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5 bars
no c h dr votes
i set
you first
notice this is a friendly battle
Yea...
Friendly...
Very...
Um...
375+ Posts To Vote...
Agreed Mental?...
Holla...
And You Forgot Ta Add Due By Tuesday....
Ayo Kursed...
Are We Still Doing This...
We Are In The Same Crew...
And I Want No Beef...
So...
It's Your Call...
I Aint Gonna Start Writing Till Ya Decide...
Don't Worry Homie... I Brought Da Hearse Wit Me... .:Chuckles To Himself:. Ya Done Dawg... Yo... Ayo... Yo...
Da Way My Verse Suck Out Ya Last Breath, You Would Think I Ryme Wit Meth...
I Take Ya Back Into Da Past And Make 8/10 Ya Time Of Death...
It's Like I Pay No Rent Da Way I'm Owning Da House...
You A Dawg Wit Rabies Da Way I Got Ya Foamin Out Da Mouth...
Don't Get Legistic, You Just Anotha Statistic, One Of The Merked, Derres Been Thousands At Least...
You Thought You Had Da Win, But I Flipped Shit, Like Lil Boys Molestin Da Priests...
Im A Straight Serial Killa, Im Comparable To 'Bunches Of Oats'...
He Get No Attention From RB, To Make Himself Feel Good He Keep His "Punches In Quotes..."
Like Da Lotta Luck Girls, You Spit Power Wit Clovers...
I Could Be A Midget But I'd Still Tower Ya Over...
Dis Kat Could Get Mixed Up In War Wit Gorillas And Still Wouldn't Be A Known Rebel...
He Thinkin Kids Bow Ta His Feet When Dey Just Tryna Stoop Ta His Level...
You Changin Names Like Chameleon Colors, GBpusha, But Ya Shelfs Are Still Bare...
He Altered His Name, But To His Dismay, The Lack Of Talent Wuz Still There...
AND WHAT?! .:Walks Away And Throws The Mic Over His Shoulder... And You Thought It'd Be Friendly... HAHA....
aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME...
Went A Lil Ova Homie...
Sry...
Holla...
Spit Soon...
I'll Be Waiting...
Patiently...
Patiently Waiting....
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Patiently...
Waiting Patiently....
Ima Extend Da Time Till Tomoro At 5PM...
Since You My Boi And All...
No No-Show Votes Will Be Accepted....
Hurry Up Tho Dawg...
If You Get On Drop Your Verse...
Aight check it
Like a midgets intestines, in this battle your comin up short//
aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME...? only time your in the game is playin EA Sports//
Steady pastin, teeth back to gums, leave your heart rapidly beatin and hastin//
Ill rip out your eyes and make you eat them so you see what your tastin//
This nigga has 35 battles in text, now he claims hes a vet//
This bitches punches dont land, cant hit me, you havent even hit puberty yet//
Like bad teachers, im leavin you feeble minded and teach less//
Rip out your voice box out, pass it right, so you say I "left" you speechless//
Buryin you underground like a plant and lettin you grow like a crop//
Like im puttin a "hex" on your blood flow the way your heart "stops"//
The only time you write hot shit is usin a pen indulged in flames//
Leave your organs deleted then drafted like ctrl delete Lebron James//
Im like the heavy weight champ the way I leave your block Rocky//
Ill kick you in the stomach givin you a hernia disk so you can play disk jockey//
Explaination:
A stop sign is a hexagon
I spit 7 bars cause you spit 14 lines
this battle is ass...............P's verse was wack dawg, i cant believe some1 said that was hot
Kursed's first line was played.....midgets->comin up short........how many times has that been used??
i cant vote on this.........this battle was weak on both sides...........
You're Just Lookin For Hate Aren't You?
-Axe
Uppin Nuccas...
And KINGOFKINGS....
Wut You Gon Do Dawg...
Throw A Bow...
You Need Ta Hop Off My Dick And Run Out My Thread...
I Smell Pussy...
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300 posts to vote
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sorry to free post but, kingofkings is just a hater----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Originally posted by Mentally Kursed
300 posts to vote
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allrighty folks, ok battle
Young-
Da Way My Verse Suck Out Ya Last Breath, You Would Think I Ryme Wit Meth...
I Take Ya Back Into Da Past And Make 8/10 Ya Time Of Death...
^^first line nice, second weak...decent opener...7/10
It's Like I Pay No Rent Da Way I'm Owning Da House...
You A Dawg Wit Rabies Da Way I Got Ya Foamin Out Da Mouth...
^^lol..this was nice...8/10
Don't Get Legistic, You Just Anotha Statistic, One Of The Merked, Derres Been Thousands At Least...
You Thought You Had Da Win, But I Flipped Shit, Like Lil Boys Molestin Da Priests...
^^wow...nice, solid punch...9/10
Im A Straight Serial Killa, Im Comparable To 'Bunches Of Oats'...
He Get No Attention From RB, To Make Himself Feel Good He Keep His "Punches In Quotes..."
^^naa...cmon man, this is played...5/10
Like Da Lotta Luck Girls, You Spit Power Wit Clovers...
I Could Be A Midget But I'd Still Tower Ya Over...
^^played...4/10
Dis Kat Could Get Mixed Up In War Wit Gorillas And Still Wouldn't Be A Known Rebel...
He Thinkin Kids Bow Ta His Feet When Dey Just Tryna Stoop Ta His Level...
^^decent......6/10
You Changin Names Like Chameleon Colors, GBpusha, But Ya Shelfs Are Still Bare...
He Altered His Name, But To His Dismay, The Lack Of Talent Wuz Still There...
^^best line of this battle hands down...nice fuckin punch....flow was dead on.....10/10+1 for top line of the battle=11/10
Total-50/70
Mk
like a midgets intestines, in this battle your comin up short//
aND DaTS... Da BaLLGaME...? only time your in the game is playin EA Sports//
^^lol...flipped it nicely,....decent opener..7/10
Steady pastin, teeth back to gums, leave your heart rapidly beatin and hastin//
Ill rip out your eyes and make you eat them so you see what your tastin//
^^eh...ok I guess, not too good...6/10
This nigga has 35 battles in text, now he claims hes a vet//
This bitches punches dont land, cant hit me, you havent even hit puberty yet//
^^should have used something else besides hit, made it repetative, but nice punch...8/10
Like bad teachers, im leavin you feeble minded and teach less//
Rip out your voice box out, pass it right, so you say I "left" you speechless//
^^nice.......8/10
Buryin you underground like a plant and lettin you grow like a crop//
Like im puttin a "hex" on your blood flow the way your heart "stops"//
^^ummm...I get it..but....no...bad line..4/10
The only time you write hot shit is usin a pen indulged in flames//
Leave your organs deleted then drafted like ctrl delete Lebron James//
^^um...dont make much sense...blah...4/10
Im like the heavy weight champ the way I leave your block Rocky//
Ill kick you in the stomach givin you a hernia disk so you can play disk jockey//
^^decent finisher, pretty weak though..6/10
Total-43/70
numbers don't lie......Young took this battle...esp. with the closer....but pretty good battle...good luck to both of ya
My vote=young
^^your opinion
aight uppin 3
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iight decent battle.......
best liens by P=
"It's Like I Pay No Rent Da Way I'm Owning Da House...
You A Dawg Wit Rabies Da Way I Got Ya Foamin Out Da Mouth..."
"Don't Get Legistic, You Just Anotha Statistic, One Of The Merked, Derres Been Thousands At Least...
You Thought You Had Da Win, But I Flipped Shit, Like Lil Boys Molestin Da Priests..."
You Changin Names Like Chameleon Colors, GBpusha, But Ya Shelfs Are Still Bare...
He Altered His Name, But To His Dismay, The Lack Of Talent Wuz Still There...
8/10 overall verse
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Kursed-
This nigga has 35 battles in text, now he claims hes a vet//
This bitches punches dont land, cant hit me, you havent even hit puberty yet//
Im like the heavy weight champ the way I leave your block Rocky//
Ill kick you in the stomach givin you a hernia disk so you can play disk jockey//
overall verse- 7/10
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vote- P........better punches.......1
VOTE - MENTALLY
Young P's Verse Wuz Decent But Had
To Many Fillers..MK Came A LiL Played But
At Least He Attacked..P Self-Hyped Himself
A Lot Nd Structure Wuz Bad . . .
Good Battle Tho..
Keep Write'n Ya'll..
cant vote but...........
mentally took this due to his capacity of punches
young had to many set up lines,these are ok for audio but in text ya gotta hit with every line......like mental...via one.....but anyways mad props to both good battle ya'll...pz
vote=mental
uppin fo votes 4
dont sleep drop a link and well peep it
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No...
We Werent Accepting Kids With Under 300 Posts To Vote...
Should Be 2-0 Me...
PLEASE ALTER THE POLLS TO THE CORRECT COUNT
ya thats about all^^and i cant vote cause i dont got 300 posts but ya i think metally wonQuote:
Originally posted by WiL Getcha
VOTE - MENTALLY
Young P's Verse Wuz Decent But Had
To Many Fillers..MK Came A LiL Played But
At Least He Attacked..P Self-Hyped Himself
A Lot Nd Structure Wuz Bad . . .
Good Battle Tho..
Keep Write'n Ya'll..
pCe
Aight Yo...
Crew Votes Accepted...
And Dont Change Polls...
Were Gonna Count Wil Getchas As Brixtons Vote...
Since Wil Getcha Doesnt Have Enough Posts...
One...
This was a close ass battle.. I'll break it down for you...
Punches: Equal
Flow: Mental (I felt it just a little bit more)
Personals: Young P
Vocab: Didn't really see anything spectacular
Structure: Equal
Metas: Mental
This was too close but I think I gotta go with mental cause I felt his stuff just a bit more...
Im In The 900's For Posts Now...
How Cool...
Uppin.......
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uppin fo votes
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PCEs Vote Dont Count...
I Said Over 300 Posts...
You Faggots Need To Listen Ta Da Rules...
Bitches...
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Breakdown:
Punches:P
Metas:P
Flow:Mental
Wordplay:P
Disses:P
Multies:Neither
Tight Battle But Young P Took This One.He Out Weighed Mental.Mental Had Metas,Punches And Wordplay But Not Enough To Get The Win.He Started Strong But Slacked Off Towards The End
Vote- Young P
Ok...
Uppin For Votes...
300 POSTS TO VOTE
Dont Get It Twisted....
Uppin....
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Dis Was A Very Very Close Battle.....
Punches-TIE
Flow-TIE
Wordplay-MT
Overall-MT
MT Just Snuck Dis Out By A Hair Cuz Of Da Wordplay Both Rappers Faded.... Seemed U 2 R Bored Of Battlin Now....
VOTE - MENTALLY
P Had Too Many Fillers Nd
His Structure Wus Fucked Up..
Mentally's Verse Wus Pretty
Consistent..Punches Were
Decent..But Flow Wus A
LiL Choppy..Keep Write'n
Ya'll..No Hate..
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You Better Not Vote On Both Names Artik...
Fuckin D/R...
Or Hate...
W/E...
But You Already Voted On Your Other Name...
So Dont VOte On That One^^....
i agree with alpha on this....Mental had a nice opener....but he started to slack towards the end of his shit.....u both were pretty equal on wordplay....but young had more consistency throughout his verse which is what i think got this for him....no hate...just a vote.....
1 More Vote Needed:
Smoka vs. Anthro
peace
4:20
i THOUGHT THAT YOU GUYS NEED TO CLEAN UP THE TECHNIQUE BUT, STILL A N "ALRIGHT' EFFORT ON THE BOTH OF YOUR PARTS. IF YOU NEED A LESSON GO TO BATTLECRY IN BITCH SLAPPED
VOTE - MENTALLY
Young P's Verse Wuz Decent But Had
To Many Fillers..MK Came A LiL Played But
At Least He Attacked..P Self-Hyped Himself
A Lot Nd Structure Wuz Bad . . word to this i think p was a lil off..he has came harder....and it was mad stretched...mentally came iight.. he had hott punches and his personals were dope
Ok...
Well Now The Poll Is Correct ...
4-4....
Aight....
One More...
Uppin.....\
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This Battle Is Opened... Because In The Polls... It Says GBPusha Voted For Mentally... But There Is No Explanation.
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uppin...for someone to close this shit......
this is a good battle.....
lets see who the muh' fuckin winner is.....
yep..
pz....
Thats Votin For Yourself Than!...
Thats Bullshit...
Hes GBPUSHA Too...
You Fuckin Dick...
Wut The Fuck.....
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Ok lets see, too many disses too midgets, thay are ppl too DAMMIT....lol
Punches:young edged it
FLoh:tie
Complexity:n/a
structure:both
Overall:Yp
Vote:Yp
close ya'll...close
Mentally Kursed was IP banned for voting for himself.
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