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check check kinda sleepy but check.......
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.......................grab some water for myself....
iight
checkin...
^^u ain't gotta post tonight if ur tired....Quote:
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like an Off Flow CADIAC ARREST you dead Beat~
my BLAZIN Rhymes are like Cops, you Fled HEAT~
you ain't DROPPIN DOPE, like walkin thru with FEDS-in
-the-Streets~
I KICK mentally off the DOME, as if your HEAD-met-my-
FEET~
my PUNCHES landing HARD like feelin the concreted
PAVEMENT~
yea I'll KNOCK you Down MONEY, like a DOWN PAYMENT~
grab ya hands and Clap ya back, with CLOCKS touchin
ya SPINE~
then Spend you around in a CIRCLE, and made you TURN
back the HANDS of TIME~
dam DAWG{Dog} you been SPAYED, therefore you ain't commin
at me when I Bring Blaze~ and set you a STEP BACK like KIDS
who Sink GRADES~
.....i'm out g'luck!
^^ good shit
but ya shi wud just look unforced if u didnt caps all ya main words
in ya metas an shit
foreal
good shit
but smoka comes wit heat
Don't Get My Punches/Wordplay Or Personals...Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!
U A Transvestite Scarface, Bitch Got 'Play'ed Lines, Well I Just Bought 'Park Place'..
Talkin Shit?? Ur Breath Got A Fart Taste, So Much Silicone Even Her Hearts Fake..
'Pirated Prostitutes' On My Island So I'll Drop The Anchor On This 'Land-Hoe'..
U Got A Retards Punch..Ur Hands Slow, 'Drowned Thousands' With My 'Grand Flows'..
I Raped Ur Mother When She Was Pregnant, So Tonya Was Born With Stab Wounds..
Not Seein A WIN, So U MAC Whom? A Woman Tony Montana? This Drag's Doomed..
I Destroy Pipelines, U Must Wear Bongs, Only Grooms U Attract Are Haircombs..
U Ain't Gettin 'A Head', Claimin U A 'Man'....U Must 'Shave' With That 'Bare Dome'..
I'm Phat Like 'Bonecrusher's Fingers', U Can't Even Fit In The 'Ring' With Me..
Simply, I Spit 'Three Fold' Like A 'Old Fat Mans Gut' Ur Rhymes Are 'Wrinkly'..(old)
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90552
hit it up honestly..ill be back to vote.............
like i said before smoka u gunna drop ya shit or wut
^^i've already voted on that battle...lol....man i can't believe this is bein slept on......
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ay who voted for you joka.....i don't see who explainin a vote!!!....
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good shit by tha way
^^me either....lmao...i think dude that replied forgot to explain when he said he would vote.....i'll PM him...or some shit...
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yea do that.........
thats fucked up !!!
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i did i felt smoka had better punches
but nun the less tonya u came coo an all
but smoka just out did u in everything personals
punches mulites..not alot tho
V- smoka
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90529
^^it dont have a poll voting..so just drop a text vote if u peep
my honest breakdown......sorry for the missunderstanding in loke vs. PAK N HEAT battle tonya......coo
opener-tie...both were corny
closer-tonya
punches-hmmm...didnt like the punches but smoka gets it for not being as corny
personals-smoka
complexity-smoka
multi's-smoka
originality-tie...cuz tonya had played shit, smoka had transvestite shit
enjoyment-smoka
overall-smokajoka666.......no hate..just honest opinion peace
Hard 2 explain but I'll try.
Smoka's verse was tight but I didn't like the way it was structure, I didn't read ( and recited ) very well. but Tonya's way dope all the way. I aint the kinda cat that can give advice 2 ya smoka but you got some ill linez jus structure it better.
Peace
aight..coo... uppin............................................. ............................................
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flow: Tied
Punch: Smoka..just
Metas: Tied
Structure: Smoka
Enjoyment: Smoka
Vote: Smoka
this battle was pretty nice...smoka edged it on punchs...nice verses from both
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90744
hit tht up if you aint already
Voting Tonya here because Joka came a bit played. When battling femcees, it's always the same ole things. Fake boobs, she's a ho, etc. I'll admit, Joka didn't come as played as I've seen other people. Tonya, though, hit hard with funny metas and wordplay. That "money/down payment" line killed this for me. Plus, when you compare the closers, Tonya was hard with wordplay and funny. Joka's about the old, fat man's gut was just, I don't know. Wasn't a great visual to close the battle with. Yuch. So, better punches and wordplay for Tonya. Thanks. Return the favor.Vote here!
^ Disagreed
Flow- Tie
Structure- Definetly SJ... Tonya Stop Usin ~ And Herbish Shit
Punches- SJ
Enjoyed- SJ
Originality- SJ
Vote- SJ
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^^comment was made for tobias...not Token.....aight...let's get the last vote in here...nice battle Tonya.....
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uhhh....uppin #4 or 5...one of those...i'll have to back and check....lol.......................
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OK, HERE'S THA BREAKDOWN:
TONYA
like an Off Flow CADIAC ARREST you dead Beat~
my BLAZIN Rhymes are like Cops, you Fled HEAT~
^^DECENT OPENER
you ain't DROPPIN DOPE, like walkin thru with FEDS-in
-the-Streets~
I KICK mentally off the DOME, as if your HEAD-met-my-
FEET~
^^^DECENT PUNCH
my PUNCHES landing HARD like feelin the concreted
PAVEMENT~
yea I'll KNOCK you Down MONEY, like a DOWN PAYMENT~
^^NICE, BEST PUNCH OF VERSE
grab ya hands and Clap ya back, with CLOCKS touchin
ya SPINE~
then Spend you around in a CIRCLE, and made you TURN
back the HANDS of TIME~
^^EH, THE CLOCK/BACK THING IS PLAYED...
dam DAWG{Dog} you been SPAYED, therefore you ain't commin
at me when I Bring Blaze~ and set you a STEP BACK like KIDS
who Sink GRADES~
^^WEAK CLOSER
and
SMOKA
U A Transvestite Scarface, Bitch Got 'Play'ed Lines, Well I Just Bought 'Park Place'..
Talkin Shit?? Ur Breath Got A Fart Taste, So Much Silicone Even Her Hearts Fake..
^^WEAK OPENER, SECOND LINE OK PUNCH
'Pirated Prostitutes' On My Island So I'll Drop The Anchor On This 'Land-Hoe'..
U Got A Retards Punch..Ur Hands Slow, 'Drowned Thousands' With My 'Grand Flows'..
^^NICE FLOW, OK PUNCH
I Raped Ur Mother When She Was Pregnant, So Tonya Was Born With Stab Wounds..
Not Seein A WIN, So U MAC Whom? A Woman Tony Montana? This Drag's Doomed..
^^OUCH PERSONAL
I Destroy Pipelines, U Must Wear Bongs, Only Grooms U Attract Are Haircombs..
U Ain't Gettin 'A Head', Claimin U A 'Man'....U Must 'Shave' With That 'Bare Dome'..
^^^HA HA NICE PERSONAL
I'm Phat Like 'Bonecrusher's Fingers', U Can't Even Fit In The 'Ring' With Me..
Simply, I Spit 'Three Fold' Like A 'Old Fat Mans Gut' Ur Rhymes Are 'Wrinkly'..(old)
^^1ST LINE WAS GOOD, WEAK CLOSER
Vote goes to : Smoka, egded out Tonya wit better personal punches, but was close...
no beef Tonya, good drop too