10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
no feedin
blind spit 15 minutes to drop or u get dqued and lose
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10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
no feedin
blind spit 15 minutes to drop or u get dqued and lose
yo heres my 10 line verse
Yo ur rhymes are weak like wet cardboard//
My shit makes the sidewalk jealous cuz they so hardcore//
Imma end ya life, the way i slap dis dike//
Rip off ya fingas and watch ya try to grab da mic//
I go deep in my work, haywire to bizerk//
Cuz my punchlines are so rugged they’re startin to hurt//
I’m one not to be fucked with, the type to start a fight//
So get off me rhymes, BITCH, they’re to hard to bite//
Nigga if ya ever did make it ya albums wouldn’t hit da shelves//
And u couldn’t fuck me over if u were R. KELLY and I was 12/////
accetped at 4:37
uppin for some fuckin votes yall come on.
This nigga's losses is gonna be increased gettin added to my of Deceased
I spittin some shit thats gonna have u gettin roasted more than a thanksgiving feast
I spit nuttin but straight fire leavin this newbie turin to ashes
After this battle its gonna look like u was in war wit all yo gashes
Ya rhymes couldnt be dope if u was spittin some rhymes after smokin a blunt
ya had to change tha rules up cause ya ass is a pussy or should i say cunt
my record is 1 and 0 and bout to be 2 and 0 after i drop dis hoe
christmas is around tha corner u betta ask santa 4 some flow
this nigga prolly bite so shit cause he whackest emcee on rapbattles
cause i'ma slice them emcee and leave him wit more beef than most cattle
tha last to lines should read:
this nigga prolly bit some shit cause he's da whackest emcee on rapbattles
cause i'ma slice this emcee and leave him wit more beef than most cattle
ay yall uppin for some votes in this shit yall....
=come on uppin __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____
ITE drop a honest vote on dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...329#post899329 n ill repay da favour...........pz
Yo Honest votez.........J-Dubs had better wordplay even a meta or two....obsenity's verse was straight but not enough wordplay really. The hardcore-sidewalk thing was wack...............elevate
J-Dubs
repay the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90916
aight yall its 1-0 and J has the lead but we still need more votes even tho nitemares vote was BS but w/e uppin for some more.
uppin for some votes yall come on __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________________________
j dub got dis jst cus of wordplay but it was complicated ,but not bad.close yall.............................................. ob can u poll on mine plz............................thx...........pz
ay yall now its 2-0 J winnig and we need some more votes in this bitch yall and lemme point out my ending line and his simple rhymes. w/e ppl are bullshitting votes
quit swayin juss cause ur losing be a man bout it damn!! aint no1 on them childish games.....................
uppin 4 votes
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not 2 hate but J dubs took this by far, better word play and better punchlines...anyways yo yall check out my battle with lil red15...thnks
i didnt really see any hard hitting punches or anything in this battle..............so i got to go wit the dude wit better wordplay..........J dubs took this......no hate obsenity he just had more wordplay and creativity.............u both need to add personals to your rhymes as well.....
i dont kno wha u ppl are sayin bout da votes cuz all of obseitys bars were metaphores and he even had a multi and j-dubs had a couple of mutis but not enough and his metaphores were weak. i agree wit da punchlines cuz none came hard wit da punchlines and j-dub did have good flow it was close.
flow-j-dub
muties-obsenity
meta-obsenity
punches- no-1
wordplay-j-dub
structure-obsenity
opener-none had a good 1 but i think obsenitys was better
finisher- obsenitys was a metaphore and funny as fuk
overall- obsenity
^^^lmao newbie
Uppin 4 votes
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Flow: J
Punchs: J
Metas: J
Structure: Tie
Enjyment: J
Vote: J
weak battle..J came a lil harder..all these punchs are played tho...work on bein more original
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&pagenumber=1
hit tht up
uppin 4 votes
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Flow - J
Punches - J
Personals - J
Multis - J
Meta4s - J
Originality - J... played all the way from obsenity
Structure - obsenity
Vote = J Dubs
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