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no dick ridin votes
spit quick
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Blind spit
ill be done in 35
u drop first tho
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aight whatever ! im doing a blind spit also something to past time
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b2k nine
playa you have no chance
why you rappin go back to being bow wows fan
damn, your first battle and your first lost man
now what you gone tell suga daddy aka your man
i got a pk ruger that hold sixteen in the clip
you about to go winless like the LA CLIP'S
ill sink u like im titanic and you be the ship
i then ran out of ammo so let me load my clip.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........ok im reloaded like i was scarface cousin
you act like you hard but i knew you wasnt
you a ja rule a faker a 50 a snitch
even if you wrote over ten pages you still couldnt bet me bitch.
dont be harsh on votes im rusty and it was quick
Aite yo
10-15 lines
Match me fool
This cat is weak, I noticed that he looking backat my last thread//
It figures round one I’d have to take out dis wacc head//
his game a hoax. talks from his ass, I can smell his shit breath//
wit an ass stuck in his throat..nearin to his short an swift death//
I could spit forever, and keep going till time stops//
I’ll step and the quake will show up for five blocks//
I’ll take the votes when my rhyme drops…//
…Voters won’t wait for your post//
For the simple fact they notice the greatness I’ve shown//
And knowing the fate of my foes is only to die at my hands//
Just stay quiet; even if you post your rhyme I’ll advance//
I aint concerned with home towns, your murder and crime rates//
Cuz when this shit gets ugly you’ll leave smashed like blind dates//
Closin it
Jordan dropped first, and I’m not shocked in awe//
You aint coming half as nice as me if I don’t drop at all//
Yall aint ready, took me 20 minutes to get my verses done//
Shit, it takes you 2 days to write, 3 nights to rehearse one//
Hurt comes when I’m throwing blows that’s relentless//
Battling me is like pulling teeth; I play the role of the dentist//
LEt d voting
commense
My bad on da lines i think i went 1 over
i had 16
so wuteva its cool rite
uppin for votesssssssssssssssssssssssssss
good spit pimp i see you got the closing one also.
but out of towners come out to the dirty and get fucked up
you gone need dr.suess to patch that shit up
66
aite heres da break
punches-9
personals-lacked but 9
flowin-9
mulites-9
creativity-9
wordplay-9
he jsut had sum better verse in this battle
otehr cat ame weak
elementry rhymes
vote-9
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Originally posted by T3CK NiNe
LEt d voting
commense
My bad on da lines i think i went 1 over
i had 16
so wuteva its cool rite
uppin for votesssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Yeah this was a ok battle....but nine took this one in everything i thought....his punches were harder....his verse flowed better...had multies...and wordplay...overall it was a good battle...but my vote goes to nine...props to both.
^^ great uppinfor sum voters on this bitch
damn Lackinmad votersssssssssssssssssssssss
uppoinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
both had nice verses more newbies like this should be comin to this site
flow - tie
punches - teck
multis - teck
metas - jay
really close battle but im goin with teck i love those multis
overall -
yoo i was feelin tek more in this---jay ya had an ok flow--but no hard punches--or personals---keep elevatin---tek had betta structure and punches------vote=tek
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yoo i was feelin tek more in this---jay ya had an ok flow--but no hard punches--or personals---keep elevatin---tek had betta structure and punches------vote=tek
EXACLTy
uppin for 2 more votes
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EXACLTy
uppin for 2 more votes
both wack as fuk, to off to say nothin
but who am i>? find out bitches..... Peril Eyez in dis bitch now
God damn... Nine's verse was, essentially solid.
It's good for a light chuckle, technically sound.
Jay's shit was... wheeeewww. I know people are new, maybe not so good. But this wasn't really a contest. Very simple rhymes, repetitive shit that didn't hurt. Clips and clip(er)s and man and man... bullshit.
It's cool to pretend like you're "keystyling" or coming quickly, but... when it's like this: try harder. Write some decent looking stuff.
Vote-Nine.
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Blind spit
ill be done in 35
u drop first tho
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Structure:Tech
Punchlines:Tech
Personals:Tech
Flow:Tech
OVERALL:TECH
Much better verse, the other guy was elementary
ps. hit this up while I poll vote...............................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85923