LoL Iight..
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Verses Due: 40 Mins
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LoL Iight..
8 Lines
Verses Due: 40 Mins
House Rules
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Chekk
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:whacky:
.|i made the dealine but in the wrong thread|.
.|n ur suppose to be d/q'd for not botherin to post but whateva|.
.|what bionicle say sticks in ur head like a nice but dumb song|.
.|how i'm gonna take this man serious when his mic's the one with the gloves on|.
.|i smoke the tracks, of coarse....i'm bi0nicle, i'll choke this fag|.
.|u broke n wack, sayin u hotter than me is like sayin the pope can rap|.
.|dj artik, he scratch n mix while bi0 get on the mic n slash ur wrists|.
.|i blast with hits n like throwin up in garbage cans, i'll trash ur spits|.
.|listenin to artikqlit's shit is just a biography of how a whore can manage|.
.|u beatin me wont happnen like catholic's having sex before marage|.
Bio couldn't develop a hit, growing marijuana
hes just confused about his sex,like his role model, madonna
you had no chance, so its easy for me to make you "bleeddawg
this battle was more lopsided then fat and skinny kids playing seesaw
before Bio even spoke i became a clumsy comedian and dropped this joke
got yo rope and like suicidal teens fulfillin their threats, bio lose'n all hope
I Advance And Attack, Give you No Chance To Fukk'n React
Crush This Herb' Like Plants Gettin 'Smashed,' he Cant Get More 'Wack'
G-Lukk
CLOSE
Vote-Art
Punches-Art
Metas-Both
Similes-Both
Vocab-Bio
Multies-Art
Art takes it wit punches and multies
Bios were a biiiit played, like the catholic thing, nice opener tho Bio
Favourite line:
you had no chance, so its easy for me to make you "bleeddawg
this battle was more lopsided then fat and skinny kids playing seesaw
HAHAHAHAHAHA^
nice
Eh can u guys please hit my battle up wit Strategies, you'll see it, thanks
Close shit boys
that was hella close but ima say bionicle takes it, heres my breakdown......
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-art
wordplay-tie
punches-bionicle
personals-bionicle
overall-bionicle
props to the both of ya, but ima say bionicle takes this.
yo if u have the time can u peep this and post and honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84864
itd be much appreciated.
peace......
here da breakdown:
Punches-Art
Metas-Art
Similes-Art
Vocab-Bio
Multies-Art
structure: Art
Complexity: Art
overall vote: Art
well fought battle by both. bionicle wasn't ur best verse, but it was still a close battle. good job art.
2-1 me
upp'n
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Damn, I Don't Want All These Newbs Vote'n
Restriction: 250 Posts To Vote . . . . . . . . . .
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Art took this in a very close one....
Good punches and flow from both,,,
Slightly enjoyed the metas and wordplay in Art's verse more however...
Hence, Vote- Art
Peep me vs CrazyE
ignore the 250 post thing.
I'm no newbie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=74276
Soldier Advance And Attack, Give Wordz No Chance To React To Enhance And ComeBack, I Put A Trance On This Cat And Crush This Wanabe Herb Like Fake Plants Gettin Smashed!..
I Advance And Attack, Give you No Chance To Fukk'n React
Crush This Herb' Like Plants Gettin 'Smashed,' he Cant Get More 'Wack
^^Sound v similar... i vote Bion 4 not bitin... shit was obvious u bit me Artik, i hate biters no matter who u R
vote = bion
I Din't Bite U..WTF?
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That's So Much Bullshit..
Carry On Wit Tha Votes..
This Is Bullshit . . . Vote For Bio If U Honestly Thot He Took..
Ric Give'n It To Him Cus He Thot I Bit . . . Did Not..
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.|i do see a big similarity in the lines|.
.|i'm not sure if mods or admin consider it bitin|.
.|but i think its too big of a coincidence|.
Vote- bioncle
This was close. Both ya'lls first two lines were decent after that I was like. . wtf ?
Played concepts and weak punches
Art I can tell you didn't try. Still the closer was cool. Madonna Line was Filler. Bi0's opener was nice.
Sort of a blah battle but bio JUS took it.
well.....in my opinion Q takes this everywhere.....
sweet flow....
really funny punches....
kickin werd play.....
and an overall powerfull verse.....
both nice....but vote Q
close ass battle here.......
punches - tie
flow - tie
vocab complexity - tie
enjoyment - Art
personals - tie....weernt too much
structure - tie
overall vote - Art
Upp'n.
HONEST
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Close Ass battle But both came played
made my decission Hard
I think bi got this cus of a little bit more creativity in 1 punch
of it wasn''t for that I'd declare this a tie
word^ and it was very close despite if artik bit or not. that lin ewas very played anyway it just had "ok" vocab
however bion jus outdid him w/less filler ...all of arktik seemed filler. whilst bion actually connected his disses and punches (wack or not lol)
vote - BiOniclE