OLI_DOGG VS jego (must see this)

ite dogg rulez =
8 linez
ill spit 1st u spit 10 mins after
no d/r etc.

gd luck...................................pz

ite checkin in................................................ .................................................. .....................................pz

aigggght.......................................... .................................................. ........................................

ite

listen jego go to da nurse about your *choke*,
then see the surgen about no longer wanting to be a *bloke*(transexual lol)

this stuff mite be shit cus i havent rapped in *ages*,
but my words are just waiting to pounce, like animals in *cages*,

the only animals your be seeing is your girlfriends *crabs*,
you can only see your dick in the mirror cus of all yall *flab*(s)

so listen faggot u aint reached puberty, so sit on ur *pushchair*,
this faggot thaught he found his dick but, found out it was a pubic *hair*


biatch..................pz

ite little rushed yall cus he sed 2 hurry up so bit shady...........................u got 10 minz to drop man .................................................. ..............pz

yo look that was just stupid so i'll just tell you da truth,
your a ruthless fool with a life of no use and your last verse was the proof

i've never once been challenged by such low mental capacity
fo now on follow afta me cuz im a rap masta classicaly

here listen you english idiot priss bitch
was it tea time in UK, is that why it took u 10 minute to spiT?

a dip shit worthless dirt verse dont EVER stand a chance,
u should just quit spittin now and maybe learn to break dance

UPPPPPPIN

and this fool is from ENGLAND thats what this line was about:
"here listen you english idiot priss bitch
was it tea time in UK, is that why it took u 10 minute to spiT?"

peaace

giv a fuck dogg get over it man y r pll going to vote for u over me jst cus im english this shits about rappin man not ur little penis............................................. ..............fuck u newbie..............................biatch

shit fool i was just explainin my line. it wouldnt be a good line unless someone knew the thinkin behind it. chill out dawg
that post wasnt about votes, it was just explainin the line
calm down dude

bitch dat was abit ovious man explain it in () nxt time man............................................... .................................................. .................pz

ite uppin(1) honest votez plz dnt let dis 1 die thx yall.............................................. .................................................. .................................pz

both you stop bickering, tho i cant poll but i say oli did better of the two noobs

better disses, thats it in a nutshell

Vote = Oli

ima break it down:
opener:tie
finisher:oli
wordplay:oli
structure:tie
punches:Oli
MY VOTE:OLI

jego u had a nice verse, but only 4 lines altogether dawg.

Oli u was consistant, but the gya thing is a bit played, transexual:lol


peep this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84191


aiight

peace

yeah he had 4 lines too, it was four line limit. man i cant belive fools actually like your punches. "oh your so agy u have a small dick" shits amateur. chocke bloke age cage crab flab chair hair
that sounds like a 5 year old tellin me rhymin words.

u wanna batlle wit me, muthafuckin u might tell me to stop rappin an learn to break dance, that is a hard ass punch u lil pussy

Better over all is Oli he just had it and i think we all new that that was an english line cause it said UK

HIT ME UP ON A DQ VOTE CTUNK CAUSE OF NO SHOW
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...559#post828559

fuck u jego man no wer ur not wanted bitch.shut the fuck up and let pll vote........................uppin (2)......................thx.....................p z

uppin. chill out

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opener:jeggo
finisher: tie
wordplay: jeggo
structure:oli
punches:jeggo
overal: jeggo

ive seen better from both of u
peace

yo this was wack,both raps were weak, but i'll break it down for y'as, punches-oli origionality-j structure- tie finisher- tie wordplay-j, overall -j,, i just felt his more, oli that shit was so played, find some new shit adn i might consider you worthy of winning, you both need to elevate, but J got this one............

lol......bitch.................................... .....................ite uppin(3).......................................... ...........................pz

Vote-------------> Oli

Btter punches, flow and what not, thats about all this battle had anyway, just flow and punches and i enjoyed OLI's more

Peace

Please hit this up OLI with an honest vote, thanks bro dont sleep on it its ILL

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=85248

thx yall.......................................uppin(4 )....................cmom......................... .................................................. ...........pz

LST UPPIN(5)...............................PLZ PLZ DNT LET DIS 1 DIE............................................... ....THX........................................... ..................................PZ

not a strong battle at all but there was one clear winner.........OLI DOGG..........even though his verse was not strong, the other cat came WEAK...............Flow was shit by Jego, punches were worthless and OLI was not great but at least punches were thrownn and some hit............................................... .............

Jego had no structure, OLI did so I give it to OLI because the other cats verse was weak,and his was basically much better, but didn't take much to beat that verse anyway..........

VOTE:OLI

oh yeah hit this up with an honest vote.....................

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hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez

Thanx

thx man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....................pz

aight willi pretty much summed it up but I would say that jego got the opener and oli had the structure/flow so here it is for oli ......................................