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5-8barz
no hate
no crew
no dr
no herb votes
no prewrittin
no recycling
checking in
aight man.....as i said,I'll spit about 15 mins after u....Good luck Cus u gonna need it....Bring ur ''a'' game....Dont look at my record or my number of posts....1
Ima have to spit right now Cus i gotta b out in 5 mins...
Picks up Mic....*yawns*....Lectures Kclipz 4 murkin...
This verse gon invade your mind and hold down your self-esteem just so you wont get your 'hopes-up'........
So like midgets playing ball against Shaq you shouldn't even bother to 'post-up'...... ( post his verse....get it?)
Like scared and small mice..you cant fuck wit this 'Cat'.....
Cuz my skills Undominable and Persuading even 'Smokey-Bear' will light a 'Match'......
'Time' for this 'Dry-to-Die', all i do is spit the truth, while your afraid to pronounce a 'Lie'......
You know 'Why?', fuck it just call a Autopsy Surgeon the way i rip Kclipz out from the 'In-side'.......
Cut your receedings like murder 'Stylists' so 'Why Risk?'.......
Only time youd be "Rich-In-Metaphors" is if you were in Notre Dame 'Fighting-the-Irish'.........
my malicious-scriptures will viciously-rip-ya....cuzz now tha tables been 'turned'......
its best you admire-thys-stryfe cuzz i'll set fire to-ya-"life" like ya "diary key" been 'burned'.......
Inventing shit that's as proved as existence in other planets in all your 'fights' .....
You're like Mike Tyson , when you try to throw punches you can only pull 'bites'........
I just cleared the 'Clouds',now this man is only seeing 'Stars'.....(KO)
L-O-S-E-R..there, i just stretched the truth, more than he stretches his 'Barz'......
'Light-Up' your rapsheet your rhymes still wouldnt be 'Hotter'.....
Matterfact you couldnt 'Cum-Nice' jacking off next to 'Mr. Rogers'...(rip)
GhosT
Dont take forever......Post by today.....I did 8 Bars....Dont go over 8 bars......Ima B out....Hope when i come baCC later on,u have Posted.....1
Wats that say location hidden? no shit cuz obviouslly your parents are ashamed of yo ass
diddnt want to have recognized by any theme that you have so they jus threw you into the lower class//2
Test less? no you tesstical~less but diddnt wanna admit it so you put it in the form test~less
herb tried to take on a "higher" level but couldnt even if he was in a airplane and spitted gainst the greatest//4
Intrests:none? is that you have no intrest in anything or is it cuz noone wants to take intrest in you
like the wackness you are put yourself in the stock exchange noone will invest in you//6
unlike your other latest battle this isnt gonna be unlimited bitch
jus think if it was itd be sum of the worlds limited hits//8
8 barz like that man g'luck may tha best emcee win
u spit 8barz it dont seem it man but wateva oh well lets let tha votes commence now good luck man and that is over 8barz
Not bad
Flow: TIE
Opener: Kclipz
Closer:Copy
Personals: Kclipz (Copy ahd more but clipz hit harder)
Winner: Kclipz
Hit this site up please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91471
Klipz got this one....
Better wordplay, structure, floh and overall better verse....
copy was aight, but no good enough.....
VoteL Kclipz
can ya'll vote at my battles in my sig, thay have been there forever and being slept on badly, i winnin 3-0..... polls are appriciated..... Peace vote fairly
Uppin #1
And plzz read both verses and plzz explain your votes in good fashion like rule says no herb votes!.............................
Uppin #2
And plzz read both verses and plzz explain your votes in good fashion like rule says no herb votes!.............................
Uppin #3
And plzz read both verses and plzz explain your votes in good fashion like rule says no herb votes!.............................
Ok, the breakdown:
Copy~Righted: Ur punches had potential, but either u took too long to say them, or they just died out in the end. Some of them hit pretty hard, the "stretches his barz" line was ill, nice multi and personal. Flow was ok, but sometimes, the first line had 9 syllables, then the next had 16, or somethin like that. If the flow was a little better, the punches would stand out more. Your opener was decent, your closer was solid. Pretty good drop.
Kclipz 4 Murkin: Work on your structure. The punches were there, but it was all stretched out, so some of them appeared to be hidden. Nice wordplay on the "tesstical~less", one of your best lines. Opener was kind of weak, took to long before throwin the punch. Mainly consistant with your lines, the flow was ok, off at times but there. When punches were recognized, they hit. Good drop.
My vote goes to "Kclipz 4 Murkin", both had punches but Kclipz was more consistant w/ them. Good battle. Hit the link up please, it's gettin maddd slept on. Much appreciated pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=daillistrebel
Kilpz had a much cleaner rhymestyle................everybody had some dumb ass metas......forced ass hell.................straight battle but Klipsz is gettin my vote due to flow, better metas and wordplay............copy righted, that notre dame line was wack...
Uppin #4
And plzz read both verses and plzz explain your votes in good fashion like rule says no herb votes!
And plzz REGISTERED VOTERS POLL VOTE!
Uppin #5
And plzz read both verses and plzz explain your votes in good fashion like rule says no herb votes!
And plzz REGISTERED VOTERS POLL VOTE!
Good shit KlipZ...So its 2-0 u right.....Uppin people,we need Much more votes....Explain why u Pick that person toO.......Uppin..1
UPPIN #6 PLZZ VOTE
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Still uppin....WE need some votes....State who u Picked and the reason....Show some love and vote up....1
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Good shit copy righted
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This was a good battle
But i thought KLips 4 merkin took this shit
Eh dawg pm me ya aim name
V-klipz harder punches an personalss
an he didnt break the rules
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92094
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ YO PEEP That honesty..Its tite
^^ couldnt have said it any better myself....Quote:
Originally posted by DaIllistReBel
Ok, the breakdown:
Copy~Righted: Ur punches had potential, but either u took too long to say them, or they just died out in the end. Some of them hit pretty hard, the "stretches his barz" line was ill, nice multi and personal. Flow was ok, but sometimes, the first line had 9 syllables, then the next had 16, or somethin like that. If the flow was a little better, the punches would stand out more. Your opener was decent, your closer was solid. Pretty good drop.
Kclipz 4 Murkin: Work on your structure. The punches were there, but it was all stretched out, so some of them appeared to be hidden. Nice wordplay on the "tesstical~less", one of your best lines. Opener was kind of weak, took to long before throwin the punch. Mainly consistant with your lines, the flow was ok, off at times but there. When punches were recognized, they hit. Good drop.
My vote goes to "Kclipz 4 Murkin", both had punches but Kclipz was more consistant w/ them. Good battle. Hit the link up please, it's gettin maddd slept on. Much appreciated pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=daillistrebel
aint that like a d/r vote byblackguy ????
oh well uppin #9?
its 4-1 one more vote to close this and we can move on with our lives folks
Kilcips took this battle
better metaphorical lines an mulites
Vote KILpz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92094
^^ hitit up hoonestly alot of dik ryders
damn ima have to say that copy righted came out of nowhere
this battle wasnt close
c.r. took this in every catagory, some new shit ive never heard
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k.4.m. had a decent flow
dont get me wrong is was nice
but it lacked enough to choke c.r. throat
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vote/ copy
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yo check out my battles ok
lets close those 2
oh well uppin #9?
its 4-2 one more vote to close this and we can move on with our lives folks
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THnx for everyOne who has voted.....WE still uppin.....We need more votes....State why u Picked that particular Mc.....Uppin....1
YooOOoooOOOoooOO vote up peeps....Its 4-2,In klipz Favor....Be honest and please dont dick-Ride.....Still uppin....1
People Vote up.....SHow some love and vote.....Its 4-2 in Klipz favor.....State the reason why u picked That particular Mc.....STill uppin!!!
oh well uppin #11
its 4-2 one more vote to close this God damn ppl plzz vote now i understand why sum ppl flip out over this cuz noone votes
oh well uppin #12
its 4-2 one more vote to close this.
God damn jus vote who yall thought was better plzz just voter so we can move on
OMG WTF KLIPZ U CAN ONLY UP IT 5 TIMES NOT 12 ULL GET DQ'D FOR THIS SHIT MAN.NEWAY KLIPZ WON DIS WITH PUNCHES N FLOW DATS IT.CHECK DA RULEZ HOME. PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92268 .................PZ
^LOL... He's The One That Ratted You Out To IR... Sorry Klipz... You Upped This WAY Too Many Times... Kids Usually Disguise Their Uppings Past Five... You Actually Counted Them But Still DQ'ed.