severe vs tobias(check it out)

rules are posted in bitchslapped
10-15 lines
no feedin
regular you no em

i called u out so i guess ill post first............................................. ..............checkin in and keyin

ok here we go

allowin me 5 votes, he considers it controllin my offensive attack//
seen some of his battles, so i'll flip the skrip, and like dante hall im runnin it back//
consider this fact, i could get a mod to edit the polls to give u 4 votes u still couldnt get a vic-tor-y//
like readin lines bout cum, sars, and de-feet, ur rhymes mean shit-to-me//
im chasin u, when u run up stand staiter//
i dont stop, im comin after arnold like the mutha-fuckin terminator//
you cant beat me kid, do why do you-try//
he mite not be a homo, but he is to-by//(to-bi as in bi-sexual)
unscrewin a soda can lid the way i pop a cap//
you could plaster saran to the mic and you still couldnt rap//
call this kid jewelry, cuz he aint got no neck(necklace)
o yea, i forgot to let you no there went ur undefeated rec.//

Severe got as much confidence as slaughter bound cattle.
Last night he dreamed of facing me, and still lost the battle.
Cuz I'm a spit lyrics that are way more severe than his.
Even though he studied me he gonna fail this like a pop quiz.
Ya brain has dead cells cuz it really needs a jump start.
Ya ply ya craft in rafts round castles tryin ta flow like Mozart.*
Sobriety and elevation are ya pet peeves, ya a drunken lowlife.
Spittin & sippin in the kitchen cuz ya more like a tipsy housewife.
So ya continue to drop and give migraines like anvils on heads.
Never gettin ya point to cum across like sex in seperate beds.
So I'll end this verse with a short but serious reminder.
Racehorses have better vision than you, and they always wear blinders.


*Mozart (moat's art, moats are around castles)

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tobias verse was just overall better, vote = tobias
lyrics you gotta hit harder and get better flow your lines
all over like this one

im chasin u, when u run up stand staiter//
i dont stop, im comin after arnold like the mutha-fuckin terminator//

^ see how its so un even? stuff like that u just gotta work on, keep on elevatin

fuck!!!!!!!!! i cant even vote.............. lol!! my bad.................. what ever tho lol....................

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this battle was iight...tobias had betta punches...his disses were a lil betta..touch of creativeness...need to tighten up his skills a lil bit tho..

severe started off ok..nice flow..he had maybe two punches that hit well..but what made your battle verse mediocre was your hella played lines..

vote tobias!!

1st uppin on my part. Glad to see this battle has gotten some hits! Thanks to all who peeped it, especially the lady, thanks, ma'am. Please keep hitting this. I'll be able to vote legitimately soon enough and will return the favors. Thanks much!

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tobias took this wit ease.

his flow, wordplay and metas just killed u severe. sorry but you lost this one

my vote=tobias

this is the first time i saw wut feeble posted so can anyone who votes from now on explain votes like...
flo-
metas-
punches-
personalls-
and so on

All the votes dissapeared. I guess heavier explanations are needed. This battle has taken forever to get through. I'll be posting up today here and there to try and get my post count up quicker. Looks like thats the only way to get votes, be able to return em. Thanks for the views and votes given so far. Sorry they didn't count.

uppin for final time..
even though i think my other ups shouldn't count cuz i upped and then the votes got deleted but o well.............................

o yea and drop a link and i'll hit ur battle up with a fair vote.............................................. .........................................

opener:tobias
closer:
structure:tobias
flow:tie
wordplay:severe
punches:tobias
overall:tobias

nice battle, tobias took this in all aspects

Ok. I'm hoping that since the poll got reset, so did our uppings. I'd like to get some more votes this way, this battle's been out there forever. Please help me get it closed. Any help is appreciated. Thanks.

I dont agree wiv 007... this was closer than people are makin out:

Flow - Tobias
Punches - Tobias
Personals - Neither
Multis - Severe
Meta4s - Both
Originality - Both
Rhyme scheme - Tobias
Wordplay - Severe
Consistency - Severe



Vote = Tobias


Tobias edged the more vital catergories an cosequently won this i my eyes... not bad at all from severe... but i know u can hit much harder than that as iv seen in other battles.


Take a second to vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2



Good battlin fellas...

ok tek good job explainin ur vote except i had alot of personall
considering his name is tobias and i said he is to-bi see how when u get rid of the hyphen its the first 4 letters of his name and i said sumthin bout commin after arnold like the terminator, again arnold his the 2nd part of his name and i said somthin bout his record but o well and in the way u voted that would say i won in more aspects but u gave him the vote which doesnt make sense to me

This was an OK battle.
I thought Tobias punched and flowed a little bit better. Severe started well but just broke off towards the end. Both verses and little area's of creativeness but overall Tobias gets it.
Vote Tobias

wack battle but tobias got this hotter verse better but other guys was nice multis but wack vocabulary and verse overall hollaz~1

Tobias took this, this punch killed it:

"So I'll end this verse with a short but serious reminder.
Racehorses have better vision than you, and they always wear blinders."

Punches were better, severe you had an alright verse though, both need elevatin, but good battle overall

vote = tobias

hit this up yall



http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=87402