Johnny C. vs. LM

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October 23rd, 2003, 04:05 PM
Johnny C.

Johnny C. vs. LM

Rules all set............................................... .................
.................................................. .......................time for mah verse!
October 23rd, 2003, 04:07 PM
LM

Yo remind everyone of the rules............................................. ....................................
October 23rd, 2003, 04:10 PM
Johnny C.

aight............................................. ................................................
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30 min.
14-16 lines
I spit mah shit 1st.
October 23rd, 2003, 04:10 PM
LM

The rules are:
14-16 lines
Usual rules bout d/r and shit
He spits first......................................
October 23rd, 2003, 04:16 PM
LM

Any body who wants to vote. Thank you but explain and hit this up aswell cos It's level at the moment:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86967
October 23rd, 2003, 04:20 PM
Johnny C.

You're a stupid-ass, dumb-fuckin kid, wit no flow/
Oh, but ya can't win to me now, cuz ya won't show/
U don't know-- how 2 beat me in this battle/

Son, i got a gun, it's an uzi; it's pointed at you/
U gonna get attacked, too/
Cuz i know yer rhymes are whack, dude/
Kid, ya otta know that yer rap's are talkin bab-ble!/

Do u really wanna hear the shit that
I've heard of YOU?!//
Cat, you've been fucked in the ass so much, you
Kan't play "skip 2 mah loo!"//
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
I'm gonna rip off yo appendages/
give u severe hemorages/
an then I'll allow u 2 jump off
ANY ledges!/
wut about rap?
yer in love wit dis shit!
but the only reason 4 that is u think tha mic is a dick!
October 23rd, 2003, 04:22 PM
Johnny C.

tear it up, dawg.
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October 23rd, 2003, 04:33 PM
LM

OK here we go:

I guess I've gotta murder you for a second time/
Fuck it...if you Pm me I'll give you tips on how to write a dope rhyme/
But if you think your already the shit then OK, whatever, fine/
But realise that your committin serious lyrical crimes/
It's a miracle how you can say shit about me bein wack, you like to cook you faggot/ (profile)
Now out the two of us, dont ever say that your the baddest/
And I know why you spat first/
It's so you dont feed off my verse isnt it Mr Johnny C./
Mr L got lucky, Mr L didnt merk me/ Mr I'm not sure I can ryhme like Lee/
Don't you get it, you wont ever beat me/
All you can do is hope that one day you will be me/
I dont care what you say...I've merked you today AND yesterday/
You callin me out is like disrespectin me/
So I had no choice but to merk your ass again disrespectfully/
If I am wrong in anyway please correct me/
But I predict another 5-0 victory for me/.

Peace!!!

Hit this up too:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86967
October 23rd, 2003, 04:35 PM
LM

Explaination:

Lee/L = Lee is my name but L is shorter thats where my Mr.....line came in

Peace!!!
October 23rd, 2003, 04:45 PM
Johnny C.

aight, that wuz tight.....
but did ya see mah subliminal thought... i guess not.

damn dawg that wuz a helluva lot better than the last one u passed un-to me... good job!
i heard that disses get points (from our last battle), so i TRIED 2 get this 1 chock-full o' karate-chop-action!

AIGHT, THUGS, TIME TA VOTE!
LM FOR THE PUNCHES... OR JOHNNY FOR THE PUNCHES,THE FLOW, AND THE NICE SIDE-BANNER!
October 23rd, 2003, 04:47 PM
Implex

ok let me be the one pop the cherry...
well this battle was wack, neither of yall said anything worth repeatin... johnny c. ur sturcture is horrible, u got no wordplay cept for that bitin ass 'skip to my loo line', ur lines arent even played, they just suck... LM u didnt do any better, id rather not vote but i might as well and shit...

wordplay - john john, just cuz he mad a feeble attempt at bitin somethin, but he still tried
punches - equal, neither said anything personal or nothin
multis - LM cuz he had some... kinda
Metas - i dont even know if there is any...

overall VOTE - Johnny cuz he did bad but LM won the first time and came weak as fuck on this.... and dont think im hatin or anything... i dont hate on shit except haters
October 23rd, 2003, 04:49 PM
LM

Man we both went ten times better than what we did on our last battle. Good work dawg.....................................
October 23rd, 2003, 04:51 PM
LM

Thanks for votin Hardcore.......................................... .............................

Peace!!!
October 23rd, 2003, 04:52 PM
Johnny C.

i just got mah 1st vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........
October 23rd, 2003, 04:54 PM
Johnny C.

so much 4 yer "...(5-0) victory..." :)
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October 23rd, 2003, 04:58 PM
LM

Yeah I know I stand corrected......................................... ..........................................
October 23rd, 2003, 05:10 PM
LM

Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ..........................

Peace!!!
October 23rd, 2003, 05:41 PM
LM

Uppin for votes (2)............................................... ............................

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 04:07 AM
LM

Uppin for votes (3)............................................... ..........................

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 09:13 AM
Trevs

heres the break down -

Stucture - LM
Flow - LM
Multis - LM
Punches - Jonny
Metas - there was none!

Vote = LM

(yo LM come battle me i put a bitch slap in for u to battle me if ur down hit me back wit a pm or put it in the bitch slap)

payycee!!
October 24th, 2003, 09:45 AM
melodramah

yo this was a weak battle.. but i gotta go w/ LM in this.. johnny ya verse was mad weak.. best line:
"yer in love wit dis shit!
but the only reason 4 that is u think tha mic is a dick!"
the structure needs work tho..

LM ya verse was aight.. enough to win..
aiiight battle..
vote=LM

slept on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85796
October 24th, 2003, 10:26 AM
LM

Thanks for votin guys. Green Dreamer I'll battle you when my battles close............................................. ..........

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 11:36 AM
LM

Uppin for votes (4)............................................... ..........................

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 11:58 AM
LM

Yo Johnny when you see this make sure you start uppin for votes coz I dont wanna run out of mine too soon and I've already used 4 of them so help me out a bit will ya..

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 12:11 PM
Quelude

check it. my battles are getting slept on. I want a piece of LM so vote on my shit and get the thread closed. LM you heard what I said
October 24th, 2003, 01:28 PM
LM

Aragorn...even if you cant poll you could of dropped a comment..................................!

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 03:58 PM
LM

OK last uppin...can we get this battle over with now............................................... .............

Peace!!!
October 24th, 2003, 04:19 PM
LM

Yo Johnny I cant keep this battle afloat on my own. Get your ass in here and help me................................................ ....
October 25th, 2003, 03:43 AM
LM

Johnny dont run away from the fuckin votes...your only one behind............................................ ..............
October 25th, 2003, 04:48 AM
deucedice

wow that shits raw LM i agree wit melo on the verse its tite but yea it sorta does need som work but it was better then the other guys
October 25th, 2003, 07:37 AM
FleX

Wordplay: Noone
Punches: Noone
Multis: LM
Metas: Nonone
Structure: LM

Overall: This battles was pretty wack..no real punchs or metas..LM had better flow n structure..i supose his lines were a lil better ...so.

Vote: LM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87316

Hit that up..or ill come back moanin
October 25th, 2003, 08:38 AM
flizip

opener:LM
closer:LM
structure:LM
punches:tie
wordplay:tie
overall:LM

nice battle peeps, johnny u got better since ur last battle against LM, jus keep elevatin

plz return the favor by votin fairly on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87137
October 25th, 2003, 08:51 AM
Its Illytizzle!™

Flow - LM
Punches - LM
Personals - Both
Multis - Neither
Meta4s - Neither
Structure - Both
Rhyme scheme - LM
Originality - Neither
Wordplay - LM

Vote = LM

Kinda close but LM took the important catergories.