Syted VS. melodramah

DA RULES


8 Lines....

Spit Within The Hour....

Good Luck....

with syted on their rep-list we kno whos the weaker of the sexes/
my flows hard like head protectors n lethal like death row injectors/
read my lines , they chillin ya spine battlin u feelin like im commitin a crime/
im steady flowin till the end, ur verse is wack, "reset form" then re-send/
u rappin's a contradiction n of no value, like "money aint a thang" by that "cash crew"/
quit ur career, theres no future for u here, but,maybe u could be an example for lil rappin kids everywhere/
i dont need no good wishes, no hard disses, i can kill u w/ deadly kisses/
this girl stays vicious, back off n re-think this, next to me youll always come up short like grown midgets/

aaaah i came mad weak..... blocked llike a muuuuuufuckaa... o well.. drop homey..................................

My Lyrics Run This Track And Lap You, They Came Out Kickin From The ~Gate When They Start~ I'm Pushin Your Skull Down To Ya Chest So When You Speak, Your Words Come ~Straight From Ya Heart~

I'll Shatter Eveyrthin Includin Ya 'Spline' I Stick Out And 'Seen' In Words Like A ~Yellow Comma~
I Don't Get It, Your 'Quiet To Cause A Scene' Is That What You 'Mean' By ~Melodramah?~ (His NAme...Mellow Dramha)


I Come Up With Curious And Clever Spits, Its Like ~Wonder Ran Me~
Your Up Proud With Me Above You And My Feet On Your Shoulders, Now Do You ~Understand Me?~

Wheneva You Spit, The More I See ~Shame Formin'~ My Lyrics Got Your Mind Twistin' Into A Tornado, Now You Should Be Better Cause Your Really Are ~BrainStormin'~

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melo got this

flow=melo
structure=melo
punches=melo
creativity=melo

my vote=melo

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hit this wit a honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=89069

melo took this aon the bacis that i could ach understand his and i thought his punches came pretty hard

could you hit this battle up plz only needs 1 more vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88927

Aiight..0-2...Oh And Ecco...Sorry My Battles Aren't Made For Morons....I Ain't Tryin To Make It So Lil 1st Graders Can Read It....It Ain't My Prob Your To Stupid To Understand It.....0-2 UPPIN!!!!!

ppl always thinking im a guy..................... IM A FEMALE .................................U P P I N ................................................N U M B E R .................................................T W O ......................................:)

Flow-melo
Metas-Syted
Personals-Syted
Vocab-melo
Originality-Syted

Syted got this one. It was kinda close but Syted verse was metaphoically superior.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89096

Hit this up yall^^

clean battle
Id give my vote to melodrahma
had summ goood punches an meta4s
takes my vote
clean an close battle
the female took it

v-Melo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89073

^^if u no skILL PEEP honestly pc

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PPL U NEEDA POLL PLEASE . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. .
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Flow:Melp
Punches:Syted
Werdplay:Syted
Struct:ewww i didnt like eather lol...

aight syted got this..with better werd play n punches..n his flow was so so..but was a wining verse

syted good luck in the future kid...u got potential..if u shortin ya lines...but still grasp the same fealing u do now...

flow/ melo
structure/melo
punchline/melo
wordplay/melo
original/syted

overall/melo

VOTE/ MELO
YOU HAD BETTER FLOW AND PUNCHES FOR SHO
SYTED HAD SOME ORIGINALITY BUT COULDENT COMPEET WITH IT
AND IT WAS AN OK BATTLE SO KEEP IT UP
OH YEAH MELO YOU NEED 2 HOLLA AT ME CUZ MY DUMB ASS DOESNT NO HOW 2 VOTE SO I NO THAT U CLICK THE CIRCLE
THAN SUBMIT VOTE BUT IT SAYS MY SESSION IS INVALID SO
GIVE ME A PM AND TELL ME ACZACKLY HOW U DO IT SO
I CAN GIVE U A FAIR VOTE WHICH U WON OK
EXPLAIN IT MAN FOR REALS IM KINDA SLOW>;o)
http://XCHILLZZx@aol.com
and for the rest of u holla back at this with ONLY FAIR VOTES OK
THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87338

Flow: Melo
Structure: Neither
Punch: Syt
Metas: Syt
Enjoyment: Syt

Vote: Syt

Melo came weaker than i ever seen her..:(...syt had some pretty nice punchs..come from the heart punch was nice...keep elevatin both of ya..

and hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89186

Flow:Melp
Punches:Syted
Werdplay:Melp
Struct:Both (by veary lil)

i think Melp won this batte, his flow was better

flow...melod
creativity...melod
punches...melod
structure...melod
overall...melod

i would vote but i dont have 100 posts yet...
can yall hit this poll up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89157

thanks
peace out

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Originally posted by shay-d
flow...melod
creativity...melod
punches...melod
structure...melod
overall...melod

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melo better punches
more creative
better personals
nice verse by both of yall

peace

I believe you won this, Melo...

So, Why is this still being upped..?

It should be closed...

Mods know what to do...

its bein upped cuz ive only got 4 votes.. need 5 to win............................................... .................................................. .............................

battle was quite good not amazin tho
punches=melo
sustainment=melo
metas=melo
origanality=s
vocab=s
structure=none
flow=melo
overall=melo
other kid had some aight punches but dint really hit
both ya'll shud work on ya structure