gbacd vs yog dogg

aight homies, heres ur battle

10 lines max

no crew votes
no biting
no feeding
no dickriding

verses will be due 45 min after check in

good luck to both of u

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okay check it...

i will be the first to post on this battle,
i will crash the mic, make yo brains rattle/
this battle was over before i checked in,
we aint kin, i am the king, where the fuck have u been?/
i thought i told u dawg that u had no chance,
i saw it from the begginin, even though it was just a glance/
u a newb, why u wanna battle, u talk big fo such a small dick,
damn i would fight but i'd hit u so quick, u would be left sick/
so to win this battle u better spit very well and steady,
lets get this over with so i can win tell me when ur ready/

iz like, I'm caucasian, most rap is tasteless
I'm speechless, don't know their language
All I know is I'm not a gangsta G (you know)
I am just a white guy who plays the keys
Love Journey's song "Don't Stop Believin"
Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven"
Listen to rap, and you need to give me the reasons
Animal House, Byrds I'm feelin
I'm deceivin that rap music cheese, just tease it
I won't be able to rap at 34, and rappin wit is such a bore

that was pretty good gbacd but hey the concept of rap "battling" is to aim ur insults at me. and i saw none. it was like a short song

okay Uppin in her............................................... .................................................. .............................................

aight, both of u need to elevate, but heres my breakdown....

structure-tie
flow-yog
vocab-gbacd
wordplay-tie
punches-yog
personals-tie
overall-yog_dogg

props to the both of ya, but ima give this to yog_dogg

peace.......

k thanks hey still uppin in her............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ........

some elevation is needed by both sides. overall this was a pretty whack battle but i got to give the edge to yog-dog his punches are what won this for him.

my vote=yog-dog

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I can't poll vote...but yog_dog got this...the other kid'z verse wasn't even a battle rhyme...and he bit my avy...lol

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cmon quit sleepin on dis shit we still Uppin in herre............................................. .................................................. .....................

YOG GOT THIS MORE TALENT FPR BETLIG BUT YOU NEED ELIVATION NONE THE LESS.............................................. ..............

^thanks but WE NEED VOTES............................................. .................................................

Both need MAJOR elevation
but dogg takes this cuz he actually had punches
gbacd was rappin about his fucking life, and a boring 1 at that lmao
both need to report to the wackness emergency center immediately
vote- yog dogg

both of you need to elevation...but yea i gotta say yog_dogg took this....yog_dogg came with punches where as gbacd didnt have any punches or anything that resembled a battle verse....more of a story telling verse, instead of a battle verse....
so overall i gotta say yog_dogg took this

my vote=yog_dogg

structure:tie
flow:yogdog
vocab:gbacd
wordplay:tie
punches:yogdog
personals:tie
overall:yogdogg

nice battle

aiight peace