yo homie, u and me, lets do this
10 line max
u spit first
u know the rules
post within 1 hour after check in
good luck
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yo homie, u and me, lets do this
10 line max
u spit first
u know the rules
post within 1 hour after check in
good luck
yo b i got stuff to do, let me get people to vote on my other battle, so ill post my verse tomorrow, if thats ok wit u.
yeah that be cool
i didnt even know that we be battlin'
you should've sent me a pm
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aight homie, so verses will be due at 10:30 tomorrow night, cause i got a busy day tomorrow, so yo good luck, and ill murder u tomorrow.
peace.....
yeah i will uhh murder u all............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............
i'ma murder this man...
he's the type to loose a fight wit a dyke... jk jk
(lil tit 8 mile)............................................. .................................................. ................
aight
CHECKIN IN HOMIE............................................. .......
peace......................
aight check it.....
yo u fuckin drummerman, my rhymes ull be like tanks the way i run over this man/
with the shit u spit u should be banned, the only love u get is man-to-hand/
by battlin me ull never see good feedback, my rhymes leave u tellin people "did u see that?"/
ill be runnin at u wit a gun and ski mask, wit no other intention than to fire this gat/
so just stick to playin wit them sticks, the best chance u have of winnin is by doin a remix/
u should avert ur eyes cause u dont wanna see this, the way im punchin u ull need ur face fixed/
im interested in what u say in return, i spit fire so u cant even type ur so burned/
ur leavin wit a loss but i hope u learned, u thought ud beat, but i guess the tides have turned/
i dunno what ur doin, please drop the joint, u call urself a thug, but run when put at gunpoint/
See theres been millions of people beggin u to quit, but i guess u kept missin the point/
no hate homie, waitin for u to drop
peace......
checkin in.....................................
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fuck man im gona blast ur ass up with my glok.
i dont mind if you go runnin behind that door, dont forget the lock
i gonna bust the door down with shower of lead,
i wouldnt be suprised if i got you in the head.
when i bust in that room and your crying on the floor,
im gonna shoot ur ass up i dont care anymore
im gonna stomp ur face in and kick you in the chest,
when i stop and look at my work i know its my best
try and beat that bitch...
Peace...
^^^i already beat that bitch, lets get some votes up in herrre.....
peace...........................
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Vote = Got love foe rap
punches were harder the internals gave this a nice flow. good stuff.
Drummerman ya came solid with ya agngster tip, but no real witts. ya stuff wasn't bad, but not good enough foe the vote.
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ill be runnin at u wit a gun and ski mask, wit no other intention than to fire this gat/
so just stick to playin wit them sticks, the best chance u have of winnin is by doin a remix/
^ Comedy
Fuckin vote.............................................. ..............
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UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
yo drummerman you had a better flow then against me but my vote still goes to gotaloveforrap. he came wit da punches and you had some but he is just better wit the wordplay and the vocab so i think he took this one
uppin this shit....................
lookin fo some votes........................
peace.........................
best linesQuote:
Originally posted by gotaloveforrap
aight check it.....
by battlin me ull never see good feedback, my rhymes leave u tellin people "did u see that?"/
ill be runnin at u wit a gun and ski mask, wit no other intention than to fire this gat/
u should avert ur eyes cause u dont wanna see this, the way im punchin u ull need ur face fixed/
im interested in what u say in return, i spit fire so u cant even type ur so burned/
peace......
good shit
better flow punches
metas,
you name it
vote-gotlaove
peep dis battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84964
pCe
yo come on, lets get some votes up in herrrre, im still uppin.....
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN.. ......
peace.......
this is straight up commedy
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^^^uhh generally people break down the battle and leave a vote, but whatever, comedy is kool
peace.....
yo cmon this is already my fourth time uppin, lets get some votes on this shit..........................
peace...................................
g got you but your elivaten d................................................. .................................................. .......................
^^^thanx holmes.........we still waitin for some more votes up in herrree
cmon yall quit sleepin on this........god damn
peace........
got a love for rap
ripped him. He was wack but still better punches and well everything else. Your bars are stretched and forced. Overall keep at it
opener:gotlove
closer:gotlove
flow:tie
wordplay:gotlove
structure:tie
punches:gotlove
overall:gotlove
drummerman:your shit was aiight, but you gotta use more wordplay,
gotlove:nice drop,
Yo Gotlove ........stole it easily
He just came harder nothin too speacil but Decent
Yo The other cat sucked you need to elevate BIG time
thanks foe the compliment willi..................
i will try harded next time..................
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fuck you BRAVE im just a newb
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yo i gotta go with gotaloveforrap on this one....
he came with the harder punches and more wordplay....Drummerman didnt really come with any hard punches or anything...so overall i think gotaloveforrap dropped the better verse, with more punches and wordplay...
vote=gotaloveforrap