you spit
I spit
no biting
no b/s votes
30 min
12 lines/bars same thing to me.
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you spit
I spit
no biting
no b/s votes
30 min
12 lines/bars same thing to me.
never mind, it's obvious you got a lot going on right now. Get at me when you got time to meet death. I ain't trying to win on no dq'
Like a fatal episiotomy* I’ll slash ya like a pussy switch to choke u breathless at my mercy..
Ur rhymes are a blasphemy, weak like muscular dystrophy, confined to ur chair and cant break free//(1)
Dragon spittin flames coursin thru ur veins electrified more powerful.. I am the east coast hurricane…
‘Only if u fine’* such a shame, must be insane… like a benched bball player, u really have no game//(2)
Chaotic yet seductive inspiration I see u dotted with perspiration sweatin the lyrical judgment of ur litigation*...
Aragorn* I’ll subtract u to negation, u have the jury in suspense with frustration, u get 24 hours to drop*?…whats the fuckin hesitation?//(3)
Pumped urself up harder than a vacuum on a dick, palms burnin red from jackin it, say u have a girl? Well Rightie is the only play u git..
Scandalous like Mike Tyson’s public fits, ur intellect duller than his tooths metal glint, must be ur idol..like the ear harder than the sig line u bit*//(4)
Jus like a gun my pen smokes, so close ur dictionary and ur book of jokes, “spit swallow spit?*” suck on this get high from my verbal toke..
The goddess has spoke n(spoken) I suggest u get some dick ridin votes, cuz when u drop ur piece like soap, ur gay ass might get poked* //(5)
I don't know how many bars that was but eh, you got 7 posts, you're obviously a rookie. Here goes your life
yo ararogn...hit up this battle and drop ya vote....
and i'll be back to hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...403#post887403
nice battle by the way, no hate
Big words, multi rhymes and stretched out sentences
Either your an herb, you can't rhyme, or just got into this
Your comedic... a chick with spit, but too conceited
You think if you just rap forever Aragorn is defeated?
I'll put you in your proper place woman! stay in the sack
Face down, ass up, or put your face in my lap
You fucking right i'll stick with rightie, seen your ass in a nightie
All the hair and bumps everywhere is very unsightly!
Hate to be you... I'd call Alpo to see what to feed you
You go to jail, the toughest bitches turn they tail when they see you!
Take a lesson from the King, structure's big on this scene
Them run on raps will keep you back learn to sequence your strings.
Looking for some votes.. vote up... my win if yall don't mind....lets go...Lets get this party started....
let me ask this yo?/how long time it takes you to write that flow/
a year 2 or 3 maybe you get killed fuckin with a gee like me /
in this battle field i'll make you bleed /cos here mins easy blow off/and your head is roast/while am gonne give a toast /
i rhyme and you cry thats how it goes / your brain is lost/
since my shit is post/you 've been seing ghosts /i win/
and just got in cos my rhyms are mean so dont scream/
cos this is maniacktim
Don't Freepost!!!!!!!!!!!
Find another place for that whack shit!
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outkast we the beeeeeeeest fagggggggggots !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
where is the king i thing he lost his throne /completle fagot since he is born/
his mind is like an empty stone /all along play it on your own /
if you got balls/leave the dictionary /cos am your enemy / your shit is tragedy/remember this i got the allergy bout fake gee/
with my thug theory i release my poetry/and send you to the gay cemetary /
yo this maniacktim new on the web make the people sweat
new online and already flowing with rhyme
got love play like a thug not like a smug
hei faggot you dont have the dictionary so you scared cos you cant make it/ohh maaaaan no doooggbut is okk/ keep on tryin cos your homis're dyin when i,m rhymin/
hei cock sucker it took you to long without to say a word /
you call this a warrrrrr ?did you forget you're in the maniacktim battle zone/ so get it on /
this is for aragon with only one tiny ball
why you dont reply what you not alive ?faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot faggot
hei no escape cos i hate the one that are fake
outkast wit maniackacts is simly a test
hei flowida that shit wass gooood ( fuck faggot punk)
whaaat you need --VOTE UP -- no worry am a vote up only after i vomit on your mouth hahahahahahahaha we fuckin wit everybody hahahahahahaha motherfuckarz lets playyyy
outkast maniackacts last
ok we show looove where is the hug /be calm we just playing kids /but thats the way of makin hits/
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hei jego whats up lets have fun this outkast maniacktim are u in play it if u know what i mean
hei where you from?
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flow=aragorn
punches=aragorn
structure=aragorn
creativity=folk
wrdplay=folk
overall=aragorn
ara got this with harer punches more personals tried to be witty but really wasn't fold ya needa change up ya structure and maybe ya shit might look betta cuz ya do fgots sum wrdplay work on the punches too---
ya'll peep and vote honest on my battle with technician
in the sig---thanx
yoo yoo this is outkast/ maniaktim and you'll get bast
hei cutastraphe what u'r castrate i just left your nerves at play
first listen to what i say/ put your tities away and better cut down your veins /cos my rhyms is mad confussion so hypnotimns /so they can cos you an illusion /my mission is to diffuse your brain /am put you in the position to change your name /cuz am an mc that never fail when i put my thug fate/
uppiinnn need votes on this battle............................................ ..................................Aragorn versus Folk/////////// Need votes//////////////////////////////// vote/////////////////////////////////
uppin for votes. let's get this battle closed.........
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argon got this on punches flow n structure dat symple hit dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90100 ..............pz
ara took this just wiv beta structure n flow, punches needed by both n elevation too but ok battle,
vote-ara
can you vote on my battle wiv ecco dawg!
upping for votes............................................. .............................
Aragorn versus Folk.............................................. .....................................
upping for votes folks....
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vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote voteo voete vetoveot
word...agree with everyone else man....Aragorn had better punches in this....and ur right...ur verse in this battle is different from ur one with Origin.....but there's nothing u can do man....they will think ur lieing....but....Aragorn got this with better structure, flow, punches, and vocabulary....
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Can I get a vote to close out this merking?
Let's vote up on this shit.
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aragorn jus owned this battle from
start to finish
flow,punches etc
vote=aragorn
MAKE SURE YA HIT UP MA BATTLES IN MA SIG....PLZ