ok,
10-20 lines
No-crew votes
No-Hate votes
No-d/r
No-feedin
All votes MUST be explained
checkin in..
ill spit after u check in..
Good Luck!!!
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ok,
10-20 lines
No-crew votes
No-Hate votes
No-d/r
No-feedin
All votes MUST be explained
checkin in..
ill spit after u check in..
Good Luck!!!
yo checkin in, spit ur shit, since its 11:25 have it done b4 12...pce out and good luck, we both tryin 2 elivate so no hard feelins........................................... .................................................. ...................
We all know u aint Jesus, cause we all kno Jesus would win
If u Jesus, then call me the devil cause im bout 2 commit a sin
Santa comes once a year 2 this kid, I come 2 him everynite(his nightmare) so I guess u can call me his hysteria (uncontrollable fear)
My lyrics are poison transmitted, nigga has only gotten 4 lines of it and he already thinks he’s caught malaria
Dawg chill, breath in and breath out, if u did then those r your last deep breath
Cause darkest knight just foreshowed your death
I must admit we both have the same record
But I’ll have u and ur lyrics retreat quicker than soldiers in the battle of concord (real war)
How can any1 take a nigga serious when they call themselves explicit
The way I strike at u, u wished god could heal it
If no1 has told ur darkest deepest secret then let me reveal it
U just got merked by 4 foot African midget
WHOOAA theres more
This pussy just got fucked a hundred times quicker than a whore
I guess I should stop and not pursuit (as in persuit on)
cause the only way u gonna win is if they stop me and put me in a mental institute
the last line means IM SO ILL THEY GOTTA PUT ME IN A MENTAL INSTITUTE SO HE CAN WIN............................................... .................................................. ....................................
yo on the jesus part, under explicit he put this..."im jesus...
my right hand writes diseases
my left hand will strike n fight ya weakness" so thats why i used my 1st 2 lines....ight im DONE NOW IM UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES....holla
no offense Dark but your verse was way off flow and there was nothing worth readin
choppy as fuck
i aint even gotta read x-s rhyme
and don't say i'm hatin just honest crit.
perfections ryhmes go into your stomach and damage your spine/exploding like volcanos spitting lava ryhmes/
standby for the Advancement of a Average MC/
A Lyrical Virus is Vandalizing causeing horror and tragedy/
watch out below cause im invadin ya facualty/
transform like voltron niggas cant come close to./
your weak text be vested in kleenex, i split em in two like im
rippin tissues/
eyo u lookin like a bitch too, why u in denile? when this description fits you/
you a wack ass nigga, i decided i aint havin it, and Explict has been rappin since/
why you posing nigga?? you come off more inanimate then da avrage mannequins/
your fake like faggit kids in college claiming that they practice abstinence/
im sick wit dis profession,so i jack your niche, cause extinctions of the wack inhabitants/
you fuckin pose like 2 year old sportin a turbin when u aint even heard of a persian/
I'm like a HIV, an airborne version, and i got dis bitch, its positive, cuz i even murder the virgins/
the fact is that he aint half the man, let alone a third of a person/
every time i spoke he packed and ran, as if my words coulda hurt em/
i leave yo DissedAble(disabled), so u can call me Kane, bitch ill have yo name all up on the hall of shame/
diagnosed by doctors, blamed as the cause of pain.
my bullets are like lil kids itchin to come out to play,but they grounded until a niggas 21st birthday.
yo dont sleep on this battle....UPPIIN.....HIT THIS SHIT UP....pce......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
this was a good battle
i need to be able 2 vote so i can get into it more
for now help me close these threads ok
names vs verse112>2-0
names vs angellicalr>0-4
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hahah yo i kno y u call urself 1 liner, cause all u can do is come up with 1 line u pussy ass, but dont worry we all have our differ styles of rappin, and im guessin us is just headin south, IF UR 0-4 U SHOULDNT EVEN SAY SHIT TILL U COME UP WITH A CLOSE BATTLE.....how pathetic this wasnt a battle and i just kicked ur ass, next time becareful of wht u say....i dont need people sayin so and so won cause i sucked i need people tellin me wht i could have said or done 2 win, cause i just wanna elevate.....pce
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damn...explict took this easy yo.....he had better vocab and punches than Knight....knight had a much better structure and flow though....but Explict took this mostly because of better punches.....good read from u both....no hate...just a vote....
Check This:
Smoka vs. Anthro
peace
4:20
explixt took this one. You both ahd some nice flows. darkest yours was a bit choppy at time. Hit this up and I'll battle yall lata. peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91471
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lol the battle of the 0-2 in hopes of getting their first win but if ya got 100+posts feedbak my battle on sig but neways Explicit you came better your vocab was hotter even though the punches weren't that tite but your flow overall was nicer~1
explicit got this with flow and vocab there really werent any puches or persons worth typing about so I'm going to go with flow and vocab and ex got those
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common people stop sleepin on this battle.... hit up an honest vote please............................................ .................................................. ........
Quote:
Originally posted by Explict
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This was a decent battle, both had a fewe played lines, flows were ok in some parts and off in others, not a lot of personal hits from either side, so based on the effect of punches alone, id say Exp edged this one out slightly.
Not a bad battle though, it was closer than io expected.
Vote - Explict
Explicit takes this....
Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..
Vote- Explicit
Thanks Crit...now upppin for the final vote so i can get this battle over with...please poll vote.............................................. ..................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92583
^drop an honest vote there
I'll be back to do the same thing here
aiight cool..i hit ya battle up now hit this up with an honest vote.............................................. .................................................. ..................
both need elevations
d.k. needs betta punches
explicit needs betta structure
explicit took this though with punches and wordplay
Vote - Explicit