10-16 lines
no crew votes
no beef votes
no dikridin votes
I spit first
CHECK IN DATE::::: THURS 2ND OCTOBER (just so it's clear if he no shows)
Good luck
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10-16 lines
no crew votes
no beef votes
no dikridin votes
I spit first
CHECK IN DATE::::: THURS 2ND OCTOBER (just so it's clear if he no shows)
Good luck
Check, I'll spit now, he said he'll spit tomoz on a pm:
Check:
So he thinks he’s gonna test, man I hate wannabee rap pretendin’ testers/
Fuckin with me child molester, I’ll introduce you your fuckin ancestors/
This guy’s death’s on the card’s, like rap was a game of poker/
I’m gonna wet this guy’s chest but I ain’t got a super soaker/
This small cat can't fuck with big timers, he's scared, plus he's spineless/
He'll have a heart attack like John Candy or he'll develop alzheimers/
Your whole style is wack, I’m sure this faggots hooked on heroin and crack/
Cos in his battle with Tax man he asked tax to hit him from the back/
Do you dare to speak, see me in the street, your definately bound to get capped/
Pull the gat, shoot ya kneecaps,peel ya capp, and that's that/
MC killa, I'm an animal, plus I eat MC's like I was an a cannibal/
Comin to spit in reply?,Why? your thoughts are irrational/
I'm not gonna lie you'll never beat this emcee, I'm too strong you see/
No matter how many times we battle you ain't got the skill to beat me/
You had a 0-0 record, you should've battled a fellow newbie, Why'd you risk it/
Some body find where he lives, save him, he got his wrist slit/
Alrite then son, post ya verse on thurs and see who wins, if ya don't post on thurs like you said, I'll get a no-show, so post.............................................. .............
[B]Ayo... y u shook an bringin up 'no-show' scenarios?
u had a chance but the 'window of oppertunity' jus closed//
Ur warm... im cold wen i bring heat, switchin like 'bitter sweet'
that 'bar jus served u a shot', strait up neat from dome to feet//
I aint afraid of the Dark... i Curse it... hurt it, throw out the light beam
'roll on tracks' wit 'dirty needles' to really 'infect the scene'//
U mite be standing... thas coz u lack 'diss-ability'
now the Teks on auto.. an u lack agility, mobility an ingenuity//
Right now ma tongues on 'safety', when i flick it u'll hate me
coz if i werent an 'underground' txtcee, there'd be a 'global rise' in 'mortality'//
^^^Those 10lines were jus a 'dose' of the shit im on
consider this the '1st chapter' in the 'newest Koran'//
authored by urs truely, 'Heavens very own Don'
a freestyle keystyle that 'hits home' like a 'SMART bomb'//
Vote if u know how to break it down properly
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ite this goes to dark close n gd battle yall.but dark had da flow man, tek ur lines wer 2 compact man. tek had gd punches do.but my vote = dark.
pz
I specifically said vote 'if u know how' to prevent d/r like that... u need to break it down son else its d/r thru n thru.
yeah, please explain your votes more, break it down , cheers............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .
aiight check it out
DARK CURSIV:
So he thinks he’s gonna test, man I hate wannabee rap pretendin’ testers/
Fuckin with me child molester, I’ll introduce you your fuckin ancestors/
~it was aiight 6/10~
This guy’s death’s on the card’s, like rap was a game of poker/
I’m gonna wet this guy’s chest but I ain’t got a super soaker/
~nice 7/10~
This small cat can't fuck with big timers, he's scared, plus he's spineless/
He'll have a heart attack like John Candy or he'll develop alzheimers/
~not the best 4/10~
Your whole style is wack, I’m sure this faggots hooked on heroin and crack/
Cos in his battle with Tax man he asked tax to hit him from the back/
~same as ^^^^^ 4/10~
Do you dare to speak, see me in the street, your definately bound to get capped/
Pull the gat, shoot ya kneecaps,peel ya capp, and that's that/
~aiight 5/10~
MC killa, I'm an animal, plus I eat MC's like I was an a cannibal/
Comin to spit in reply?,Why? your thoughts are irrational/
~nice 6/10~
I'm not gonna lie you'll never beat this emcee, I'm too strong you see/
No matter how many times we battle you ain't got the skill to beat me/
~not the best 4/10~
You had a 0-0 record, you should've battled a fellow newbie, Why'd you risk it/
Some body find where he lives, save him, he got his wrist slit/
~wack finisher 3/10~
TEK:
[B]Ayo... y u shook an bringin up 'no-show' scenarios?
u had a chance but the 'window of oppertunity' jus closed//
~aiight opener 5/10~
Ur warm... im cold wen i bring heat, switchin like 'bitter sweet'
that 'bar jus served u a shot', strait up neat from dome to feet//
~tight 7/10~
I aint afraid of the Dark... i Curse it... hurt it, throw out the light beam
'roll on tracks' wit 'dirty needles' to really 'infect the scene'//
~again tight 7/10~
U mite be standing... thas coz u lack 'diss-ability'
now the Teks on auto.. an u lack agility, mobility an ingenuity//
~aiight 4/10~
Right now ma tongues on 'safety', when i flick it u'll hate me
coz if i werent an 'underground' txtcee, there'd be a 'global rise' in 'mortality'//
~nice 5/10~
^^^Those 10lines were jus a 'dose' of the shit im on
consider this the '1st chapter' in the 'newest Koran'//
~erm..... not as good as the rest of the verse 3/10~
authored by urs truely, 'Heavens very own Don'
a freestyle keystyle that 'hits home' like a 'SMART bomb'//
~aiight 4/10~
nice battle
but my vote goes to Tek
This small cat can't fuck with big timers, he's scared, plus he's spineless/
He'll have a heart attack like John Candy or he'll develop alzheimers/
^ that was a nice ass line dark i love the john candy reference
as for tek my fave line from you would have to be:
consider this the '1st chapter' in the 'newest Koran'//
authored by urs truely, 'Heavens very own Don'
^ koran and DON had a nice orignal ryhme to em
im gonna have to go with dark tho
mainly for his more elaborate verse it appeared more punch effect was put into it
please pay back the favor ( i kno yall hate being slept on)
liba dee vs hazy
or hot ice vs hazy
thank you much
uppin..................................1st up................................................ .......
Nice votin from Hazy n Bob... thas how u break it down. I dont think Oli_Dogg's vote should count tho...
.....................holla back dark a.k.a styles.
it was a wack break down from oli_dogg but he did make a kinda break down, even if it was wack........
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if the breakdown was wack as u say, it dont count rite?
Should be like 1-1.
well if he did a better break down, he would've voted for me anyway, cos he voted for me with a wack breakdown, but if ya want to see a mod and see what's what, do it and see what they say, I ain't bothered son, just wanna batle fairly............................................ ..................
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here's da deal, Tek hit harder with better punches & wordplay
Dc's opener to me was on the same level wit Tek's...both had okay opener's
super soaker line was nice, not a killer but good 7.5/10
after that, DC fell off, he stopped usin wordplays and became mad basic wit da spit....
Tek used lots of wordplays and his punches hit well
Flow = Tek
Punches = Tek
Metas = DC
Wordplay = Tek
Multis = None
Creativity = Tek
Structure = Tek
vote = Tek
hit these battles up, i did not sleep on this so dont on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=83122
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82725
both verses where hot but DC his verse overall was aite but didn't have like strong punchlines while Tek his was less vocabulary but the punchlines and metas were their and when i vote i look for the strong shots like that
Vote=Tek
Last upp from ya boi..........
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and nicely analyzed erryone cept oli
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uppin.......3rd.................some wack voters..................read the verses then vote.............................................. ..................................................
not feelin people sleepin........................................... why ain't people votin oln this shit?.................4th up................................................ ............VOTE!!!!!!!
YO, U GOT SATRONGER SHIT THAN THAT IN UR OTHER VERSES CURSIVE. U STILL WON IN MY EARS BUT I CANT VOTE.
Can a moderator get rid of the b/s lil votes like the one above coz they takin the attention away from a decent battle. It would be much appreciated.
uppin, uppin........................................final up so hit this shit up.............................don't sleep on it , get votin, I can't bttle til this is finished
cant vote yet but p.stylez verse was the best. u came strong but it werent gud enough boi............................................... .................................................. ................................
personals-tek
vocab-tek
punches-tek
flow-tie
structure-styles
overal-tek
...................................peace.......... ..........................................
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Originally posted by C_Drama
here's da deal, Tek hit harder with better punches & wordplay
Dc's opener to me was on the same level wit Tek's...both had okay opener's
super soaker line was nice, not a killer but good 7.5/10
after that, DC fell off, he stopped usin wordplays and became mad basic wit da spit....
Tek used lots of wordplays and his punches hit well
Flow = Tek
Punches = Tek
Metas = DC
Wordplay = Tek
Multis = None
Creativity = Tek
Structure = Tek
vote = Tek
hit these battles up, i did not sleep on this so dont on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=83122
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82725
[COLOR=blue]Ao... c'mon people... if u peep this ish jus drop a vote b4 u go plz.
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Decent battle here.
Tek takes it however with some better punches.
Some played shit from Dark killed his verse.
Vote- Tek