bit peace
take them of = herb...........................................cmo n man drop.............................................. ....pz
Im Known for copious accounts of odious attacks
Lady D. has more testosterone then you do in your sack
You're wack its a fact you hated me even made a thread
You a "still born" battler shit even ya sig says you dead
I'll Unite all the mods in saying this "King is dumb"
a loser you're more lonely than christmass to bums
only way ure spit come hard is if you crash landed drooling
i guess im O_D's teacher cuz i just delivered a schooling
This dude is a rhyming "mutt"...clearly im the pedigree
You keyed a verse to me,...but i just scripted your elegy
uppin for votes #1
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yo nice battle.............
opener-herbal
closer-herbal
punches-herbal
personal-oli
wordplay-tie
multi's-oli
complexity-herbal
enjoyment-herbal
overall-HERBAL
both had aight verses...some lines kinda fell off for both but herbal has nice nice nice closer.....very nice.....sicc...no hate
U TLKING BOUT LAZY B?LOL.FUCK IT UPPIN(1).......................................... .................................................. ................PZ
competitive battle
flow=herbal
creativity=herbal
structure=tie
wordplay=herbal.............od u had some ok wordplay as well
punches=herbal
personals=herbal
my vote=herbal...........this was not as bad as it seems....herbal just took this
herbal had some nice punches an' flow was pretty good... but i didn't like how he copied the ummm... i forget what it's called with ethe (B)ig(i)diot(g)irl... ya know... that shit, i didn't like how he used that too, and oli-also had some cool punches... so my vote 4 oli.. 1
^wtf b i g?oh wel thx man yo herb man get ur pll 2 poll.^.............thx............................ ....................pz
multies=oli
mettas=tie
punches=oli(more personals)
overall= oli took dis one
peace
explicit aka EcLipZ
^poll vote on dis man.............................................th x................................................. ..........pz
dont know,both need elevation but i think oli came stronger and more creative...herbal got lines that had me like........ehhh
vote = oli
stronger disses and a bit more consistent
yup herbal took this with ease
punches=herbal
creativity=herbal
flow n struc=herbal
metas=herbal...nice
wordplay=herbal..LIKE THE UK THANG
overall=herbal
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91806
i've apready polled dawg
it mus be sum1 else
ya aint hit this up yet
pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91806
uppin # 2
yo its 3-0 in my favor because we agreed on how people would vote im not trying to bitch oli but your votes had shitty explanations and no breakdowns watsoever anyway cats need to poll vote...OLI you impressed me i thought u were gonna come hella weak like you usually do...good effort kid
peace
Aight, here's tha breakdown:
OLI
Herbal man im like a bully, cause ill pick at you, ill start with your name,
nearlly as bad as ROOKIE, take the last two letters of and it describes your game,
^^^YOU SPELLED "OFF" "OF" AND IT KILLED THE PUNCH 3/10
i steel battles like your virginity, but unlike you im not a raper,
your raps got no lines, so i guess your simular to plain paper,
^^^OK PUNCH 6/10
im sorry on your win list, you wont be able to add O_D,
so suprised you lost, when you open the thread to read 5-0 to me,
^^FLOW'S NASTY HERE, WEAK PUNCH TOO 3/10
(h)es (e)asily (r)ejected (b)y (a)ll (l)adies, its driveing him crazy,
knowing he will never have babies, dont get effended when i tell you theres no place for gays in the navy,
^^^OK I GUESS 5/10
ill admit it your godd but i love beating you with no real doubts,
cause maths in school tomarrows the only way this bitch is getting counts.
^^YOU CALLED HIM GODD...LMFAO YOUR SPELLING IS LOSING THIS BATTLE FOR YOU, GET A DICTIONARY 2/10
TOTAL: 19/50 (38%)
Herbal:
Im Known for copious accounts of odious attacks
Lady D. has more testosterone then you do in your sack
^^^NICE PUNCH, BUT FIRST LINE WAS.... HMMM 6/10
You're wack its a fact you hated me even made a thread
You a "still born" battler shit even ya sig says you dead
^^^NICE PERSONAL 7/10
I'll Unite all the mods in saying this "King is dumb"
a loser you're more lonely than christmass to bums
^^OK PUNCH 6/10
only way ure spit come hard is if you crash landed drooling
i guess im O_D's teacher cuz i just delivered a schooling
^^PLAYED. 4/10
This dude is a rhyming "mutt"...clearly im the pedigree
You keyed a verse to me,...but i just scripted your elegy
^^MISSPELLED EULOGY... KILLED THE PUNCH FOR THE IDIOTS 4/10
TOTAL: 27/50 (54%)
VOTE GOES TO HERBAL
keep it up yall, spellivate ha ha
peace
can't poll for some reason.... sorry
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Actually man if were counting vote its 4-3 to you but fuck it.wats up wid da poll?pll cnt vote rite.............................................. ...................................pz
next time before u speak make sure you know wat u are talking about kidQuote:
Originally posted by $pitacular
Aight, here's tha breakdown:
MISSPELLED EULOGY... KILLED THE PUNCH FOR THE IDIOTS
elegy - a mournfull melancholy poem lamenting the dead.
eulogy - a speech or writting in praise or honor of a dead person or thing.
Directly from a dictionary...i never misspell unless it's intended.
So i demand you take your previous statement back.
haha naw its ku im sure you just didn't know exactly
peace nice breakdown by the way
4-0 uppin # 3
Oli came hard and real personal, but some of it was forced and some of it was just filler.
Herbal hit hard and didn't make me read through filler or stretch any lines.
opener- Herbal
closer- Herbal
punches- Herbal
personals- Oli
wordplay- Oli (slightly)
creativity- Herbal
originality- Herbal
vocab- Herbal
overall- Herbal
That's how it is...
Peace
herbal can ya poll ya vote on this plz?....................cheers
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91806
i think oli took this marginally......
opener-herbal
closer-oli
punches-both kinda played
personal-oli
wordplay-tie
multi's-oli
complexity-herbal
enjoyment-oli
overall-oli
thats the low down
^thx man 2-2 poll plz............................................... .................................................. .............pz
my 2 cents
flow-Herb
punches-herb
laughs-herb
personals-herb
no need to go further my vote Herb
he merkd ya dawg
flow=herbal
creativity=herbal
structure=tie
wordplay=herbal
punches=herbal
personals=herbal
overall= herbal...no hate O.D.
return the favor and hit up my battles below wit an honest vote...
yo for some reason i cant vote on the poll....i dont know why... sorry Herbal............................................ ...........................
it wont let me poll vote...............it says it cannot complete this action................take this to a mod to get the vote added..................nice battle
it wont let me vote either.........i dont know why but it wouldnt let me yesterday or today.....sorry
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opener-oli
closer-tie
punches-oli
personals-oli
wordplay-oli
creativity-oli
originality-herbal
vocab-herbal
overall-oli
I dont know whats up with the polls it wont let me poll for some reason sry I know its a bitch when peops come in and vote and dont poll. maybe you can get a mod to add my vote in
/\/\ NO u dont have 5 wins go away and read the fucking rules moron............................................. .................................................
STOP birchin about da votes man.listen wats up wid da polls?doya wna move it into front lines, u mite loose ur votes but so wil i.?...............................pz
Flow~Dog
Vocab~Herb
Consistency~Dog
Punches~Herb
Metas~Herb
Overall~Herb i liked his verse better no doubt he murked this cat but dogg was aite just need to work in some areas~1
wtf............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............it won't let me vote homie my bad
flow=herbal
creativity= OLI
structure=HERBAL
wordplay=herbal
punches=herbal
personals=both but mostly oli
overall= herbal
made me laugh more= herbal
herbal= gets my vote