Aragorn vs. Lyne Bakur

You first
12 bars
30 min
no b/s votes

I lauph at his text, verbally collapsing his chest, expecting too "burn me" when you got smashed by a "jet"!...
you got passed by a vet, watch me spit at you and stop, lines are un-noticed like invisible parking lots!...
this cat barks alot, I check ya verse and I see a coward, your obsessed with BOARDS like NBA rebounders!...
You see power, you wish you were never born, "ka ka koo koo blah porn" << haha i spit bullshit just like Aragorn ....
its a storm, a vet verses a beginner, cuz you bring "nothing to the table" like what bums have for "dinner"...






blah thats it

I'll split you in two.. lip to clit, think you the shit?
Cause you read everything I spit? You don't even exist!
I hold back, but give enough to leave my enemies crushed..
I'll fold you up, nose to butt, break your bones in the rush
Your a comedian but I'm a king i kill without trace
Imagine Rosie O'Donnell telling jokes to stop Leatherface!
I laughed... but I still got to slit you in half
Get your weight up before you try to get in my class.

open for voting, someone please come and end this!............................................. ..................................................

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Uppin to get some votes .................................................. ............
Aragorn versus Lynn Bakur............................................. .............

uppin again man,
can we get some gosh darn votes up in this hizouze my nizzels foshigidale okie dokie!!!

uhhh

flow=aragorn
punches=lyne
structure=aragorn
creativity=lyne
wordplay=lyne
overall=lyne

lyne even with the wack structure took this cuz he had punches--aragorn's were weak.

I give it to Aragorn

punches=lyne
flow=aragorn
structure=aragorn
creativity=aragorn
wordplay=lyne
overall=aragorn

aragorn took this battle

flow=lyne
puncheslyne
structure=aragorn
creativity=aragorn
overall=aragorn

i took time to vote now u should ,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89368

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89707

this is a close battle, shoot the honest vote so we can move on to bigger and better things
uppin uppin uppin
vote on this shit too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90018

I been doing some major voting, I would appreciate, a little bit of the same, I need to close these battle, there's other people to merk out here.

Uppin for votes............................................. .............................
Aragorn vs lynn Baker............................................. .........................
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punches=lyne
flow=aragorn
structure=aragorn
creativity=aragorn
wordplay=lyne
overall=aragorn

yo return tha honest voteplz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90316

upppinnng fforrro vvvotteesss
Aragorn versus Lyne Bakur
Get your votes in now!
VOte voteo ovteov te4oev ot4et voteo

Vote For My Battle After This Feedback Lyne Structure Was Wierd And I Didn't Like Him Aragorn Was Wack Also But I Liked His Verse Better
Vote=Ara

uppinfor votes on lyne vs aragorn
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uppin for votes again
Aragorn versus Lyne Bakur
Post a link and I'll hit your thread
Don't be mad though I vote honestly.
Vote vote vote vote vote vote

I just need a couple votes to get this shit off of my back, uppin for honest votes. Let's get this shit over with so I can eat one of you lil children.

SHIT I SAW LYNES VERSE AND IT WAS STRETCHED...I THOUGHT IT'D BE WAK BUT IT WAS PRETTY ILL.......THE FIRST LINE WAS PRETTY SIK
BUT AFTER THAT YA DINT CONVINCE ME..DUE TO THE FACT I HAD TO FIND A FLOW INSTEAD OF THEIR ALREADY BEING ONE
LYNE HAD THE HARDEST PUNCH IN THE BATTLE BUT ARAGORN WAS CONSISTENT ALL THE WAY THROUGH
VOTE=ARAGORN.....

I think aragorn took this, first guy was actually ok but he had poor structure and his concepts were a litytle played in my opinion, not a bad battle though, i just think Ara edged it with his concept / punches, his verse was a lot more fresh.

Vote - Aragorn

Lyne last line was hot but Aragorn barely won
punches-Lyne
structure-Aragorn
flow-Aragorn
creativity-Lyne

my vote goes to Aragorn

:banghead:
End this battle Now!!!!!
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:flipoff:

Last vote where you at?
:banghead:
I need another battle.
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I knew I shouldn't have battled this bitch
:noob:

I think Lyne took this... he just had sick punchlines... and it flowed well with the beat i was listening too... I cant vote right now though so it dont really matter.

no hate votes. ^^^^^^
Don't be a bitch cause I'm :hump: you in our battle.
This is a clear and blatant merking. Someone who can vote please

I got 100 posts now so Im just gone post my vote... My reasoning is above ... I think Lyne definetly got this one.

Hey yo I can't vote but I'd gove this to Aragorn jus barely

Punches=lyne
Flow=aragorn
Structure=aragorn
Creativity=aragorn
Wordplay=lyne
Winner=aragorn

Check this out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91471

opener:Tie
closer:Lyne
wordplay:Tie
structure:Aragorn
punches:Lyne
overall:Lyne

lyne you need to work on your strcture, aragorn if yuor wordplay was better your punches might of hit harder and you might of took this.

aiight y'all peace
no hate

and aragorn

some day, maybe?? just pm me!!

flow- aragorn
punches- lynn
structure-aragorn
creativity- aragorn
wordplay- lynn

overall- aragorn

HIT THIS UP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=aguhny

The "Leatherface" line killed it for me.

Lyne had the one good personal in the opener...

After that, mostly played ideas I've seen before...

And I've seen that "brought to the table" line alot lately...

Aragorn flowed a bit better and came more originally...

That is all I have ta say.

Peace