smokajoka666 vs lyricalcontent

post up by midnight


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^^doesn't remember accepting...but fine by me....checkin.....see u at midnight..................................

peace
4:20

hold up 10 bars max 5 min............................................... .................................................. .....

you getiing holes in yo body form this acid that im spittin,
and when you go to post back youll be drastically drippin,
form the 'slurs' of my 'words' to the nine i be grippin,
i will 'devour' you so dont hold 'back' cuz im a *devine*~noobie,
cuz at any 'hour' my 'gat' will come through ur line~of~duty,
you aint a smoka cuz you aint smoke my shit,
this battles aint over till i empty my clip,
yea this guy is a joker lokk at his net record,
61 win ha shits more messed up than any type of ford,
ya time spent writting rapps was smashed by lyricalcontent,
open up the page heres a present of lyrical~torment,
im gonna finish this battle with something that would end you,
i murdered a superior on my fucking debut.....................................


*devine* definition name: A surname (common: 1 in 12500 families; popularity rank in the U.S.: #1522)

Can't Catch Wordplay Or A Personal, Don't Vote, Every Line Has One, Catch It!!

Every 'Shot' This Bitch Attempts Is Missin Me Like 'Blindfolded Surgeons'..
A Loss?? This'll Be Ur First One, U Ain't Got Lyrical Content Ur A Rap Virgin..
Face It Ur Noth-ing, Posting First Is The Only Way U'll Ever Be Above Me..
Ur Good At Suck-ing, U Must Think Ur 'Cool' Cuz U Ain't Bringin 'Much Heat'..
This Kids Rap Career Is Like The 'Universe In Garbage Cans'....A 'Waste Of Space'..
Lyrical's Rhymes Belong In The Finals, When I Say Final... I Mean Last In Place..
Lyrical Content Is Nonsense, I'm Like 'Skitzophrenia', I'll 'Divide Ur Conscience'..
Think U Can Start Ur Career With A 'Blast Off'?? 'NASA' Wouldn't Help Ur 'Launchin'..
U Gotta Struggle To 'Come Up With Shit' Like 'Janitors With Oversized Plungers'..
Claimin U Got A Gun?? Kid I'll Slap U Gimmie That Bitch Now Who's The Hunter..
This Is An Embarassment, Y U Wanted To Battle Me, I Will Always Wonder..
I Got 'Treasures' Like An 'X In Dirt', I'll Smoke U Like Ur My Best Herb(newbie bitch)..
Defeat U..My Pleasure, Ur 14? Man Get Outta Here U Was Barely Able To Regis-ter..

matched ur barz kid....13

peace
4:20

i have to go with smoka, he had everything obviously, and a nice finisher because its tru, even tho im 14, lol


vote goes to smokaa by far


can you guys vote my battle with ALT, u will see it, its gettin avoided when its pretty sick

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lol....good stuff i think lyrical was aight he did have more than i expected...but smoka answered back with a flawless verse and it made lyricals seem basic compared to his..........both were tight but smoka was a lil tighter...................

hey can ya drop an honest vote here.........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90121

aight coo...uppin #1................................................ .......................................

peace
4:20

I think smoka put more in than the other dude but this battle is hard to judge. I can not vote yet but what the hell if I could I would vote for smoka all the way dog.

appreciate ur comments man....nice battle lyrical......uppin #2.............................................

peace
4:20

uppin #3................................................ .................................................

peace
4:20

my 2 cents


lyrical you started off hot then seriously fell of a fuckin mountain
if you would stayed with a rhymes scheem you MIGHTA had a chance

But my vote
Smoka

just honest crituqe ------dont hate

damn...lol....can somebody who is eligible to vote vote!!...lol....gettin sleepy....

peace
4:20

uppin #4................................................ ................................................

peace
4:20

uppin for votes

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ahhhhhh hurry up

uppin #5................................................ ..............................................

peace
4:20

lyrical content you are alright for a newbie.........but smoka is just a lil too elevated for u

flow=lyrical
struture=tie
punches=smoka
personals=smoka
creativity=smoka

my vote=smoka..............no hate

hit this wit a honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=90653

smoka just nailed all his punches......

i felt the flow...good battle from both but 1 person has to win..and thats smoka

BreakDown:
Punches: Smoka
Multies: Smoka
Flow: Tie
Structure: Smoka
Mettas: Smoka
Personals:Smoka

Vote Smoka

^^lmao...damnit man....this battle would be long gone and over if people didn't forget to poll....

peace
4:20

I Polled my vote in..............
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peace
4:20