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Rules:
1.Crew votes allowed
2.No D/r Votes
3.6 bars
4.you know the rest
checkin
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u dropppin or wut............................................... .................
been like 40 minutes still no sighn
in Bitch slapped i sadi we gotta drop by tonite kido
..............................................Snif ff sniff...pussy?
Red is wut ill leave u swimmin in the way im spittin flames to ya head..
Have ya verse prewritten for a vet,How can u be a Mic killer when u only battle in text..
Ill have ya brains rattlyin down ya neck,
My punches are so Ill they Diagnosed u wit cancer..Ya Sexuality is like the 76ers witout Allen they aint got the answer..
my lines blaze herbs..the only way that you spit heat
is when you read my verse and my words and ya lips meet
I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in
RedDragon receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This"
ya typed a 50 bar novel mac.. my 10'll leave ya scriptures ripped
U needa understand the personals an punches an metaphors...
hes takin dayz so hes typin a 50 bar novel..get it...Lol jk..
im jjust hella blazed.off sum bud...fromthe club...
Damn kid talk about takin dawyz....
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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for a fukin prewrit shit fuk that...u needa drop now..
its 1 o clok here nigga..u dont see me bitch an 6 bars is short..kiddo
drop now or get dqed.......................follow the rules
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Originally posted by redragon
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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wow........sounds like a big fat vagina
You already put him one vote up in the poll dumbass^
But w/e I told you to be a man teck..but your over here bitching so I guess you coulden't handle being a man..
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(Start Time 7:06)
My Words Are Scornful..You Aren't A Homemade Bugle Boy So Stop Blowing Your Own Horn Bro//
My Text Make It Storm Hoe!..Overtake You Cause I'm Continuesly Fucking TeckNine Like Rewinding A Porno!/[1]
You Rhyming Is Mournfull.....Fact Is These Wack Kids,Think It's A Joke Till I "Applaude They Hats" And Clap Lids//
Bitch I Crack Wigs..TeckNine Got Enrolled In A Class With Aids Paitents,So He Could Be A Part Of Class Sicks!!/[2]
..Think About It,This Isn't A Nightmare It's A Fucking Fable//
TeckNine's Punches Are Soft 'Round Edges Like Unfished Tables/[3]
You's A Queef!!........Man Ur Done!!....I'll Put "Jungle Gyms" On Ya Spine To "Play Back"!!//
Get Slayed Jack!!........Not Near Me Cuz It's Like "Givin Perms To Mobsters" Cuz This Fags "Straight Wack"!!//[4]
Your Gunna Hate Gats!!......Like "Yogi With Heat" I "Bear Nines" Bastard!!//
You Wanna Compare Mines After??!!......Cuz Menace'll "Scalp Ya Forehead" And Have This Fool With A "HairLine Fracture"!!//[5]
You Dare Decline Tha Master??!!.......Dumb Fuck!!....You Only "Donate Sperm" Then Post A Reward For "Lost Kids//
Can't Define My Lo-Gix!!......Cuz I'll Kill This Kid And Leave Him With His "Head In Tha Dirt" Like An "Ostritch"!!!//[6]
(End Time,7:23)
..Now Uppin for Votes
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp #1
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LOl this kid puts in the start an end time like Its really true..u posted my boy yaverse that u orginally wrote last nite againt me an all u needed was one more line..then u saw my shit an rewrote ya whole thing..LOl
your gunna get DQED fag..thats just gay...
FAke ass Mc
this battle was good..almost like tha battle ov played lines..
well teck came nice...hella played lines but a couple of em' you tried to freak it another way..disses hit iight..punches did'nt really
have no spark tho..flow was good..nice opener
red came nice also..he had played lines also but he had a lil more heat...his opener was good...disses were betta..you edge on punches cause you change em up a lil bit..good battle overall tho
vote red...
^^SLut..if u cant read...rad had a ver up then he changed it cuz i came sum wut hard..an so he posteed that PRewrite shit..wut a fag....foreal...
^^^ya moms a slut!!!!^^^go jack off and drink it!!!!@teck
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OK but REd broke the TIMEl imite if u dont no how to read..
an trust me i no like a dozen guys that been all up in ya ..clit..
An i merked u..so hmmmmm your the slut...
Uppin 4 honest votes..>>>EVEN THO RED BROKE THE TIME LIMIT
opener-pak
closer-pak
punches-red
personals-pak
multis-red
originality-tie..both played
complexity-tie
enjoyment-red
structure-pak
creativity-pak
overall-hmmm...pretty close one.....but i go with red dragon....just harder hittin...no hate for real ...
yo teck...i know i voted against u here but can u please go poll in my battle with smoka
CLOSED
RED
TOOK 32 hours to spit
had a verse done then deleted it
cuz i spit sum heat..sum shit heat but still he got scred
psoted the next day tryna Bullshit THE TIME He SPIT IT In
KID we all no u ain that GOod LOLOLOL wow
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Deleated it?..fag if you go to the first page of this battle,you'd see that my verse is still up there in plain sight.I'm not a herb like you I dont delete my posts or take d/q's,I'm actually a man I can wait for a emcee to post.Well this isnt closed cause you arent a mod asshole so still uppin for votes.Btw wheres this so called "heat" you said you spat?..I don't see any exclamation points all I see is a few personals maybe 1 or 2 thats it.
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upppppp,#2
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Lol u need all that quote bull shit an pretty shit around ya words to make it hit..lil bitch..u are wak..lets have a new battle then ill fukin merk ya ass..U had a day more time...an i saw ya wak verse u sent to my buddy..Lol...u dum fuk that was weak an then u got scared.....lol wow kid your a bitch...its a text battle..an u r suppose to keystlye it in like 30 minutes not 12 hours..
vote = tech
ya lucky i can't vote red.
frankly...how long did u spend writin that shit...i would expect sum much better punches for that. techs punches wasn't the shit but at least they flowed n at least they was off the cuff.
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Originally posted by The Wang
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Originally posted by redragon
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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wow........sounds like a big fat vagina
^ LOL
i think im gonna agree with pak on this one..
he came lot harder..
peep my battle: we need honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91404
i mean teck-nine. i was listening to 2pac thats why i said pak..it was an accident
peep my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91404
multi's to red.
punches to red.
flow to teck
structure to teck......aint feelin tho stretched out lines red
but yeah redragon had those hard clever punches in there, but the whole stretched out line thing doesnt work for me. when i read text it i rap it out in my head and it just wasnt workin, wasnt feelin it. cuz that shit down somehow and it would of been like a rerally really ill verse.
my vote teck
both a yall please hit this up right quick pleaseeeeee
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90336
close i guess.....
flow=tech
punches=red
structure=tie
creativity=red
wordplay=tie
overall=red
even though red probly did type up another verse for this or posted a pre-writ we still have to vote----red came harder i think more witty even though his concepts were played that's how it looks---tech ya verse was aight but u'r punches weren't hard enuff.........
peep and honest vote back here---on my battle with born
thanx
^^^HMMM IVe beat u twice slut stfu........
HAting ass herbs......i beat em an they vote aginst me..wuts rb comin to..damn..if u arent blind ....hit this up..wit a true opinion..
fuka cutastrafag
Upppp #3
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He had no exclamition points so how can that be considered "strong punches"?
Just asking...
3-3 two more votes people
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i'm a hater of stretched lines... really...
mic king deff. had a better structure...
strong punches n personals... fealt it...
but u had a lot of fillers
redragon... SSSSTTTTTRRRRREEEEEEEEETTTTTCCCCCCHHHHEEDDDD
LIINNEEEESSSSSSSSS....lol...
really tho... ur shit would be dope as fuck if u shortened em'
i still give ya the win.. even tho it was strethced...
it flowed wit multis... usually people can't come hard..
wit shit like that but u did... my only advice is u shorten dem lines
red dragon got this he ccmae stronger overall and his punches hit hard.....Vote:RD
plz return da favor honestly
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...147#post905147
Aight good battle guys
opener-pak
punches-red
personals-pak
multis-red
structure-pak
creativity-pak
closer-pak
winner-pak
Hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91471
Yeah this was a pretty good battle..
Pucnhes: Tek
Structure: Tek
Multies: Red
wordplay:Tie
flow:Tie
Overall it was a good battle but my vote goes to Tek, Props to both though...Vote= Tek
Can i get this closed............................................ .................................................. ................i merked this kid hows it 4-44444444444444444444444444444444444
well this forum got some drama
not gonna say much
it was a decent battle
someone checkout my battles
names vs verse112>2-0
names vs angellicalr>0-4
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word...i gotta say Teck got this...no hate....he had a better structure....and personals......most def. structure and flow though.....over half of red's punches didn't seem to hit hard cuz i had to scroll left or right just to read his lines....u had one good one i remember though (the porno line) but Tech got it because he had a much better flow...and structure....if red's barz were shorter i'd have to give it to him...but his punches were weak and practically ineffective due to that fact.....
peace
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