Doctor J Vs. X-Ecution

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no d.r.
no biting
no recycling
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WARNING: I WILL BE CHECKING ON WHO POST HERE

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BLIND POST.......BOTH DROPS IN 30 MIN......1

i mess up your vital organs and store them for an organ shortage/
I'll give your dick to a constipated asian, they're used to short-shit!/

i'll Leave u Scorched-Bro, Try-N-Win-it, i'll Leave u Fried-N-Shredded/
this kid Is Pathetic, Wit "Less Flavor" Than a Person Thats Diabetic/

A Bomb-Threat Created-and-Demonstrated For Mind-Stress/
Wit this bitch's Back Against The Wall Like a Spined-Chest/

Pull some Alfred hitchcock shit, so It'll be HARD WHEN PAIN FLOCKS/
I'm sure everyone thinks of u like the club scene in Iceland BARS JUST AINT HOT/

My lyrics like Bustin' a 9 I got you Duckin' the rhyme/
Punch through the Vest on your chest till your Sternum touches your SPINE!/

I’m A Rack-Up-Dis-Kid, "He Claim He Freestyle" ‘Cuz-Homos-Good-Wit-Fashion-Tips'/
Best Relax-Ur-Hips! "U Must Exercise Ya Butt Cheeks "Tha-Way-Ur-Ass-Gets-'Ripped'//
Check-It-Kid, My Verbal Techs-Will-Spit And Land Hard Punches Til I’ve Wrecked-My-Fists/
And I’m A Specialist, Cuz I'll Deck-This-Bitch Until He's Connected Only By His Neck-And-Dick//
I Infected-Sick And Injected-Ticks To Prove Ya Can’t Flow Wit Ya Neglected-Clique/
So I’m Gonna Project-A-Diss With So Many Intoxicated Flows, That It'll Leave U Left-In-Piss//
Without Lookin At Cha Verse-I’ll-Disperse-Words That’ll Leave U Emotionally Hurtin/
If Words Hurt Then Mine Will Disintegrate Ur Body So U Can Do Some Soul Searchin//
X I'll Fill Anthrax In A Syringe, And Stab The Needle In Ur Optical Lens, Then U’ll See Death/
Den I’ll Splatter Yo Lungs On Your Veins So Ur Illiterate Ass Can Bleed Breath//

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vote time........lets go kids.......vote away.....1

breakdown---
punches=doc
sustaiment=doc
flow=tie
metas=doc
origanality=x
vocab=x
creativity=doc
overall=doc........jus def had harder punches.thats all....nice battle peeps
hit this up.........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82725

.|X took this|.
.|i give it to Doctor J for the minor wordplay|.
.|n consistency of flow|.
.|but X took this punch wise as usual|.
.|drop a fair one here|.
.| http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=84443 |.

.|i can't poll cus i'm at a friend house|.
.|i'll poll when i get home though|.

Thanx for da vote

uppin 4 votes(1)

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personally i thin x-ecution got dis!!!!!!

flow=X-Ecution
structure=X-Ecution
rythem=doctor J
word play=tie
punches X-Ecution
overall=X-Ecution

vote= X-Ecution

yo hit this up tell me what cha think vote for witch ever one ya want on dis but i'll tell ya's this pine-cone resign'd

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...665#post829665

sorry thats supose to be in there lol

my fault
and for got to vote.
but i told ya who i vote for

this match was even all the way except for the punches.....
doctor J gets my vote cuz his punches were harder...good shit by the both though...



GameTime...

Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat

anyways 1-1

uppin 4 votes(2)

yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle

^ bullshyt vote give a better explination..........if not ima get that removed im not acceptin no bs votexs.........1

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Originally posted by Doctor_J
Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat

anyways 1-1

uppin 4 votes(2)

yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle

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i meant over 500 post

uppin i guess(3)

yea kid vote like dis for example -Brixton- post so post again

explain more though thats sumtin thing they have to learn x

uppin for votes(4)

Very Close

Punches: X
Vocab: Doc
Multies: Doc
Metas: Doc
Flow: X

I gave this to Execution basicaly because of Flow, very close
on and Doc you should shortan ya lines, u have nice voccab tho

Can u guys PLEASE hit this up wit an h onest one itd be appreciated on mine and Rappads Behaf, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84150

flow-Doctor J
wordplay-X
punches-doctor J
enjoyment-Doctor J
originality-Tie
creativity-Doc
structure-X

vote-Doctor J

Sorry I meant Metas: X

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More Punches or Strong Wordplay/Minor Punches..
( Doctor J)...................( X Ecution)

I Was Feelin X More Here
Not A Bad Battle But
He Had More Creativity in
His Punches..

Vote - X Ecution

.|ok i'm about to poll|.
.|X do u ever vote on anyone's battle once ur voted on?|.
.|i really need ur vote here|.
.|http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=84443|.
.|appreciate it|.

i can't vote yet but i think j got dis

he had better flow, punches, and he was consistent

i think yall need to read the battle verses another round

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Originally posted by pimpin69
i can't vote yet but i think j got dis

he had better flow, punches, and he was consistent

i think yall need to read the battle verses another round

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i agree but i can't vote either

yes bionicle i do vote i do it on ma time when im free i do ma shyt 1st n handle things after.......dont worry ur battle will b voted on........btw uve been suspected of D/R......i appreciate ur votes n stuff but jump off a lil but this is commin from dr.j so w/e.......just lettin u kno

.|i vote fair|.
.|just that u the only one i seen on that have enough post to vote on that battle|.
.|n it wasn't d/r becus this wasnt that close to Dr. J (dash boy)|.

iight 1 more vote..........
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..............................this is y i post in fl........fast battles most of the time......thx to all the peeps that voted so far........lets go...1

damn dis was a quick battle

full of d.r. next time x we gotta get a 500 post vote rule cuz only vets know how to vote...obvoiusly

im out (4-2) last up

yea iight but this wasnt dr.......so this was str8 but i kno u n bionicle got stuff to settle but yea.......quik shyt........1

i ain't got shit to settle wit him

he's just on ur dick and he riding the hell out of it

shit hope yall don't get banned...LOL

if nethin he will i got nothin to do wit him voten on ma battles..........
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R U At Bionicle's Crib As We Speak

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lets go people 1 more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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to start with...i thought they were both strong verses....it was a tight battle....

metas - doc J
vocab doc J
flow - x
word play - x
structure - x
punches - x

Vote=x

they were all quite strong, and the votes were close, but i thought the overall flow and slightly harder hittin punch lines did it for me, and it seemed an easier read.........Peace!

yep....X got this one also......he had some dope punches.......

i was feelin ur verse......Dr.J...i dont see how ur 13-2........

yo ass got to battle newbie's and thats all........

because X just killed u wit his verse homie.........

no hate...just speaking the truth......so......

my vote goes to X Ecution......for a better verse overall.......

1 sided battle.....stay up

yep..
pz.....