yo 5-8 line
no hate votes
drop before 30 min or KO
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yo 5-8 line
no hate votes
drop before 30 min or KO
dawg er older than me... u should be a marksmen at-this//
hittin me at the soul... but u just shootin misses//
lyrical bullets? man i must be werein a lyricist vest//
all your punchs just bouce off and hit u back in the chest//
my lyrical context worse then the dark night//
never know whats commin, and no sign of light//
Shayd dawg thinkin your an explosive hand gernade//
bitch il pull er pin, throw u away and watch the explotion fade//
Iight er turn dawg... spit er shit
he came back , it looks like he wants to be killed again//
u aint no true mc... whenver u see me u take out a notepad and pen//
these lyrics will put u through a fit//
there is no duckin... my punchlines always hit//
when i win , dont be mad//
cause this is a time for u to take out ur pen and notepad//
aight yall were lookin for some votes :)....
thanks yall.....
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lol i just noticed that...
mine sucks ass......................
...............lol...................
hmm good battle
nun the less YAZ took it better punches an flowseemed like he put more time into it..an hes not as newbie as u
V-YAZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89148
^^^^^^^^MME AN BIDDY ITS BEEF CENTRAL>PEEP YAZ AN VOTE FAIrly.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
aight kool..............
cmon yall we need some votes...
i'll check out ur battle and post some comments if u want
lol.. i actually though shay d's verse was pretty funny. neither one of you had any punches, metties, multies, similies.. or any of that.. just lyrics. and i thought yaz's lyrics were just front lines material, not too bad.. but shay d's was funny. vote= shay d.
aight kool... thanks man........................
any more votes yall.............keep em comin!!!!!
..............................lol................. ....................j/p.............................................
yo.. i just saw you one line vote on a battle.. u must explain votes... you need to go read the rules thread. its stickied at the top of this forum. read all of them - you must follow them.
who me???? or yaz??????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89148
PEEP FEEBLE
SUMONE POLLED IT WRONg
or peep ya Pms or both my problems Cuz in one biiddy HATE VOTED AN one line voted say gAy shit
an aginst biddy sumone wrongly polled the vote wrong...
thanks
yall keep the votes comin!.......................
i'll go drop some comments for u if ya want me to.............
thanks yall
uppin fo votes yallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllll commmmmm on hit this polllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll uppppppppppppppppppppp
gotta hate the 100 thing............................................. .................................................. .........................
cumon uppin fo votes peeps............................................. ..........................................
L's breakdown.
punches - yaz (the few ones he had)
flow - yaz
personals - none
creativity - tie (both didnt show much)
multies - none
structure - tie
Pretty weak battle but there's not much you can do in 5-8 lines.
My vote goes to Yaz
lol ya well i wannid to make this a quick one, can't spit to well, got kiked out my (fake) parentz house today, so im kinda chillin at my friends house... not a good place to think shit ova but it somewhere to go
tthis was a weak battle.. i wasnt feelin either of the verses really... but yaz took this w/ a overall better flow n punches... shayd's was kinda elementary if u ask me... nothing really stood out to me in either tho.
vote=yaz
hit this up peeepz:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...034#post880034
lol thanx but like Lee sed it hard to do shit in 5-8 lines............................... but non the less thanx fo the vote dawg
cmon yall keep the votes coming :).................
thanks to yall who voted :)....................
(the one) lol..............................j/p dawg................................
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lol.................................wtf........... ..................................................
cmon yall were looking for some votes :)................................................ ............
cmon yall were lookin for alot of votes................................. :) :)
thanks yall........
cmon yalll were lookin for more votes :).......
drop ur battle url thing here... i'll post a comment or 2....
aight thanks yall
cmon ppppl we neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................... ... thanks
cmon yall................we..............neeed........m ore........votes.................................. ..
Flow: Yaz
Punchs: Neither
Metas: Neither
Structure: Yaz
Enjoyment: Tie..Shay's was funny
Vote: Yaz
yaz was a lil less complex although both were lackin punchs n metas..keep elevatin tho
aight kool.............................................. ..... thanks for votin man.... holla at me if u need anymore votes ne where........
yall keep them votes comin!!
give it to yaz simply cuz he had better flow...shay-d verse i wusent feelin it much
HIT THIS BTTLE UP AND VOTE...
[url]http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=89202[.url]
aight thanks for the votes ppl..... *cough* fuckers ... j/k lol..........
thanks...............
i expolained that you need to read the rules, and you still broke them by upping way over 5 times. you now lose. READ THE RULES.Quote:
Originally posted by Feeble Minded
yo.. i just saw you one line vote on a battle.. u must explain votes... you need to go read the rules thread. its stickied at the top of this forum. read all of them - you must follow them.