No feeding
No biting
No hating
10 lines
Dont matter who Goes First
Enjoy
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No feeding
No biting
No hating
10 lines
Dont matter who Goes First
Enjoy
Dug a Grave For yaself U'll need more help than Binge Drinkers
Trying to rap but like His Occupation says P is just a Singer (Vocal Talent)
'Tellin It straight to U', This battles like 'First Person Perspective'
Nobody can 'Help U being wack', we're all 'Lazy Detectives'
Killin bitches Is 'Manditory', like 'Shots of Hepititas B'
Your up against a 'Thorn', this bitch 'Cant Touch Me'
Ur an 'Empty Refrigirater', Sick Spits you 'Cant Feed'
Failing worse than Illiterate Kids at Spelling B's who cant Read
Ya slower than Driving Test Students, U belong on the Cement
This kids a bigger Distaster than Tim Allen Home Improvements
U have no grammer skillz like Kids who attend school in the Hood
Just a nobody who'd recieve no Search Party If Lost in the Woods
ive messed up settin a battle up twice LOL wat a dumbass i am!!!
neways check this peeps!...
U want fame but losing this battle wud be ur last chance missed//
I'd have a harder battle taking on all of the aftermath pissed//
After merking you my record will be 5 - 4 and thats fo sure!!//
You rap like your diseased but im not sorry theres no cure.//
You was dissowned by 'the whole world' like a regular fuckin 'outkast'//
only difference between u and them is your albums wont never sell out fast//
I cant believe you have the audacity to use our battle as a try out//
Im so tough your thinkin u in the army with NO CREW after lights out//
I'll politely say please get on your knees beg for mercy and pleed scream and shout//
my win is guaranteed for my greed like Gwen Stefani im in 'no doubt'//
Peace out...
im goin to fuckin bed its half 2 n im knackered
Tha Psyco
Let the Voting Begin
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I thought thorn took it
harder punches
no personals
at all
a bunch of punches
gettin a bit tired of these punhces
does anyone on rb no how to battle wwit mulites mechanics flow
rhyme scheme
punches where hard hittin from thorn
vote-thorn
now uve finished arse lickin (i hope) i think you mite wanna battle me and sho me jus how clever and complex ur lines really are...?
kiss my ass !
its not that i mind criticsm but ur pathetic...my verse was a joke about neways o if i get beat then ha ha i dont care!!!
i will beat u easily bro...
Peace y'all else
Tha Psyco
this was a close battle
creativity=thorn
punches=tie
personals=none
flow=tie
structure=tie
my vote=thorn
this was a close ass battle props to both of u
forgot to poll bro
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this battle sucked..well i guess it was good for newbs, but it was a runaway....thorn took it too easily here. punches were ok, wordplay aight. multies were minimal and flow was off at places.. finisher wasnt very good. decent punches though so u got the vote......Psycho your verse was horrible, your puns werent there and u had very few punches and i dont think i really saw any hardhitting ones... basically u had a ton of filler, u talked too much about yourself which is not the objective in a battle...
vote-Thorn
lol i know pax this was my worse verse ever
But i didnt really have to try..................no offence kid
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Were u here under a different alias thorn? or did u come from another site, and if so what site? sorry for the freepost but my curiosity has been aroused....and dont think dirty you pervs...well maybe u can think dirty but just this once...
weak battle....and one sided
Punches-thorn
flow-thron
wordplay-thorn
multis-none
metas-lol..thorn
creativity, enjoyment, etc-thorn
Vote=thorn
creativity=thorn
punches=thorn
personals=none
flow=tie
structure=none
my vote=thorn
i got to vote for him beace of what i said above he just came better then you in this battle
Vote=thorn
one sided battle...thorn had better flow and punches, and a bit of wordplay added into the mix, but this battle was weak....elevate, seriously
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this battle wasnt at all nice but psycholad thought he would jus merk a noob.....underestimation will be ya demise......thorn dint really have any hard punches but his thought was there wid creativity
vote=thorn
nxt time bring more heat thorn......also psycholad
agree with many others in this battle....Thorn got this by a large margin......psycolad only had a better flow...lol...here's a breakdown for u two....
Multis - Thorn
Metas - Thorn
Wordplay - Thorn
Personals - Thorn
RhymeScheme - Thorn
Violence - Thorn
Creativity - Thorn
Complexity - Thorn
Punches - Thorn
Vocab - Thorn
Flow - psycolad
Thorn - 10 out of 11
psycolad - 1 out of 11
Overall - Thorn
peace
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