Paranoia..Pedro Nok/-Brixton-

mics i've hit up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91067
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...633#post899633
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...642#post899642

Paranoia
Pedro Nok
What's happenin?...Somethin's creepin in the darkness...
Is it in my head?.. must I stay quiet? or should I start This?
Too many questions in my head...I'm in a paranoid state
Is it my time to leave this earth... Or Is my death my fate?
No, Fuck that, I won't enter into this One man mind games
Cos If I do enter these...My sanity will be shot down in flames
I'll try to regain the way things were..stop lookin over my shoulder
My heart seems to be gettin colder...As the darkness takes over
AAAAHHHH!!!...Did I scream out loud?...Shit I'm talkin to myself
As I contemplate this suicide shit...I'm hazardous to my health
But I can't take this shit no more...I'm livin a life that's depressed
Enterin normal situations....And then start buggin cos I'm stressed

BrixtonIrreversable
Defensive Mechanisms Go Down..Still Hearin Voices,Change Ma Life Around
Pound For Pound...I Can't Handle Doses Of Nuttin But The Ground
Coz Am Starin At Life Obsessed With Padded Walls And Doors
Rooms Filled With Cussions So Am Not Self Mutilating On The Floor
Shit..I Ain't Even Reached Twenty..And I'm Disabled In The Mind,
Makin People In My Brain...Jus For An Excuse To Look Behind
No Matter How Many Appointments..Nor How Many Examiners
I'll Still Be A Fukin Show...Another Example For All To Laminate
Or Hate...Coz Not Even Other Nut Cases Want To Associate With Me
The Only Chance Of Me Talkin...Is To My Real Friends,But Thy're In A T.V
C.v...Check My Past...I Shoulda Listened To Ma Boss Coz He Knew I Wouldnt Last
But He Gasped..Coz He Was On The Recieving End Of Death That Happened Fast

The Fix...(Hook x2)
I feel The World Cave in...As the Insanity of this mind Kicks In
For You Its Jus A Sin...But For Me Its A Battle I Gotta Win
I need to kick this habit...If not for myself, For my family
But In End...Am Jus Another Case Of A Plague That Hit Humanity

Pedro NokEnterin The Dark
As this suicidal thoughts become inbedded...I catcha glimpse Of the Devil
Looks Me square in the eye...And begins to yell "Pedro,we got a score to settle"
What? How the Fuck?...How Has it become now my time to perish?
So that's it end of my existance?...Pedro Nok finished? Pedro Nok diminished?
I asked six questions...He replied with the Unfathomable answer...the 666
Shit I am buggin paranoia...Cold turket settin in, need my next fix
-Brixton-TIME'S UP?
Wow...Doctor Fixed Me Up Kwik..But I'm Goin Drowsey,Feeling Sick
I Said If He Sorted Me Out,I'd Do Anythin...I'd Suck His Dick
But A Kwik Flick Of The Switch..He Had Twelve Porter Boys Come Beat Me Like A Bitch
So Now My Twitch...Has Got Worser By The Day,Now Become A Lifelong Itch
Oh Well..Lifes Over!!!...Can't Think Of More Shit Left To Say But Prey....
Coz While I'm Sucking Through Straws,Grab Ya Life N Live It Day By Day......

The Fix...(Hook x2)
I feel The World Cave in...As the Insanity of this mind Kicks In
For You Its Jus A Sin...But For Me Its A Battle I Gotta Win
I need to kick this habit...If not for myself, For my family
But In End...Am Jus Another Case Of A Plague That Hit Humanity

uppin...................................1st.....

need feedbak..........Pedro Nok

Verse was aigh
but personally i dodnt like the concept i've seen it done too much
but no-hate you did well....

Pz.

aiight.................uppin fo feedbak

dog u like fire saying u betta than me u must be a lier leave u kanye west put ya face in a wire beating me u got a 50 50 chance after i bet u im gone have to beat ya mens my advice is keep spitting u probaly be one of the best after i stop living i started rapping yung in sexy yung in rich yes my money is growing quick my money going up urs going down got turned on me so turn around it be best listen up i dont fight with fist i put 2 gunz up

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Good shit dawg.........you couldv'e been more creative because this concept is kinda old............I thaught that You could still have used some worlplay..................Not too bad though.....................

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good shit

surprised by brix:) that was actually not bad, not bat at all
stick to this dog cuz u do better on this than on battling
a lot better props

goodshit from both of yall
peace

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_________uppin

i liked the concept man, its been used but you jus change the angle.....and your vocab n shit was good, yeah liked it....an the hook was nice.......Pc....did you check the collab out?

uoppin fo feedbak

uppin

it was straight
obviosly the first part was the best,
seemed like brix ran out of shit to say at the end
No hate
hook was specitcal, I think Nox shined good on all ends
7.5/10
keep spittin

This was straight, it could use a little more excitment. I aint haten on it, just not my style. You guys know how that is. The first part was the climax of it all, it seemed to slow down from there. keep i Ill though, keep representin hommies

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Ped n Phil.M.Up............Uppin............Any more replies?

...Hmmm...at times your flow was...too repeatable???...predictable???...what do I know????
..it was ok....^^