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does 81 stand for the year you were born
or how many times that your asshole's been torn
step to me and i'll fill your ass right up with a shoe
but who knew that your dude just cleaned out your doo doo
on a lyrical scale you're rated a negative one
tryn to get out of the hole, like me with your mum (mom)
you a pussy, you a joke, on the stage you choke
i inhale your lyrics and blow it out my nose like smoke
dek81, it's says you're new to rap battles
but to us you're groud beef still in the form of cattle
PEACE
your turn boi....better have something in here by tonight.....someone hit this post up and leave an honest feedback....i'm up 4-1...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88767
aight just let me get a beat going... aight let's go.....
Who the FUCK is this mc standin in front of me/
Poetictendenceez...more like phonetic disability/
he's choakin like sars victim...someone take away his stage pass/
kid couldn't fuckin rhyme if i stuffed dr. zues up is ASS/
speakers start ta scream n he complains about feedback/
nah ya little bitch thats cus ya voice never cracked/
while other mc's grew up workin on perfectin their tone/
constant suckin on a bone led to ya vocal chord being blow/
oh shit, wtf this guys startin ta pee his damn pants/
only way off the stage is ta built raft frum ya shemale boyfriends implants./
what?
Flow-Dek81
Multies-poetictendenceez
Structur-poetictendenceez
Punchs-Dek81
Personals-poetictendenceez
Volcab-Dek81
Opener-Dek81
Finisher-Dek81
Wordplay-poetictendenceez
Overall-Dek81
Aiight good battle yall but Dek took this 1 today aiight Peace out (v)
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post a link and I'll hit up your stuff with an honest opinoin..ya'll need to stop sleepn so bad tho, for real..uppin 3
aight dek81 took this one with better punchs Vocab and flow the other guy just needs to Elivate big time Peace
this ain't a tuff decision yall
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damn this was a good battle
there was some nice shit
can someone visit my battles for feedback and votes
names vs verse112
names vs angellicalr
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Hey yo I can't vote but if I could I think Dek81 tool this shit. Jus barely tho. Nice battle............................................ .................................................. ...........
What tha fuck do i gotta do fore i can vote?jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj Is that enough caracters???!!
100 posts is alot. But i'll just say that Dek81 one this, this poetic whatever is lyrically illiterate and ignorant.sssssssssssssshhhhhhhiiiiiittttttttttt.im sick of this 100 characters thing. yall should go to rap wars.
dek81 took this one by far
Punches-dek
flow-dek
vocab-dek
wordplay-poetic
structure-poetic
opener-poetic
finisher-dek
personals-poetic
enjoyability-poetic
really close battle i liked poetic opener:
does 81 stand for the year you were born
or how many times that your asshole's been torn.
lol that just cracked me up..
good battle!
he took it by far...by I got all the credit? ok!?Quote:
Originally posted by Explict
dek81 took this one by far
Punches-dek
flow-dek
vocab-dek
wordplay-poetic
structure-poetic
opener-poetic
finisher-dek
personals-poetic
enjoyability-poetic
really close battle i liked poetic opener:
does 81 stand for the year you were born
or how many times that your asshole's been torn.
lol that just cracked me up..
good battle!
sorry i made a mistake and it wont let me edit. Instead of dek81 it's poetic that took this by far.....sorry for the extra post
Overall-poetic
appreciated explicit....
btw: did u click the poll?
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poetic
does 81 stand for the year you were born
or how many times that your asshole's been torn
^^^^ LMAOOOOOOo funnyyyyyy
step to me and i'll fill your ass right up with a shoe
but who knew that your dude just cleaned out your doo doo
^ using baby words are we now lol
on a lyrical scale you're rated a negative one
tryn to get out of the hole, like me with your mum (mom)
^ cruel bringin the moma into this
you a pussy, you a joke, on the stage you choke
i inhale your lyrics and blow it out my nose like smoke
^ Good
dek81, it's says you're new to rap battles
but to us you're groud beef still in the form of cattle
^ garbageeeeeeee
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dek
Who the FUCK is this mc standin in front of me/
Poetictendenceez...more like phonetic disability/
^ good!
he's choakin like sars victim...someone take away his stage pass/
kid couldn't fuckin rhyme if i stuffed dr. zues up is ASS/
^ okay....
speakers start ta scream n he complains about feedback/
nah ya little bitch thats cus ya voice never cracked/
^ ha ha ha .. right
while other mc's grew up workin on perfectin their tone/
constant suckin on a bone led to ya vocal chord being blow/
^ not bad
oh shit, wtf this guys startin ta pee his damn pants/
only way off the stage is ta built raft frum ya shemale boyfriends implants./
extended..
ohhhh my ........ get rid of the linez /< - - -
made me not wanna read
but.. im feelin poetics more...
vote-poetic
aight...saw other people addin the / shit so i though that's what people wanted. won't do it again. thanks for votin anyway.
explicit wtf....did he out bid me on the payoff?
nah...jus foolin thanks for not sleepin regardless.
no doubt Dek81
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dek81 got this due to punches,vocab,flow,etc
nice battle for ya'll but in ma eyes he took it
vote=dek
OH YEAH DEK...WE CAN SEE YA IP NUMBER ABOVE SO WE KNOW FRK_ttk IS YOU ASWELL..LOOK IN THE RIGHT HAND CORNER...DO NOT EVEN GO THERE AND D/R YOURSELF
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You gotta have 100 posts toothpic.
Opener:TIE
Closer: Dek
Flow:Poetic
Personals: Dek
Punches: Dek
Winner: Dek
I know yall can't vote yet but can you hit this site upwhen you can? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91468
well his battle was all the way one sided in Dek favor
Poetic? came weak as hell (no disrespect dawg) but you gotta come harder
Dek outshined the dude in every line
vote+Dek
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