14 lines max
no hate or all those whack votes
no quoting votes
no whack votes...must explain...or...
ur just gay if u don't... yup................
dont' feed... ya
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14 lines max
no hate or all those whack votes
no quoting votes
no whack votes...must explain...or...
ur just gay if u don't... yup................
dont' feed... ya
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hi his name is whack white cat, trynna rap
hit guys from the back, make doods ass clap
going rat-tat-tat layn on your back
bendn over coming back up making snap
like snapple bottle cap, tryn to pop
askn to give a dude another blow job
whether you blow a lot or suck a little
gettn raped like Kobe with a girl with vittles
stuck between her teeth, white trash
lookn for a blow up doll, wanting to bash
suck a dick, smoke some hash
take another dick for another wad of cash
I'ma make him swallow his pride instead of him spittin-4-one,
Opener sealed this fun...I'd play with the trick but the treat is passed on...
Then again i'm a greedy kid...Snatch what you've got,
The way you come so poor...I guess i won't gain a lot,
You behold matchboxes to spark this enraging flame,
But you won't catch nothin...Like you engaging to my name,
I'll slow down so u catch up...no we got a picture finish,
You ain't go win...But consider me generous fo lettin u in it,
Forget it, This kid is worthless like puttin druggies in rehab,
It only takes seconds to get the L back in ya grasp,
He's hot n bothered, burnin fumes like his alias was Havoline,
Swallow this shit... n you'll be hurlin up like a javoline,
Shh..this is hunting season, i'm spreadin love thru arrows like cupid,
Not romance but of satisfaction of killin herbs stupid
vote.............Hi
grammer...........Hi
Flow.............Spit
punches.........neigher
metas...........Neigher
creativity.............Hi
Close battle
Hi My Name is Go Reply to my thread in Bitch Slapped
upp this shyttttttttttttttttt~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
Flow: Tie
Structure: Tie
Metas: Neither
Punchs Hi..kinda
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Hi
Vote: Hi
Hit took this..like thorn said pretty close...but hi definatly deserves the vote..he had more hits..cant really call em punchs tho..read much better n...Spit was to basic..n rhymed to much for them lil lines..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87517
Hit that up or ill come back buggin^^
Flow - Both
Punches - Both
Personals - Neither
Multis - Both
Meta4s - Both
Rhyme scheme - Spit... cloooose
Originality - Both
Word play - Both
Vote = Spit
Tighter than a virgin fuk... jus laughed at Spits opening lines an feelin the flow alot... simple but concise.
Hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87681
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lol this wasn't even close....
u guys need 2 learn how 2 vote...
small lines? no1 likes extended lines...
dumbasses...newbies before...
you drop another vote...please...
read somethin in elite...please
Looks like i aint ever votin on any of your battles again......me n thorn voted fo ya...what the fuck ya talkin about...put that crack down
name...fuck....who you calln noob....you a dumbass.....sometimes the tighter faster rhyme is better....why don't you go read something in elite....look at your battle record dumbass....you a big shot? fuck, you still elavatin too
In ur eyes no it wasnt close... but thats irrelevant kid so take it on the chin... ur winnin anyhow so pipe down.
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every1 in here is a newb... ask some vet....
you guys didn't even judge personals....
personals r what wins a battle....
n i don't care about those 2 votes i got...
they were shitty fo real...u need to learn how 2 vote better...
seriously.....
some1 said i didn't have punches? lol kids is funny...
but...don't come in here n post more....
that will just clog the thread....
name.....you are no fuckn vet.....show me a personal other than your first two lines.....fuck you...you can't even do many personals on text battles cause you don't know nothn bout the cat...can't see him, nothn....soo fuck you.....if you can't take a vote against you, go get back on your momma's tit
Vote on my battle...buggin
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alright dawg....did do it....stop buggn, stupid ass hoe......Up this shit for my....3rd time
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Flow - spit
Punches - Both
Personals - Neither
Multis - Both
Meta4s - niether
Rhyme scheme - Spit... cloooose
Originality - spit
Word play - Both
nothing worse than a neb who just got promoted to light weight acting like a vet.
no one likes extended lines? c'mon, no one would like eminem or snoop then
this one goes to spit, because his shit sounded less juvinile and hit a lot harder.
not a very good battle. elevate. and fuck you if you don't like my vote, my style or if you vote against me because i was honest.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87706
hit it up
hi my name is took this
flow=hi
wordplay=hi
creativity=hi
punches=hi
my vote=hi my name is
holla
thanks for the honest votes ya'll....keep uppin this shit....peace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
alright....i'm uppn this shit again......a couple more honest votes and this is over...keep this up...drop a link and I return the favor...peace
ok fa real that was mad wackness...
i think that hi my name is won
no explination needed.. what a joke
vote-hi my name is
Hit this up y'all (I've already up'd it 5 times) and then I'll be back to vote on this.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
^My reasoning is much the same. VOTE = Hi My Name IsQuote:
Originally posted by ~D~Abyss~
Flow: Tie
Structure: Tie
Metas: Neither
Punchs Hi..kinda
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Hi
Vote: Hi
Hit took this..like thorn said pretty close...but hi definatly deserves the vote..he had more hits..cant really call em punchs tho..read much better n...Spit was to basic..n rhymed to much for them lil lines..