PAK N. HEAT vs Nitemarre

5 line/ 10 bars you know all dat.............

No hate, crew, d/r............................

Spit in the next 25 min after you check in...........

Lez go dawg...............

VOTERS DONT SLEEP, YOU COULD LEARN

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"X" this cat out.....yo....check

Yo Bitch I Flips Clips Quick-I Fuckin 'Hit' Like 'Major Leagers'||
Ya Style is Meeger, Busta 'Picaso' 'Rearange Yer Features'||
Call ME Yo Teacher, Or Da 'Track Coach', Come N 'Get Ran'||
Make U A Patient Fa 'Amputation' Look Like A 'Veggie Tanned'||*
I'm Sendin 'Heat' To Yo 'Bandana' Like 'Mexicans In Da Field'||
It's Real, It Melts A Hole Through ya Pectorial Sheild||*
Spreadin Section 'Shots At Ya Grill' Like A 'Sexual Thrill'||
'Blastin Cavities' Like A 'Dentist Wit 9millimeta' Drills||
I Gotcho Shook Like Im Federal-Come-Get-'Beat'-Like 'Band Drums'||
I'll 'Knock Ya Block Off' Like 'Kids N Legos Havin' Temper Tanrums'||

c'mo boi!!!

*gein green
*chest

For More Of Nitemarres Battles
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=90916

nice spit can't wait to read pak n heat but ya hit this up w/ a vote i will be back to vote when he spits

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90745

yo PAK N.........

Dont tell me you aint gon' battle just cuz a what -Brixton- shited out..........

I aint neva hate on no body............

And It's not like Im one of the newbies, playin around n shit........

So If you aint gon spit............thats filthy, ugh

^^Uve elevated from our last battle..but u still guna gt koed like last time kid..

MAke sure u understand the personals before voting



Ya nitemares make ya pee ya bed.Wut makes u think ya punches been felt//
MY Heats stomache turning.So i no history is due to repeat its self//
Leave my spits defeatin ya help to the fullest cuz ya raps r mediocore//
Got ya sweatin bullets.Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker//
Try an spit a punch i havent said before, This cat got nine lives//
An im takin then all wit metaphors that are hard to find//
Like ya rap history, u dont belong in the game so quit rap//
Im euqipped wit gats,chance of u bein dope is like Micheal jackson actin black//
Why do get stuck wit average Cats that dont belong in this rap game//
U spits cudnt hit right if u switched a lane, ya spits are lame//
Plus its fact if u wanna spit heat u better bruch up fast bitch//
Ya spit longer bars to fit more played metas an disses in//

HMm i came weak...i no ..but its shud be a good battle
different styles
an u had a bunch of gay metas ..No personals

Prewrite/????

uppin for honest votes................

aight...this was a close battle...Nitemarre had some dope wordplay...but it was mostly played...without a doubt it was good...but i've seen it feel me....Pak had some good personals...and punches....but not much wordplay...but what wordplay he did use was pretty dope....

Quote:

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From PAK N. HEAT:
Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker

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that was pretty dope...lol....never seen it before honestly...

here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Nite
Vocab - Nite
Wordplay - Nite (because u had more)
Punches - Pak
Creativity - Pak
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it)
Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly....but i think Pak got it only because he had more ORIGINAL punches...Nitemarre...without a doubt u came good....but ur wordplay was kinda weak....nice battle from the both of u though....good read....no hate....just a vote...

peace
4:20

yo really hard battle to vote on cuz both were completely different.
Pak/game had more punches, good meta, and personals
Nite had better multi's and vocab and little bit better wordplay
Both came decent in this i dont know man it all depends on what u want to hear and personally i like punches and personals so i have to give this to Pak cuz punches and personals are what freestyle battles are all about so vote goes to pak and thanx both of u for the votes but pak u forgot to poll vote so here is the link so i can get my win
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90745

Multis - Nite
Vocab - pak
Wordplay - Nite
Punches - Pak
Creativity - nite
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak
Overall - overall...pak barely got it by the skin on his ass..that michael jackson line qwas sicc

ok nite always hates on the people he battes with and trys to kill them in other battles but ima keep this shit honest iight

flow-nite
punchs-pak aka tech(nite make your shit to him not to a random person)
structur-nite
begginin-tech
end-tech(nite like i sed strait to him, not to some random bitch)

my vote goin to tech

and props to da new name cuz

Keep it real cuz
Peace (\1/)

Quote:

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Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
aight...this was a close battle
BREAKDOWN
Multis - Nite
Vocab - Nite
Wordplay - Nite (because u had more)
Punches - Pak
Creativity - Pak
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it)
Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly

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/\ yeah close battle though i disagree with the others in that you won
opener-tie
closer-nite because pak's says something about long bars though his bars were longer in this battle...plus it was weak
punches-pak...though it was close
personals-pak...good ones
wordplay-nite
creativity-pak
vocab-nite
sustainment-nite overall more consistent
overal-nite but just barely like really really just barely

uppin
on sum more honest voters............................................ ...
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Flow-Nite
Multies-Nite
Structur-Nite
Punchs-PAK
Personals-Nite
Volcab-PAK
Opener-Nite
Finisher-PAK
Wordplay-PAK
Enjoyment-both
Overall-Nite

No hate PAK but i thought Nite Verse was better but it was close real close aiight Peace (v)

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pak n heat=tech nine?.........i shall edit my sig


opener-pak
closer-nite
punches-PAK
personals-PAK
multi's-nite
originality-Pak
complexity-pak
wordplay-nite
enjoyment-pak

not a bad battle....just pak aimed his shit more at nitemarre....
no hate

overall-pakn heat