HERE IT IS YOU SPIT FIRST I THINK BECAUSE YOU MADE IT
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HERE IT IS YOU SPIT FIRST I THINK BECAUSE YOU MADE IT
http://XCHILLZZx@aol.com...WAS IT 10LINES OR15LINES MAKE SURE YOU SAY WHAT IT IS OK...
fuk blew up wen i spat ma shit exploaded, n u still tryna get yaself noticed// man im like a cheetah, i sneek up, then attack// leave ya lien dead wit a couple holes in ya bak// man u 4 years older then me, that mean u should have a way better vocabulary // i spit, like as if, i chewed up n swalloed the dictionary// i spit shit hot as fire, u could apply at " wacks r us" n still not get hired// man ill stab u wif a gaff, fillet u cook u n burn u then turn u into ash// man u mite aswell stop rymin, go on american idol n get dissed by simon// ya fake ass turns on the tv, dawg u see me rappin on B-E-T// go apply at a grocery store cuz rap aint yo isle, fuk a bich this guy gets off watchin the sex files//
whats tha words CREEPING out of my throat like HIPE...
suddenly i RISE 2 tha ACASION of NOTHING that tranzlates>
NOTHING, so blend SOMETHING on yer OWN BASIS, cuz i dont>
have a BASIS... U can listen 2 my VOCALS or DIE on someone>
elses brain pattern of SOMETHING that may be positive 2 yer>
UNDERSTANDING... meaning of LIFE make u SADDER...>
WHAT are you trying 2 say EVERYDAY on yer TRACKS, good or bad
>doesnt MATTER its all WAK... now fall into a PUDDLE of BLOOD>
feel the TRUE PAIN of REALIZATION cuz u iz FAKING...>
living yer LIFE thinking its RIGHT, and whats RIGHT from WRONG>
doesnt JUSTIFY my UNPERSUITABLE EGO, HEAVEN or HELL,>
thats the only TRUE SEQUEL... picture ETERNITY & COMPREHEND>
the X-QUIZIT COMPLEXICTY of it fitting only ~n~ 1 SOLID>
INDEFINETLY yer FRAME... and if the PICTURE
is eradacated meaning its not eternal, what this mean?...>
the only answer i can give you iz 2 imagine yer spirit being decapatated over and over into infinative attributes of delerium...
for infinity.>>>>>>>>
sorry for using 2 pages i accidently submitted when i wasnt done.....is this verse too long>?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
heyyyyyyyyyy guyssssssssss cannnnnnnnnn iiiiiii getttttttttt aaa voteeeeeeeeeeeeeee???????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????/letsssssssssss closeeeeeeeee thissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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FUCK GOD DAMMIT 2 HELL WHERE THE FUCK ARE THE VOTES
VOTERS DO YER JOB
JUST GIVE HIM ALL THE VOTES 2 CLOSE IT NOW
I DONT GIVE A FUCK
THIS SHIT BEEN HERE 2 FUCKING LONG
hey u guys lets close this shit come on?>;o(
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87338
http://XCHILLZZx@aol.com
hey holster put that link on all places you go ok
we need 2 close this one ok dogg
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THIS BEEN HERE FOR A LONG TIME CAN THERE BE SOME VOTES GOING ON PLEASE
HOLSTER IF U SEE THIS GET SOME PEOPLE 2 VOTE
FOR REALS>;o)
yo ismael sanchez, u took that battleQuote:
Originally posted by ismael sanchez
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THIS BEEN HERE FOR A LONG TIME CAN THERE BE SOME VOTES GOING ON PLEASE
HOLSTER IF U SEE THIS GET SOME PEOPLE 2 VOTE
FOR REALS>;o)
holster.... yo u had no flow.... and ur rap was madd childish. what are u 10. u had no good punches and ur rap was complete garbage
if i get 100 posts before this battle is over my vote will go to u
sanchez
u had much better flow and punches.
yo ismal
check out my battle yo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=rhythm
Its not really that good of a battle but ismael was better.
It didn't rhyme at all though. Hollister actually came harder.
It was wack though. Ismael used better vocab and wordplay.
Hollister fix yo format, how you put the lines down.
ok homies thanks for the votes
i check out yer battles as soon as i can figure out how to vote correctly ok>;o)
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yea ismael got this altho.. ur verse DIDNT rhyme... holster fix ur format 4real.. n elevate.. ismael didnt come that hard in this battle, but it was enough to win...
vote=ismael
hit my shyt up.. battles get slept on like a muuuufucka:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=89052
thanks man ill check yer battle out in a min
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Flow: I
Punchs: H
Metas: H..kinda
Strut: I
Enjoyment: H..spite the damn structure
Vote: Holster
Jeezus no offence but this battle sucked...Holster ya need to sort out tht structure..ya lines were played n wack but I's verse didnt even read like a battle verse...shuda been in open mic...lol...jus my opinion..keep elevatin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89186
hit that up honestly
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damn he got a vote come on man dont let him win he had a
horrible structure
HOLLA BACK
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yo ismal check out my battle below ..............................................
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ite sanchez got dis on flow n punches but u both had a gd verse, gd shit yall.
vote on dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89234 honest.................................pz
thanks man
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2 more votes lets close this bitch ok
holla back
hey holster up yer battle so people can vote
holla
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ismel took this wit better flow better structure and harder punches.................................holster try to use more wordplay and harder punches in your verses...........my vote=isamel
punches ismael
personals ismael
wordplay tie
overal ismael
weak battle
hit this up wit honest polled vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89310
peace
thanks man...................
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come on i only need 1 more vote
lets close this
and ne1 half decent hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89509
This bttle sucked but Ismael took it, the other foolz didnt hav no flow at all. Both need to elevate but ismael took it cuz da othr cat wuz wack.
ohhh ismael u 4got to drop a poll-vote on muh bttle...