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no crew votes bitin n shit like dat
drop asap
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10-12 lines
no crew votes bitin n shit like dat
drop asap
u first
checkin in
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checkin..................................
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ill drop strait afta u
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Like a blocked sewer your shit is never flowing/
You need that unblocked coz the turtle’s head is showing/
Ya gonna meet the ground like a mole crawls around/
‘Penfolt’ by nature, blind, bald, and easily drowned/ (danger mouse)
Give your rhymes to the homeless, arse paper for paupers/
At least it’s a purpose wiping shit off that’s surplus/
Your soaked like a dog - shaggy, smellin and wet/
Shake off your spit get verbal jabs from your vet/
Showing your face is the only way to offend me/
24 letters in the alphabet coz I just killed this ‘mc’/
I aint the type to go soft when its time to fuck/
You’d think you just won bingo coz your number is up/
neva had shame beatin my foes..it wont hurt to pound on u,
ya verse soo wack....i cant help but look down on u.
i'd give u a run for ya money....but you don't have none,
ill tell da truth my first bar's better than...ya first to last one.
u jus below average doin crappy raps..im above the best ranks,
no lie ill have ya face stuck to the floor like wet paint.
ya flows get no feed back....not even worthy of fuse,
and i would say ya shit is played....but it verbally abused.
no respect for wackness...i'll even go as far to say ya shit's gay,
u took friction to the heart...but u already let da win slipp away.
votes plz
n no fuckin dik riderz
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Needin votes here.....plz.............
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pretty one-sidded....Nd got this in every category....here's y....
u fucked it up right there at the beginning....i know whereu was going with down and pound....but u ended in the same two words.....so it was pretty shitty to see that.....Nd had better punches, wordplay, and vocabulary.....i see u have upped ur skill better than ur Necrid battle which is good...but here is a breakdown for u two.....Quote:
From mysterie:
neva had shame beatin my foes..it wont hurt to pound on u,
ya verse soo wack....i cant help but look down on u.
Multis - Nd
Metas - Nd
Wordplay - Nd
Flow - Nd
Vocab - Nd (definitely)
Creativity - Nd
Personals - Nd
Complexity - Nd
RhymeScheme - Nd
Overall - Nd
Vote - Nd
peace
4:20
this was pretty much a one-sided battle---i wasn't feelin ndeva's verse at all not goof flow or any good punches---mysterie had an aight flow--couple aight punches---enought to take this win---vote=mysterie
^^actually disagree, i agree with a majority of what joker said, it was one-sided in N.D.eva's favor, he had practically better everything, the first line made me laugh, nice shit dude, props
thanx man,,,,,
uppin for votes, com on dont sleep on it......
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^^straight wordness to all these cats, one sided battle, but i suppose i can break it down anyways.....
structure-tie
flow-nd
vocab-nd
wordplay-nd
punches-nd
personals-nd
overall-nd
nd took this, shouldnt have even broke it down.....but there u have it......
peace........
uppin for votes..............
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...........................Peace!
both cats need elevation
but here's how i think
flow = n.d
punches = n.d
wordplay = n.d
metas = n.d
creativity = n.d
vote = n.d
if i can get 100 posts soon, ill be sure to poll this up
hit this battle up, its being slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84033
structure-tie
flow-nd
vocab-nd
wordplay-nd
punches-nd
personals-nd
overall-nd
nd threw better punches and flowed better
my vote is N.D !
ima get that vote deleted cuz u got beef wit meQuote:
Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
pretty one-sidded....Nd got this in every category....here's y....
u fucked it up right there at the beginning....i know whereu was going with down and pound....but u ended in the same two words.....so it was pretty shitty to see that.....Nd had better punches, wordplay, and vocabulary.....i see u have upped ur skill better than ur Necrid battle which is good...but here is a breakdown for u two.....
Multis - Nd
Metas - Nd
Wordplay - Nd
Flow - Nd
Vocab - Nd (definitely)
Creativity - Nd
Personals - Nd
Complexity - Nd
RhymeScheme - Nd
Overall - Nd
Vote - Nd
peace
4:20
what are you talking about, you havn't even got a battle record, and most others have said the same, so what grounds you got for this...............and why you free ostin, if you got a problem it should be reported to the IR, you herb.........
structure-nd
flow-nd
vocab-nd
wordplay-nd
punches-nd
personals-nd
overall-nd
Sorry.. But.. I can't stand the thought of people going back to 'cave' man talk. And I like bigger words. The flow of ND, was great. But... I just don't seem to find any amusement.. Seriously.. with mystery's whole thing. People with class, kind of tend to realy get turned off with the whole "U is Stpid" way of talking. I just imagine joking with a hot guy next thing he does it roll his head back and says something like "Lahhl! Lahhl!" (Lol.) It's just a turn off... No offence. You can easily change it withing a couple of minites. Besides, I'm uppin this. I can't really vote.
(Oh Just as a"By the way" mysterie. I'll battle you. I don't care if you're a 'flyweight.' It just seems like a fun idea.... Are you in? And besides that.... I have some morbid sence of humor to predict what will happen too... If you catch my drift....)
not enough posts to vote but heres ma breakdown.....
flow=nd
vocab=nd
metas=nd
structure=nd
personals=none
punches=nd
need i say more????? wot wot!!!!
uppin again...................
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so one sided
metas=nd
wordplay=nd
punches=nd
sustainment=nd
flow=nd
creativity=nd
personals=nd
overall=nd
wtf is mysterie bitchin bout.....the first lines jus showed how bad he was........pz