aight 25-30 lines max.
Deton@e spits first.
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aight 25-30 lines max.
Deton@e spits first.
I delimited the lines with slash ,i think they won't fit on one line what was written for 1 line but your a vet , destroy me if you can.
OK ,it starts like this
I'll show you my gun do just to fuck your credo /
may ya ass shake i'm impossible to subdue /
I have battles to earn ,your house to burn
let it burn 'till my coffee get's cold in the coffee urn /
Listen how i jabber while i polish ya face with a abrader /
the acoustic power makes ya acoustic nerve /
feel like it has been touched with the sharpest eraser /
that's for every battle you won and didn't deserve /
From now on i'll stop the wager and show you who's the ravager /
mortgage ya mother ass for grass or my car's gas /
i'm not racist but i often feed hores with death camas /
After this battle you'll be in such a critical situation /
that you'll need a neck & nose ablation /
I'm a exodontist but to extract your teeth i use a beer mug /
you're praying to God ... listen he does not give a fuck /
That horny mumy it's your saint bitch mumy who lives on the streets of the D /
and likes to suck my dick when i pee *WEE*/
I'm dat man from the corner of the street /
who stay blazed on your mother's cunt , make her hunt boong's to bonk /
You're not dependent of drugs , you're dependent of my dick /
you feel high cuz when i ejaculate you feel like being hit with a brick /
I smell like socks,I suck,im totally FUCKED UP,BUT i like to fuck a lot /
and i fuck you and ya whole block,bad luck i fuck fake g's wit a glock /
Bullet's thru ya ass , your luck if you smoked crack /
can't feel the pain but you fall on da floor,your a bandmole da biggest hore i ever saw /
i'm not blind,but sometimes when i smoke i can't see , so ...
sometimes i smack people i do now *WOW so dat's how!*/
i'll kill and burry you in such a hurry that you ain't gona have time to say sorry/
Yeah! you're a vet , hundreds of posts for a few rhimes and that's it /
if you put them altogether you can't even make a skit /
yo that shit is pretty tight..... holla at me once this battle is done aightQuote:
Originally posted by DetON@e
I delimited the lines with slash ,i think they won't fit on one line what was written for 1 line but your a vet , destroy me if you can.
OK ,it starts like this
I'll show you my gun do just to fuck your credo /
may ya ass shake i'm impossible to subdue /
I have battles to earn ,your house to burn
let it burn 'till my coffee get's cold in the coffee urn /
Listen how i jabber while i polish ya face with a abrader /
the acoustic power makes ya acoustic nerve /
feel like it has been touched with the sharpest eraser /
that's for every battle you won and didn't deserve /
From now on i'll stop the wager and show you who's the ravager /
mortgage ya mother ass for grass or my car's gas /
i'm not racist but i often feed hores with death camas /
After this battle you'll be in such a critical situation /
that you'll need a neck & nose ablation /
I'm a exodontist but to extract your teeth i use a beer mug /
you're praying to God ... listen he does not give a fuck /
That horny mumy it's your saint bitch mumy who lives on the streets of the D /
and likes to suck my dick when i pee *WEE*/
I'm dat man from the corner of the street /
who stay blazed on your mother's cunt , make her hunt boong's to bonk /
You're not dependent of drugs , you're dependent of my dick /
you feel high cuz when i ejaculate you feel like being hit with a brick /
I smell like socks,I suck,im totally FUCKED UP,BUT i like to fuck a lot /
and i fuck you and ya whole block,bad luck i fuck fake g's wit a glock /
Bullet's thru ya ass , your luck if you smoked crack /
can't feel the pain but you fall on da floor,your a bandmole da biggest hore i ever saw /
i'm not blind,but sometimes when i smoke i can't see , so ...
sometimes i smack people i do now *WOW so dat's how!*/
i'll kill and burry you in such a hurry that you ain't gona have time to say sorry/
Yeah! you're a vet , hundreds of posts for a few rhimes and that's it /
if you put them altogether you can't even make a skit /
aight i guess its on....
-ima send this nigga back to grade school like recess and packed lunches.
- this nigga beggin to battle the king but his rhymes dont even pack punches.
-Out of all the bitch niggas in RB this is the nigga we hate the most.
- Grittin like he hard but I got more wins than he got posts.
- You droppin the maximum lines just tryna beat me. You couldnt win with 2 more.
- Talk bout guns but the only berettas you got is a 2 door.
- I stay poppin like a jack in the box, with a nina, a nine a glock...
- Bustin down on this nigga cuz hes far from the top.
- This nigga dont wanna battle me, he adores me.
- I didnt wanna bring my hard shit so my sister wrote this for me.
- Beat me? Good luck for real. This nigga is bitch made.
- He couldnt spit sick if he was Daffy Duck with aids.
- This niggas sendin PMs askin me to teach him how to drop dope rhymes.
- You couldnt beat me in a battle if i wrote the verse both times.
- Ima blaze you myself you dont quit spittin about caps that you DONT peel.
- Leave the guns alone, youll only end up blazin yourself for real.
- This nigga is talkin greasy, but he aint nice.
- Spittin bout guns that he aint never seen in his life.
- You think your rhymes are fire but ya shit is frozen.
- You aint a man. All you is is a bitch in mens clothin.
- Spittin that shit and sayin youre hard is contradictory.
-I didnt even read your rhyme and I raised my hand in victory.
- Congrats on winnin "Bitch Nigga of the Millenium"
- I Dont wanna waste my lines on u so I'll just spit the minimum
Any one wanna battle I'm takin all chalengers/
its bout to bloody like the chainsaw massacre/
Truth is what i spit/
I aint takin no shit/
I'm bout to start some shit but i aint endin quick/
I'm Dre Nasty/
That boy from the ville but I'm still scraight classy/
I'll put a motherfuckin glock to ya throat then blast it/
I'm not a school boy but i aint no fool/
I'm a that old school teacher who don't play by the rules/
I aint tryin to be but all yall niggaz suck/
I'm only 14 and i can't be struck/
Whoeva want some they can come and get it/
I bust a good rhyme evrytime i spit it/
I might not be big/
and I might not be pac/
I'm but im a keep goin till i reach the top/
That line beat him. De, learn to throw a punch.Quote:
Originally posted by SeeKret
aight i guess its on....
-ima send this nigga back to grade school like recess and packed lunches.
- this nigga beggin to battle the king but his rhymes dont even pack punches.
Vote, Seekret
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .............................................
Seekret fo disses,punches,flow,vocab,structure,fuck it he had everything........
Vote:seekret
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thanx for the text vote....uppin on this bitch............................................. ...........
one sided battle
punches=sekret
sustainment=sekret
metas=secret...nice
flow=sekret
overall=sekret
nice punches sekret keep it goin
d..learn from this battle coz you dint bring nuttin to it....pz
why battle a noob? it's straight tho....this line took the whole battle...sekret murdad the kid...keep elavatn tho..
Out of all the bitch niggas in RB this is the nigga we hate the most.
Grittin like he hard but I got more wins than he got posts.
hit up my stuff...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89291
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88767
this was really really one sidedQuote:
Originally posted by -Brixton-
punches=sekret
sustainment=sekret
metas=secret...nice
flow=sekret
overall=sekret
punches-sek
personals-sek
wordplay-sek
overal-sek
Tell me what's a punch line?
I'm not english , somebody could tell me what's that?
And there are 2 votes only for somebody to win?
i don't even wanna bring my hard shit so my sister wrote this for me...that sealed it right there kna mean!
the opener was hot the closer was aight
the metha's was there and da punches were definitely there kna mean so my vote goes to seekret
uppin on this so i can finish it................................................ .................................................. ....................................
uppin...and remember if u vote on this drop a link and ill get back at u. and im sure u all want votes for ur shits.....
i really really want to finish this badly....can we get some more votes so i can kill this off????????????????????????
FUCKIN DOPE SPIT SEEKRET. i felt that shit the whole way through dawg.....tight at punches hittin hard consisitently...an excellent solid verse. damn. that was good haha
other fool......good start ur new....try to make sure ya shit flows well and stays in a good rythm otherwise fools wont be able to feel it when readin it. and more punches dawg. like seek said in his verse. nice try though fa real.
vote: Seekret
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89496
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin. vote...drop a link and you get a vote. its that simple
please i just need 2 more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !1
Vote Seekret....
Btter verse... plain and simple...
Dont ask for a breakdown with me...
I'm too busy....
opener:seekret
closer:Tie
wordplay:seekret
structure:tie
punches:seekret
overall:seekret
seekret took this one pretty easily, and deton, u need to elevate, this was probs the longest battle ever.
aaiight
peace
plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!