ok ignore the first one
10 line min
15 line max
no hate votes
no crew votes
and you spit first
verses due in by tuesday
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ok ignore the first one
10 line min
15 line max
no hate votes
no crew votes
and you spit first
verses due in by tuesday
ok,,, i';ll drop sunday or something cuz im lil busy........................................
peace
yo checking in................................................ .................................................. .
peace
My Verse:
My lyrical punches hit back and forth damaging the rep. of any emcee thats wants to test me/[1]
Even if i was handicap i will take u out, no respect is due to u cuz i just dont give a fuck, i'll show no mercy/[2]
Da highlight of the evening will be me and you wit gloves on ready to settle our differences in a boxing ring/[3]
But it's a mismatch like Jones Versus Harris, nuttin could hit me but ima throw punches at ur face and fuck up ur chin/[4]
Lyrically it's all da same im better than you, I dont dont even got to worry bout da reprecussions cuz ure no competition/[5]
Honestly ure one of da worst emcees ive eva seen battle, then wanting to battle on of da best, bitch i'll leave u wit ur rap career needing some modification/[6]
gd luck dawg
peace
Look at my record its 5-0 do u want to be numba 6, if so then u chose da fucking wrong path/[7]
Ur punches wont even faze me, i got outa da u way cuz ur lyris are stiking, bitch let them take a bath/[8]
U missed da conception if u really though u gonna win this battle against me, u dumb fuck/[9]
Read ur lyrics who u think u gonna beat with that shit damn boy they just fucking suck/[10]
Ur lyrics are like enigma really hard to understand, maybe thats cuz they make no sense, their irrelevant/[11]
Why do u waste ur time and everyone else's lines by choosing to battle, u got no skill, wit rap---- u just cant/[12]
I forever Kill bad musicians and vocalist, so their horrid scars to "rap" can cease/[13]
So in the end i hold the "secret", and your bitch~ass is "deceased"/[14]
shit i made a mistake, here is it:
My lyrical punches hit back and forth damaging the rep. of any emcee thats wants to test me/[1]
Even if i was handicap i will take u out, no respect is due to u cuz i just dont give a fuck, i'll show no mercy/[2]
Da highlight of the evening will be me and you wit gloves on ready to settle our differences in a boxing ring/[3]
But it's a mismatch like Jones Versus Harris, nuttin could hit me but ima throw punches at ur face and fuck up ur chin/[4]
Lyrically it's all da same im better than you, I dont dont even got to worry bout da reprecussions cuz ure no competition/[5]
Honestly ure one of da worst emcees ive eva seen battle, then wanting to battle on of da best, bitch i'll leave u wit ur rap career needing some modification/[6]
Look at my record its 5-0 do u want to be numba 6, if so then u chose da fucking wrong path/[7]
Ur punches wont even faze me, i got outa da u way cuz ur lyris are stiking, bitch let them take a bath/[8]
U missed da conception if u really though u gonna win this battle against me, u dumb fuck/[9]
Read ur lyrics who u think u gonna beat with that shit damn boy they just fucking suck/[10]
Ur lyrics are like enigma really hard to understand, maybe thats cuz they make no sense, their irrelevant/[11]
Why do u waste ur time and everyone else's lines by choosing to battle, u got no skill, wit rap---- u just cant/[12]
I forever Kill bad musicians and vocalist, so their horrid scars to "rap" can cease/[13]
So in the end i hold the "secret", and your bitch~ass is "deceased"/[14]
gdluck dawg
peace
This Battle Is Already Won LEts SAy from What Ive Seen Mario do ... THat Shit is defitnitly better......... MArIo is going to have to step it up a noch............................................
sorry its late but here it is
Man you battle like you the king, hey this is a boxing ring you may have won the first round but I got this fist and im gonna pound you to the ground [1]
Man can you even read, no you cant you need to go back to the first grade because this shit is real and I’ve got it made [2]
I started off shit but that’s ok, youre the one that’s fuckin gay when im finshed you will be looking like a retard this battle is so fucking easy [3]
Ima a psycho path, you the one smellin like you need a bath, smelly bastard you think you good but yet you haven’t mastered the art of battling [4]
You think your tough, but your not when youre bitch asks you to touch her muff you say no I cant im gay but you know what ima let you win [5]
Im sick of fucking battling but what I say doesn’t matter, ima gonna sit there and look like tha mad hatter, im gonna feed you a lot of cake to make you fatter [6]
So then we wont have to box we’ll sumo wrestle with a fox, your momma forgot to take the pill battling you is making me ill [7]
Cant you even see im getting better now, how could you miss that shit the cat in a hat could beat you [8]
Sorry you had to wait but this shit is getting great, you aint no motha fucking emcee you a fuckin poser [9]
Im almost finished im almost done, this shit is over this shit is won you better drop your fake ass record and record this down im the only motha fucker wearing this crown [10]
aight...............................we kool.........................................uupin fo votes...........................
peace
ok uppin for votes....................................... votes............................................. ........votes...........
how stretched du want the shit to be dayme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Breakdown+
punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
enjoyment-jus jesus
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ
http:
how stretched du want the shit to be dayme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Breakdown+
punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
enjoyment-jus jesus
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93576
uppin for some votes
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93576
can ya'll check that out seen as tho i voted on this pz
uppin for votes yeah ill hit the link in a sec :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
good even battle...........................
punches-jesus
flow-mario
opener-jesus
closer-jesus
creativity-mario
personals-jesus
overall-rap jesus
..................nice battle fellas
return tha favor plz................................hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&pagenumber=2
that was ah coo battle both need elevation work on ya stretched bars in kinda shorten tha percentages
my prospective
punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
enjoyment-jus jesus
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus
jus thought his was betta
good work kids elevate more
aiight so lets get more votes """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
uppin for votes form ppl who can poll.................................
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peace
flow: Neither
Punchs: Jesus
Metas: Jesus
Structure: Neither
Enjoy: Jesus
Vote: Jesus
quit it with the streatched lines...keep elevatin
thanx dawg..... upping for more votes........... 2-0 for me..........................................
peace
come on ppl dont let this sleep ............................
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peace
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Mario Can You Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93937
ok uppin for votes
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whoa yall lines is way too stretched but i break it down like this
punches-jesus
flow-mario
opener-jesus
closer-jesus
creativity-mario
personals-jesus
thx, uppin fo votes 3-0................................................. ......
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peace
iight come on need more votes
i gotta win this one
sssshhhiiitttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus
hit this batttle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94146
aight thanx upping for 1 more vote for the win...........................
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peace
enjoyment - jesus
wordplay - jesus
punchlines - jesus
structure - jesus
creativity - jesus
complexity - jesus
opener - jesus
closer - jesus
vocab - jesus
overall - jesus
Phayme vs Mad Man-SS
or Phayme vs Justin Kredible
damn u cant poll, some 1 plz vote on this.........................
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peace
plz some vote and let this get closed......................
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peace
structure-none
enjoyment-jus jesus
metas-jesus
punches-jesus
flow-none
creativity-mario
vote-jesus..................................Nice battle yall
Ya'll hit up my battle in my sig its me 3-0 thanx
thanx bro but can u poll ur vote cuz that gonna be the win.........
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peace