RULES
15-20 lines
keystyle
blind battle
15 min
no hate votes
all explaind votes
only free post if vote
iight, yo dawg u checkin in
Printable View
RULES
15-20 lines
keystyle
blind battle
15 min
no hate votes
all explaind votes
only free post if vote
iight, yo dawg u checkin in
check check..mic check 1 2...checking in....PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.ch eckin in yall.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.~~~~~~~~~
this long-lastin flow is gonna rip-your-life-apart/
take away the clear thoughts and set-you-in-the-dark/
never know whats commin, from up-down, all-around/
up-town, to knock u the fuck-down/
this a showdown, at midnight... you get blown down/
lookin both ways and still layin full-down/
bullet proof vest, against, the foulest/
lyrical fiend, rippin apart your fuckin-soul/
grabbin a fork and knife, eatin at you-whole/
your blown - from this god damn volcabulary switch/
that hit u harder then wene i fucked your bitch/
their must be a glitch, cuz sumthin wronge with your text/
either cop n paste fucked - or your rymein's vexet/
your reps next, like the jamie kennidy show-/
Bitch u been Xet/
this kid's alias is yaz, I don't know what it means
known as the legend?, sucka, come again please?
i know you didn't call yourself a legend, coming from the brooke
actn like you dodgn bullets, look again you been took
like a prostitute virgin, got everyone chasing you on the block
but chill dawg, they ain't bout to shoot you with a glock
cause a round's worth more than that, more than your life
sike, dike, i'm kiddn, using my lyrical glock tonight
no dawg, no one wants to know about you
you been used and displayed, then annihilated like a Jew
boo hoo, you crying cause you think deserve more love than this
don't get it twisted, we don't show love to those who love dick
sick, bitch, I didn't ask for anything get off your knees,
you just wanting to, dying, trying to please
well forget it dawg, I can't even vote in this thread
and if I could, you think I"d vote if you gave me head?
you're a sick mother fucker, and a cheating one at that
no love for you, you here, then gone, like the sound of a gat
wow emough gats.... shit u could blow me away lol........ IIGHT uppin fo votes.....................~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
begining...yaz
closin...poetic
flow...poetic
punches... both
wordplay...yaz
overal... poetic
nice battle u 2
peace out
liked the battle
breakdown=
punches=poetic
sustainment=poetic
metas=poetic
flow=both
structure=poetic
creativity=yaz
multis=yaz
overall=poetic
damn im bein murderd........................................~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~,,,,,,,,,,,,~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~..... .................................
yaz tomorrow is the day i rout away.. deseased i am! but love goes on! u will be remembered,in the future,if i live i send love... love is strong... but love keeps on! i want u to know i love u soo.. foreva :D...................................I LOVE U YAZ
ROXAY UR NOT GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
lol
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
^^^????????? Someone's got an admirerer....how cute...haha..no hate bro, but I was wondering what the heck this is....PEACE
no hard punches but poetic made senseQuote:
Originally posted by -Brixton-
weak battle
breakdown=
punches=poetic
sustainment=poetic
metas=poetic
flow=both
structure=poetic
creativity=yaz
multis=yaz
overall=poetic
weak personals if any but poetic had some
no creativity from both sides mostly played
overal i got to say poetic won this
IM GONNA DIE :'( AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
IM GONNA DIE.. SHAYD :'(
shit im bein murderd........................................... .................................................. ...
ohk i aint gonna freepost anymore........................
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
:P
:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(:'( :'( :'( :'(
alright...i hope all this freeposting is done....and what the heck is up with it? roxay, if you do die....well...sucks to be you....uppin (2).....couple more votes
alright alright.....uppin this for the 3rd time....lets get some feedback and tell us what you thought about this.....i thought it was pretty good for a noob battle....post a link and i'll hit that up too...PEACE
uppin (4).....come on ya'll...we get three votes and then you quit...let's go....vote and drop a link....peace
Aight.... 1st off... y'all both had a decent verse. I'll give ya that. But yaz sum of ur barz were kinda off and didnt rhyme. But thats all good. Now for poetic.... u did tha same thing but ur punches landed harder. Tha flow was a bit better and u had nice meta's and wordlpay. Honest Opinion and Vote.
VOTE: POETICTENDENCEEZ
punches=poet
consistency=poet
original=no1
metas=no1
setup=poet
overall=poet he came nicer even though it wasn't that hot no personals or nuttin but he came nicer hollaz