8-10 linez max
no d/r,hate,crew,fan votes
smoka will spit wen he can
blind spit..dunt matter who spits 1st
good luck
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8-10 linez max
no d/r,hate,crew,fan votes
smoka will spit wen he can
blind spit..dunt matter who spits 1st
good luck
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chek chek chek chek chek chek chek..............................................
in in in in in in in in in in in .................................................. ...........
word....let's make this good....i'll be droppin before mid. until...i'm out...........................
peace
4:20
Kwik Key....Good Luck Bra
The Jester Always Gets Executed..So Looks Like Ya Times Up,
....Tryin Scramble Outta This Battle,Jus Like A Drowning Pup
Don't It Suck?...That Ya Make Up A Net Rec In Open View,
IJL Got Insufficient Funds...So Looks Like Another Crumblin Crew
But I Knew,I Was The Omen(666)To Seal Ya Final Moment,
Smoka Needs Wins So Bad He Wants Closed Battles Open
Need Clarity To Undestand Ya Ava..Its More Idiotic Than Insane,
..Everthins So False Above Ya Ava,Mite Aswell Put P.Diddy
...As Ya UserName
Coz Your Still Tha Same..Jus A Little More Decrepit,Tonnes More Lame,
See Tonnes Travel In "Brix"...And Smoka HitchHikes In Pain.
Don't Get My Personals Or Wordplay Don't Vote, Every Line Has It...Catch It!!
Face It Ur Wack, Claimin 'Three Little Pigs'?? Well I'm Killin 'Ton's Of 'Brix' (Brixton)..
He Admitted I'm Sick, I Wanna Re-open Battles?? Please U Voted For Me Bitch..
Ur Rhymes Are Borin, Fuck U, At Least I Claim A Crew That Isn't A Subforum..
I Can Tell This Battle Is Goin To Be Sleepy, Just By Readin Ur Verse U Had Me Snorin..
Like 'Fat Coc Addicts' Accidentally 'Sittin On Their Sacs', I'm Makin This Kid Hit 'Flatlines'..
Wack Lines, U Got Bricks (Brix), Well I Claim 'Sticks', I Guess U Can Say This 'Fags' Mine..
Ur Verse? U Started Wack, I'll Rip Open Ur 'Chest Cavity' And Give Ur 'Heart Attacks'..
Put Penises On Ur Rhymes With A Horny And Gay 10 Year Old To Prove Ur Art Is Wack..
Take U From The E.R. (emergency room) In Ur Location, And We See U Love A Man Chest..
Pre-Written?? I'll Defeat Ur Planned Best, Tryin To Swing Punches But Ur Handless..
peace
4:20
uppin #1................................................ ................................................
peace
4:20
Ur Rhymes Are Borin, Fuck U, At Least I Claim A Crew That Isn't A Subforum..
I Can Tell This Battle Is Goin To Be Sleepy, Just By Readin Ur Verse U Had Me Snorin..
Like 'Fat Coc Addicts' Accidentally 'Sittin On Their Sacs', I'm Makin This Kid Hit 'Flatlines'..
Wack Lines, U Got Bricks (Brix), Well I Claim 'Sticks', I Guess U Can Say This 'Fags' Mine
^^illest lines
Smoka took this battle just came harder wit iller personals
Brix came a bit weak seen more heat from him..
v-smoka
The Jester Always Gets Executed..So Looks Like Ya Times Up,
....Tryin Scramble Outta This Battle,Jus Like A Drowning Pup
set up was ok,punch didnt really hit tho 3/10
Don't It Suck?...That Ya Make Up A Net Rec In Open View,
IJL Got Insufficient Funds...So Looks Like Another Crumblin Crew
assumin he's in IJL...got the personal therefore 6.5/10.punch was still blah
But I Knew,I Was The Omen(666)To Seal Ya Final Moment,
Smoka Needs Wins So Bad He Wants Closed Battles Open
slight play off his name/sig..not bad i guess6/10
Need Clarity To Undestand Ya Ava..Its More Idiotic Than Insane,
..Everthins So False Above Ya Ava,Mite Aswell Put P.Diddy
...As Ya UserName
nah..forcing your personals..punches not sticking here...4/10
Coz Your Still Tha Same..Jus A Little More Decrepit,Tonnes More
Lame,
See Tonnes Travel In "Brix"...And Smoka HitchHikes In Pain.
not too bad could been worded better..decent tho 5/10
overall=23.5/50
Face It Ur Wack, Claimin 'Three Little Pigs'?? Well I'm Killin 'Ton's Of 'Brix' (Brixton)..
He Admitted I'm Sick, I Wanna Re-open Battles?? Please U Voted For Me Bitch..
nice...personal.. good wordplay..even tho u fed still nice 7/10
Ur Rhymes Are Borin, Fuck U, At Least I Claim A Crew That Isn't A
Subforum..
I Can Tell This Battle Is Goin To Be Sleepy, Just By Readin Ur Verse U Had Me Snorin..
oooh good set up smoka...the snorin line is kinda played tho so 4/10
Like 'Fat Coc Addicts' Accidentally 'Sittin On Their Sacs', I'm Makin This Kid Hit 'Flatlines'..
Wack Lines, U Got Bricks (Brix), Well I Claim 'Sticks', I Guess U Can Say This 'Fags' Mine..
ok set here...nice play off his name and good punch overall 7/10
Ur Verse? U Started Wack, I'll Rip Open Ur 'Chest Cavity' And Give Ur 'Heart Attacks'..
Put Penises On Ur Rhymes With A Horny And Gay 10 Year Old To Prove Ur Art Is Wack..
first line i liked,second fell off a bit was a little stretched and forced 5.5
Take U From The E.R. (emergency room) In Ur Location, And We See U Love A Man Chest..
Pre-Written?? I'll Defeat Ur Planned Best, Tryin To Swing Punches But Ur Handless..
nice personal..ok set up..liked the multis..finished ok as well 7/10
overall=30.5/50
overall this was not a bad battle brix can do better...a lot of your punches forced in my opinion... and smoka has improved structure and flow since his last battle even though some of your lines are still kinda stretched..shorten your lines a bit
anyway obvious vote goes to smoka for better punches and wordplay
no hate to brix..i know you got skillz dawg...please dont take it personal
poll vote=smoka666
good luck to both...
holla
coo appreciate the votes.....uppin #2................................................ ........
peace
4:20
Finishers
Brix
Coz Your Still Tha Same..Jus A Little More Decrepit,Tonnes More Lame,
See Tonnes Travel In "Brix"...And Smoka HitchHikes In Pain.
Aight Good Bar 8/10
Joker
Take U From The E.R. (emergency room) In Ur Location, And We See U Love A Man Chest..
Pre-Written?? I'll Defeat Ur Planned Best, Tryin To Swing Punches But Ur Handless..
nice Wordplay even thought the handless parts play
8.5/10
Breakdown
Punches: Joker
Multies: Joker
Mettas: Brix
Flow: Tie (Joker A Bit)
Verdict:
This Was A Ill Battle.....U Are Good Both Showed Strenght In U Bars And Were Very Consistant....But joker Is Just A Bit Better.... He Came Up On Top In Allmost Every Faze....
Vote Joka
overall this was a pretty good battle
punches-joker
multies-joker
flow-could go either way
like i said a really good battle but joker came harder with punches and personals and the line about fat cock addicts was funny shit made me laugh out loud. i felt brix could have come harder but wat can u do joker took this one
vote-joker
hit this up w/ an honest vote thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90745
word....one more vote in this piece and it's over.....uppin #3..................................
peace
4:20
omg!!!
can't believe you fed off ma verse...thought you were better than that...DAMN....
oh well it wasnt put in rules..i jus assumed that it was there..
uppin........1st....finish this peeps
^^nah man it ain't like that yo...one line didn't beat ur entire verse....feel me....i only done it with one line...
peace
4:20
yeah but it sounded ill.......it dont matter its only a record cuz...................anyway lets jus get it over...........................pz
uppin #4................................................ ...............................................
peace
4:20
looks like Brix is going to have to up this from here on out unless it's closed by this...but i doubt it...uppin #5........
peace
4:20
uppin.........................................
am not that kinda person bra................i can take a defeat even if i disagree with it........
I have to agree with the overall majority and give this to Smoka. Even though he did feed, he kept it to a bare minimum and stayed original the rest of the way out. Brix took too long to warm up, his first good shot (and it was real good) was the "closed battles" line. But, that was halfway through the verse. Joka hit hard from the begining and kept it going. The only thing I wasn't thrilled about was Joka's closer. Pretty lame. Aside from that, he brought better punches and personals, giving him the win. Please return the favor, thanks. Vote here!