A.T. vs. V.A. $lim

10-15 lines
no hate, crew, d/r votes
no feeding
verses due in 2 hours
first to 5 wins

g'luck

aight checkn in I'll post in like an hour cause I eatin dinner



man I hate the fuckin 100 character bull shit

aiyo...
V.A. $lim really shouldnt battle me, but he wanted to go ahead test his fate,
this cats so wack, he "air-mailed" his lyrics to show that he could "elevate",
I'm lyrically "rapin" this bastard cat so badly that Ima leave this "malested bitch reminicin his daddy."
these sublimital hits from my punches gonna fuck 'em up in the head and leave em speakin like a crack feind.
I think you need a case of the "lyrical flu", cause the only way you spittin sick is "pukin" up lines,
just by lookin at your battle record I can see your a "visionary", you had "deja vu of this battle 3 times",
I'ma go ahead and 'fore-warn ya to "hit reset form" before you "submit your reply"...
Any instinctive shit you pre-writ for your spit, will only be an upset for the readers of your rhymes...
I'ma "burn my initials in your brain", just to leave you "AT" a loss for words,
I'll even send you a "mirror attached to my lyrics" so you can "see your own demise and merk",
I fuckin despise you jerks......... that batttle rap like your lines dont work...
even if you were to put "heinz" in your verse, you still couldnt "ketchup" when my rhymes disperse...

g'luck dawgy...
~Ashy~

MOD's said I could recycle off my battle wit mic chemist since
he no show'd...
so dont vote against me for recycling...
and vote honestly, and leave your link for us to vote on your battles... (we only vote honest, so dont think that if you vote for
one of us, that we will go and vote for you...)
~Ashy~

I'm goin to rip ya in half then cut ya in three//
thats a serving for six on the menu's AT to eat//
I'll rip off ya head n piss down ya neck//
ya found lyin dead n ya body's shipwrecked//
how you want to do it either way I blow ya mind//
you pick the weapon a nine or a rhyme//
I'm bout to free the world of this hermaphrodite//
'case ya didn't get the picture AT ya die tonight//
you could make it less painless and not try to fight//
I'll go ahead and close with punches that blow holes in ya abs//
there's no chance he'll withstand the blows that I jab//
I doubt he even posts cause his flows are that bad//
caus of this loss... for months... he mopes and is sad//
if this thread'll close quick then he knows he'll be glad//
so when he gets merked by slim it wont be shown to his fan//
(his one and only fan)


aight there it is GL

alright dawg... may the best man win...
lez get some votes....
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vocab = tie
flow = AT
punches = AT
personals = AT (VA didnt have any)

it was an ok battle, but kinda one sided...... VA slim, u need to elevate........ nice punches AT

vote = AT

guys, please drop an honest vote here, its getting slept on big time:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2

you AT what the deal with bitin that heinz and ketchup line ålphå bë† used it against An']['hropoLog¥ I guess I would loose cause I didnt bite any of mine

I aint even seen that... I just thought of that shit...
I dont bite... you can trace all my battles... I dont bite...
i guess that shit a coincidense....
but... I dont bite...

if ya want count my vote if not is str8
FLOW- AT
PUNCHES- AT
STRUCTURE- both
VOCAB- both
PERSONAL- AT

OVERALL- AT

plz take a look N vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87769

yo im in ya guyz crew
so .....
i aint gonna poll vote
-at
cuz he just was clean about his verse
and va you gotta get some better rhymes
no filler should be accepted if ya trying to elevate./

oh shit dawg... i forgot that you was in my crew...lmao

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uppin #2

c'mon yall... dont sleep... shit, whats a person gotta do to get
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Meh.
Weak battle.
AT takes it though.
Better punches and wordplay.

Peep me vs Rob D

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Originally posted by Cryptic Thoughts
Meh.
Weak battle.
AT takes it though.
Better punches and wordplay.

Peep me vs Rob D

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My Thoughtz Exactly... VA Needs To Come More Complex.. And AT Needs To Fix The Structure.. But Vote- AT

FLOW- slim
PUNCHES- AT
STRUCTURE- tie
VOCAB- slim
PERSONAL- AT

slim takes it with clever punches and really good wordplay. all slim had was the flow but his rhymes were way to elementary for me to feel.

my vote: AT

yall hit this up honestly thanks .

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84560

last up!!!!!!!!!!
~Ashy~

wait... I still got 2 more ups... well one after this one...
c'mon yall dont sleep....
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo AT took this by a long shot...all punches...real nice AT i enjoyed reading it....
I cant vote for you so basically this is another UPPPPP

can you hit up my battles at...
just vote in the one vs papa cause its a fuck up...
the other just leave a comment

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AT had better punches. That decided this battle coz V.A didnt come strong at all. I think he's havin a really off day today.
Vote AT for punches



V.A you forgot to poll on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87842