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14 line max
2 day limit
normal house rules
250 posts to vote
check in
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OR SomeThin Like Dat...
~Young P~
14 max...
Dis kid blows chek his flow its eatin up the ozone
Oh no...this kid is worste than a -Brixton- clone
oughta wear a chain sayin Carson'Owns...cus its the truth
wanna be on top?..betta climb a roof...
cus afta im done aint nada left butta single tooth..
claimin u a legend? on toppa that a 13 yr old man?..
could'nt step in my society wit out a bag of mulch in hand..
i disovle this obtuse variable down to the last dna strand..
claimin' he's ill like sand an can't even get the jet to land
please...hit puberty than come back an battle me..
spittin verbs, young-p ya claims are all of fallacy
college grad, streakin past dis freshman ass...
wit class, i dont look back...jus know the gacts an feel my draft
frontin wit my lesser half that i save for younger calfs..
when u grow some hair on your pair...u'll feel my wrath...
UPPIN (1)............................................... ............
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Da Way I Leave Ya Werds Fucked, It's Like I Play Wit Ya Speech...
Step To Me And You'll Be Seein Shells Like A Day At Da Beach...
His Styles Dicked, He's Full Of Shit, Yet He Still Comin Half Assed...
Everyone Wants Him Ta Stay On RB, Cuz Witout Him, Derred Be No One To Laugh At...
Im Like A Hunter, My Werds Are Blount, Straight Pierce-In Ya Skin...
It's Like I Gave Ya A Bad Hair Cut Da Way I Put Hooks To Ya Chin...
Dawg, Ya Gotta Real-Eyes Wut Ya Facin... He Runnin But Dis Fools Behind...
Dis Battle Wuz For "Seen" Uneven... Like Im Versin Da School Of Da Blind...
You Spit Unscrupulous, If We Wuz Metaphoricly Speakin, You Woulda Dun Trashed Ya Yard...
Carson Hasta Charge All His Wins, No Wonder He Prefers Mastercard...
Ima Make Dis Win Blatant, Like Myths I Speak Ancient...
I'm Losin My Patience...Checked In At Ya Brain Cuz I Saw Da Sign "Vacant"...
Fuck Hatin...Im Pleadin Guilty Ta Rape And The Jurys Still Deliberatin...
I Coulda Dropped Before Ya And My Verse Would Still Be An Understatement....
REFERENCE
Line:
1-Fuck Ya Werds/Play Wit Ya Speech... Get It?...
2-Hehe... And You Know I Hold Guns...
3-Dicked, Full Of Shit..."Half-Assed"...Get It?
4-I Agree...
5-Refering To Boston Celtics...Paul Pierce, Lindsey Hunter, and Mark Blount...
6-Hopefully You Know Wut Hooks Are... I Havent Seen A HairCut Bad Enuff Hooks Ta Da Chin...But Its Possible...
7-RealEyes/Realize...Leads To Da 8th...
8-Seen...School Of Da Blind... Get It?...
9-Unscrupulous=Dirty, Trashy... Metaphor... Trash Ya Yard... Get It?...
10-Refers To His Avy...Cant Get Any Wins Cuz He Good...
11-Self Spoken...
12-Brain Vacancy...Get It...Its A "No Brainer" :) ...
13-Ok...
14-Yea... aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME...
HOLLA...
speak of the devil i likes carsonjets openin lines
young hit this and ill soon return
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86489
WEll lemme break it down
flow-young
punches-young
metas-carson
played lines-carson
originasliy-carson
idk i wasnt feelin carsnons style young edged this 1 i give it to him
u forgot to poll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86489
"Yep" ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yeah...this was a pretty good battle...but here'z the breakdown as I see it:
multi'z-Young P
structure-tie
flow-tie
punchez-Young P
personalz-Young P
opener-Carsonjet
closer-Young P
overall-Young PP (lol)
i think young p took it wit
punches
flow
consistancy
metas
wordplay
multies
personals
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Young P got this:
Punches:Young
Flow-Young
Structure-Both
Vocab-Young
Multi-Young
Personals-Young
Pretty good battle though guys, props.
Hit this uo for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86795
Ok...
Uppin For 2...
Someone Forgot To Poll...
Damn Kids...
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Holla..............................
Vote=youngp
Easy win for young...carson had a messed up structure, choppy flow, punches didn't really hit......Young had a nice verse, decent wordplay, solid punches, just overall better...
Peep my battle v.s. x-ecution
how bout alll u niggas go vote on my shit
n then wont somebody come n battle me so i can lite they ass up
cuz yall niggas need to read my shit hard
legendary mc vs quise_baby
vote on dat shit
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MATTIC
i tell people again and again.....
im not good.....
young p.....i hope u realize this now....pc*1*
Lol@Carson...
You Are Good...
Dont Get Down On Yourself Dawg...
You Had A Nice Drop...
It Was Quick...
Put More Time Into It...
Use Your Imagination And Creativity...
Keep It Up...
Uppin...
This battle was well fought..
But i thought CArson was spittin personals about him an not about young p
multi'z-Young P
structure-tie
flow-tie
punchez-Young P
personalz-Young P
opener-Carsonjet
closer-Young P
overall-Young PP
Vote- YOung p
Nice battle
flow...........carson
punches..........young
multies.........carson
personals..........carson
metas.............young
similes..............young
vocab................both
creativity..........young
structure...............both
vote..............young
because young had better punches and similes, he wins, carson you had ILL flow tho, every word was perfect
Anyway young i see ur online, mind hittin this ILL battle vs Born To Kill honestly? Peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87104