8-15 lines
u spit first
u know da rest
iight kik it dawg....
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8-15 lines
u spit first
u know da rest
iight kik it dawg....
yo yo check it yaz u say ur skilled//
man after ur battle wif shay-d was ur status really killed??//
ima hit u so hard wif mi rhymes//
and kill u wif mi puchlines//
beat ya ull try and diss mi name//
well guess wat da name got me fame//
man soon ill put ur anme to shame//
man ur not made 4 dis motha fuken rap game//
ull be crying wen dey vote me not u//
wen i rhyme its like a gun shot goin thou-n-thou//
wen u wanted to start dis battle u 4got its me //
u now da 1 dey call Uski//
fuk saying ur MC-yaz more like MC-Wannabe//
soon ur rekord will be 1-1//
after i shoot u wif mi lyrical Gun//
done ... not dat great thou
yo not too bad............................................... .......................................
iight yo check in.... heres my verse.
Go ahead, blast that gat-away/
mother fucker, im here to fuckin-stay/
Im the forsaken one, im already-dead/
like eminem, im dat ghost trapt in-your-head/
I perfect a beat, you can throw your punchlines/
Il spit lyrical bullets, that plant rite-between your-eyes/
Cut right through you lies, and kill the first thing it finds/
And il be spittin plenty more shit like dat, of all kinds/
Whats wrong cuz, was the h(uski) finaly tamed/
I shot the dawg in da brain, and discrimnated his name/
So how does the MC-wannabe add up now/
Your prolly wonderin, Who, What, Were, How/
I have this guy ina case of amneisa from this blast/
Lets hope he remebers, It was stricly from Yaz/
<~( Uppin Fo Votes Yall )~>
nice.............................................. ....................,............................. ..........
opener...both
end..both
flow..yaz
vocab..none
wordplay..yaz
structure..yaz
overal.. yaz
uski u did pretty good but yaz was better...
DaMm u yaz y u so good dawg
Uppin Votes people aiight ...
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aight yall..... were lookin for alot of votes here!!!!!!!!...................................... ....
uppin fo votes............................................. ............................................
yo uski er shit was pritty tight............................................. ..........................................
Aight well ya both was tight but Uski should have came a little stronger knowing what yaz can do when you aint at ya best (cause i know that wasnt ya best Uski) So to me it seems yaz took it so i gotta vote for yaz
yo yaz got it
not really good battle
both came weak
just elevate on ya vocab man
yaz took it thru punches, the otha kat was way too basic
cud you return the favur?http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...09#post876109f
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my vote goes to yaz for the opener and the punchlines n the finish
vote = yaz
hit my shyt up on this link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88851
iight koo thanx fo the votes yall... nemore............................................ ..............................................
uppin fo votes yall ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~gotta hate the 100 caracter thing~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have to give my vote to yaz. Uski was too childish in my opinion. Hard to grasp his flow, and his word play was lame. I am allowed to vote, but i cant seem to get it to work, so I guess my comments dont mean much. Good luck next time though kid.
This battle wuz lame as fuck but yaz took it. he came harder than the otha guy. U both need serious elevation. vote= yaz
its obvious you posted twice on purpose.
so im deleting your link... i've seen you do this over and over.
include your link after the vote.. or dont leave one.
feeble.
or i'll :shoot: you
uppin fo votes/ u vote on this fairly, post a link, and il vote on ers fairly............................................ .................................................
wtf... yaz how could u!! i thought u loved me .. we spent all nite together and u go with another girl!!! ur the father of my children!!.. Y YAZ... Y?
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what the fuck?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????//
ya'll need to mix in some punchlines. personals.. anything ! puttin me to sleep guys. meh... below average battle.
i'd be lying if i said anyone took punches or flow or metties..
only the boredom factor. mc-uski left me more bored, so yaz gets the win .
yo yaz, u have my vote i just cant do the poll cuz i dont got 100 posts. ur flow, punches, and ending were better than uski
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I perfect a beat, you can throw your punchlines/
Il spit lyrical bullets, that plant rite-between your-eyes
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^that was hott^
u took this battle yaz
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wtf roxay???????????
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well anyway ya yaz took this battle....
roxay what is that about???Quote:
Originally posted by roxay
wtf... yaz how could u!! i thought u loved me .. we spent all nite together and u go with another girl!!! ur the father of my children!!.. Y YAZ... Y?
:( WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaa
you both need some serious elevation.........but yaz took this wit better punches....................u guys need to elevate your vocab and get some wordplay and some metaphors into your verses