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this is a new thread from are other battle so im jus gonna post my verse into ere so thats why its up quik!
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this is a new thread from are other battle so im jus gonna post my verse into ere so thats why its up quik!
L~I~S~T~E~N,
blowin bubbles wiv gum to spit "fresh", first time u spittin wivout cum//
suckin dicks off herbs so they let u kick them 2 the curb//
makin no sense, hense only droppin constinants where are the verbs//
nerves disrupted, curupted, tempted fate now my lyrical volanoes just erupted//
5 wins? burst lip cos im totally "gop smacked", that this guys record is an actual fact//
pack ur bags n evacuate, cos jus like in bed u ain't spittin, u can't ejaculate//
elevate n come back wiv experience, cos the current differences between us go way past appearances//
like hittin u in a lorry n leavin u 4 dead, mislead the police by reversin back, 2 muddle up the wheel tred//
said i'd merk you, said i'd hurt you, jus backin up my predictions//
you never gonna elevate ecco its like u got height restrictions////
Jus waitin on eccos verse now!
i'll leave u crawlin, dyin in the street//
runnin to the freezer cryin cos u feelin my heat//
The methods of my motivation is completely subjective//
My perception is completely parallel to perspective//
so who the fuk said that you can rap//
probably ur mam in her "im ur no1 fan" cap
you think u can take me dawg...you'll feel my wrath//
there aint no point in tryin..it's like givin a fish a bath//
i saw you swallowing sperm in the back streets of new york//
then i witnessed the STD develop and kill you on the sidewalk//
i gona tie you upside down and staple your eyelids to your foot//
then slash your ass with a michetti and smere aids in your cut//
i'll leave u crawlin, dyin in the street//
runnin to the freezer cryin cos u feelin my heat//
The methods of my motivation is completely subjective//
My perception is completely parallel to perspective//
RECYCLIN
u've used this in ur battle wiv ab'sis, but woteva
uppin!
actually that whole verse is RECYCLED!
uppin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
i no dick ed the battle neva got finnished u tit............................................... ..........................
the battle was DQ'd so i can use again plus most of it isnt u dick ed...........................................
chill out im not bothered either way! fuck me man!
rite votes now plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. .......................
opener: ecco
closer: ecco
punches: dw
flow: ecco
structure: ecco
yo ecco took this one. not too hard on either side though....lackin punches in both verses....i couldnt really feel the structure of Ds verse so that kinda did it for me.
my vote: ecco
yall hit this up please wit an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89496
Win for DW...
Why?
Well, neither verse was jaw-dropping, but DW held down some nice battle multi's...
ECCO had some, but they were all self prop...
No disses.
Then, he fucked up tha personal about New York...
Ya opponent's from England. Bad personal.
"so who the fuk said that you can rap//
probably ur mam in her "im ur no1 fan" cap
you think u can take me dawg...you'll feel my wrath//
there aint no point in tryin..it's like givin a fish a bath//"
That was the best part of ya verse and the only part that wasn't whack.
Sorry.
DW with the punches, metas, multi's, and flow...
Peace
1-1
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. ................
I have to agree with Born to Kill.... but this was close, both have things to work on, but good emcees no doubt. DW had the punches, Ecco you focused too much on ya self this time. Fuck it though, you got a good record, don't sweat it
vote = DW
peace
yall hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=88886
2-1 uppinnn........................................... ....hey dont 4 get its 2-0 in all the battles we have had so farr.............................................. ..
b2k....i wasnt feeling the battle either...probs coz youz to are boys and shit...
breakdown=
punches=ecco
metas=ecco..only jus..
sustainment=dw..every line
multis=....
enjoyment=.....
vocab=dw
persoanls=dw
overall=ecco...wasnt gonna giv it you at 1st coz ya recycled but you did have harder punches..pz
you live near bolton dont you...i live in middleton...
on the way to moston....manchester love...pz
MAKE SURE YA HIT UP THE FIRST BATTLE IN MA SIG.PZ
goin wit DW cuz he got u wit punchs but E C C O came hard also.
though DW opener was wack it got better, so muh overall vote is DW.
I think ecco got this better flow vocab was a tie open and close was ecco
fav line
the fish one by ecco
jeeeeZZZZZZZ this is close this shit i no it wasnt the best shit from either of us cuz we boys but it dont matter uppin..........
girth_"your so big"
ecco your mailbox is full...
thats ma msn im name....
jus im me and dont forget to hit#
the battle up in ma sig...pz
Aight. Im gonna hafta say even though tha recyclin part upseted me, U had better punches and shit. DW, I was feelin ur shit but sum of them didnt rhyme on tha ends and shit. But y'all both had decent verses. Honest Opinion... Honest Vote...
VOTE: E C C O
Ay Even though echo voted against me I have to say he won
because no offence to DW but he didn't over do his vocab It was understandable knowable it flowed better and I really felt the part about smearing aids in your cut
So my vote goes to ECCO
allright 4-3 uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. ....................
alrite battle, good shit:
BREAKDOWN:
flow;e c co
structure;e c co
personals;dw
punches;dw
good battle and dw gets the win cos of his clever punches and wordplay
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Hit this up................need some votes to be cast
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez
Thanx
DW... You Should Know Not To Use Sex Punches By Now...
E C C O... You Need More Complexity...
Mutlis- Neither
Metas- E C C O
Wordplay- ECCO
Flow- ECCO
Punces-DW (Even With Played Punches)
Personals- DW (Not Many)
Overall- Ecco
Vote- E C C O
Not Very Good Battle... But Close
Keep Elevatin...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89689