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No D.R.
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Rules:
I'll set it up in front lines
You spit first
15-20 Lines
No Hate
No D.R.
Crew Can Vote
i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
blah quick keystyle spit up homie
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
YOU'S A HOE
No Beef ;)
INKWELL ONE HANDS DOWN WHITE THUG IS A BITCH AND INKWELL BLOW HIM AWAY LIKE HE WAS BRANDY AND RAY J IF YOU SMELL WHAT THE ROCK ISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS COOKIN
^^^
First of all this is ghetto booty your juss changed your name and your vote don't count. Your kid I juss smoked in the other battle. Get The Fuck Out THe Thread than banned you now your back. Leave
Upp'nnnn
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young wins this battle...............................too goood for this newbie, punches, flow, structure etc, were all excelled by young...
The other guy inkwell did well for a newb but young was too good
^Vote Doesn't Count
-Axe
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follow this link and vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez
^^^ No doubt thanx man.
1-0 me..
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i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
Nice mutlis with witty wordplay... nice punch
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
kinda blah...
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
second was kinda played....
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
good punch... strill coming with wordplay....
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
second line was nice
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
Nice with the punch as well... set up was kinda lacking...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
kinda blah closer
Overall... Average to good verse
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Piss poor punch... while feeding... weak
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Seriously... this was wack
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
wordplay but now punch
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
This was just bad...
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
still weak ass punches.....
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Gay... just dumb....
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
What are you thinking??? You used to know what a punch was
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
gay again........
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
lacking..... very blah..
Overall.... Below average to bad verse...
Vote- Inkwell
Basically Chrit Said Everything Needed To Say.
Young, That Verse Was below Average, It Was Something I Can Compete On...So You Kow Its Bad. InkWell Had Some Nice Punches, And His Wordplay Was Shining Throughout His verse...
Vote-Inkwell..
::~BreakDown~::
Punches-Pretty Close
Wordplay-Tie
Flow-YWT *Choppy Tho*
Multies-YWT
Creativity-Close....I Say Tie
Vocab-YWT
Overall Vote-YWT
Close Battle Tho......
But YoungWhiteThug19 Came A Lil Harder
Crew Vote... Gone
-Axe
i wasn't feelin this battle much---inkwell ya has a good flow, good wrdplay, couple aight punches---young ya had ok structure but ya flow was weak---the punches were pretty weak too----vote=inkwell
^^^ First of all InkWell can't vote fo you in your battle so you shouldn't even leave links cuz he only has 24 posts lol.
Uppp'nnnnnnnn
Quote:
Originally posted by Chrit
i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
Nice mutlis with witty wordplay... nice punch
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
kinda blah...
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
second was kinda played....
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
good punch... strill coming with wordplay....
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
second line was nice
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
Nice with the punch as well... set up was kinda lacking...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
kinda blah closer
Overall... Average to good verse
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Piss poor punch... while feeding... weak
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Seriously... this was wack
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
wordplay but now punch
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
This was just bad...
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
still weak ass punches.....
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Gay... just dumb....
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
What are you thinking??? You used to know what a punch was
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
gay again........
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
lacking..... very blah..
Overall.... Below average to bad verse...
Vote- YOUNGWHITE THUG
Vote deleted for this kid being retarded and quoting my vote...
Then changing the winner to young...
Fucking herb.
Jesus
-Chrit
1 line vote deleted......
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punches:inkwell
wordplay:inkwell
originality:inkwell
flow:tie
enjoyment:inkwell
overall better verse: inkwell
vote-inkwell
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ima say this goes to young white thug......heres my breakdown....
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-ink
wordplay-thug
punches-thug
personals-tie
overall-thug
props to the both of ya, but ima say ywt takes this.....
peace......
One line votes removed...........
Polls reopened at 4-3 inkwell.....
God...
D/R'ing in FL is pathetic.........
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Chrit you really don't like me do you man? I mean you have closed my battles, voted against me (Your Oppinion), and deleted 2 of my votes and what not. Man juss... I dont even know u dont want me to have wins and u dont like me do yoiu? Honestly tell the truth.
I read this battle...
As I wanted to peep it...
Then I come back...
And cat quoted my vote...
And pasted your name in....
Then I come back again and 2 cats posted 1 line votes...
All because you can vote and inkwell cant...
Its just bullshit...
And I get sick of it when I see it...
So I fix the polls and reopen shit for fair votes
^^
Aight man I got you.
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Don't Try To Sway The Vote
-Axe
I don't know man this was hard:
Punches:Young
Ink:Flow
Structure:Both
Vocab:Both
Multi:Both
Creativity:Both
Overal:Young
I vote form Young because of this line:
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
I loved that line, it was nice.
Hit this up please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85532
my vote goes to young caz he had better punches and his flowed a lil better.
no hate
peace.......
This Doesn't Count Either... Guess Chrit Didn't See This Vote Or The First Vote Or The Crew Vote. Polls Bein Reset To 4-2... Favor Of Ink
-Axe
UPPIN Over Closed
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^^^ MAN you fuckin bitch juss give me my goddamnn wins ... FUCK THIS IS THE SECOND TIME YA"LL HAVE OPEND IT... Fuck you Axe..
Wow... You Really Are An Herb... Cryin Cuz We Make The Battle Fair... Yup... Have A LOT Of Respect For You...
-Axe
Hands Down Merk IMO.. Inkwell Had A Better Structure And Wordplay. These Weak Multis By YWT Are Horrible. How The Hell Are You 40-6? Jesus...
Quotables:
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
Vote- Inkwell For A MUCH Better Verse..