10 lines max
no crew/hate/dickride/unexplained votes
no feeding nor biting
i aint gon rush this, cuz ima be away in a few mins.........
but da verses due before 9PM EST..........
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10 lines max
no crew/hate/dickride/unexplained votes
no feeding nor biting
i aint gon rush this, cuz ima be away in a few mins.........
but da verses due before 9PM EST..........
check in.................i'll be posting later as well coz i cant be arsed yet............................................... .........................
yea yea, im out for now........be back on, ill prolly drop like in One&1/2 hours, or better yet
when i get back
1 come hot
Mary J Blige-“ No more Drama in my life”=well bitch there ain’t gonna be no more
When I see you, I see a wak middleweight obsessed wid Drama,
Coz ya rhymes are fuked and cracked up like Marshall’s Mama. (Eminem)
No doubt this bitch users- Drama, coz every line is an Audition,
This gimp even be choking on stage, even with a bitten Rendition.
Obie said, “this boy got some teeth”, ya can tell by all C’s Feeding,
Evolve,Sureal,& Cam got ya Leash , its not jus me who wants ya Leavin.
So be gone you epitome of HERBivore, while ya down for 3 to Five,(chek rec’)
Ya lines are already down to tha Floor, jus like you…they took a Dive.
But Jus like any Past-It Battler, you’ll be looting in other peeps Threads,
But the punishment I gave out, has gotten you delirious like on Meds.(medication)
Lol…………aight theirs ma verse punk……..R.I.P (Rot in Pieces)
Round up your fucking troops I'm knockin dudes out their motherfucking boots//
Coming [half-assed] like you's VERTICALLY [cut in two's]//
(really think about it people.....)
[Cock and juice] is what you use to make your [spits flow?]//
Like givin a BLIND RAPPER a RECORD DEAL ~ you aint makin no HITS yo//
...When you thought of this did you meant to harm or diss me?//
...I've seen more BULLSHIT than a FARMER'S KID G//
LUC PICARD'S pic have you DROOLIN like RETARDED KIDS//
You can't be hard when you got JUMPED BY KINDERGARTEN KIDS//
When I strap dynamite to this Cyanide queer//
FORENSICS aint gon be LOOKIN FOR BODY PARTS cuz really, WHO DA "FUCK KNOWS WHERE?!!!"//(Check his Location.....)
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppinupp..........lost track.......................................1st... ........................................
uppin this shiznit
(#1)
come on, vote on dis shit, and let da "Best" verse win, dont vote based on one man is eligible to vote
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin............................................. .22nd............................................. ..................................elite sleeps...........................
come on man, vote on dis shit man...........................if i could vote on yall battles i would but i cant.....................
dont sleep on dis shit man
(#2) uppin
uppin dis shit, come on ppl vote on it
(#3)
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppinuppinn uppin .........................................2nd...... ............stop slee.....................ping.......
hit this up and ill return the favor on this battle any1 of yall iight 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...8&pagenumber=2
fag............................................... .........ya'll been bummed............................................ .................................................. .............................................
uppnig dis shit (#4)
come on ppl, if I could vote on yall shit i would, jes alldig/the end havent even responded to my pm yet
dont sleep on dis shit
i cant even start more battles cuz dis shit is being slept on..........................get da votes going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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consider dis ma last uppin and yo LC
lets get dis shit moved to Regular Frontlines, cuz peeps b sleepin on dis for too long now man
holla at ya boy
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vote- LC
better punches n mets good shyt.......good flow......the other kid was alrite but didnt come hard enuff...............1
Lc Came Better Wit His
Punches And Wordplay To Back
Them Up.. So My Vote Goes To LC
VOtE - LC
I Know I Cant Vote Yet.. But At Least I Took The Time
To Hit It UP.. So Please ..
RETURN THE FAVOR !!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84072
vote c~drama came harder, better structure, better flow, better rythem. n e thing else that i have to explain? no i didn't think so!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ima put this in investigated reports coz its clear to any1 that i merked this guy................you lose faggot.......jus coz i voted against ya on another battle
getting slept on so heres my breakdown.......
wordplay=LC, not that great but it was slightly better than Drama's
flow=tie, both lacked flow in some areas,and then picked it up again towards the end, so this is a tie
multi's=neither, try to use multis more it helps with the flow of the verse if done right
creativity=LC, he was more creative wit his punches, drama sorry but that "halfasses line" i've seen before
punches=tie, punches were pretty even, nothing really stood out, DAM nice punch, so this is a tie
personals=LC, had a couple of personals and so did drama, but CL used is better to help his verse hit harder
vote=Lyrical Cyanide, overall slightly better verse, edged Drama out in most categories
good luck to both
holla
ok...um riiiiiiiiggggggggghhhhhhtttt.......anyone who had remotely any talent would see that LC won this battle....his verse was ok, not great, so when I read it I was like eh drama should be able to beat this.....but
cdrama had a weak verse....funny opener...but the last bar had no flow and he rhymed kids with kids.......his verse got very annoying to read...so....I'd rate this battle 6-4 in favor of.....
Vote=LC
honestly.....both wak.....
not proud of merkin either of u 5-0......
but besides that i'm here to vote on whos better......
structure-nide
punches-nide
wordplay-drama
multi-non
metti-none
enjoyment-none
vote- cyanide.......drama was confusing....makin him worste....
personals:LC
structure:LC
punches:LC
wordplay:drama
metas:none
overall:LC
nice battle peeps
yo plz return the favor wit a fair vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84191
Took It Away ReallyQuote:
Originally posted by X Ecution
vote- LC
better punches n mets good shyt.......good flow......the other kid was alrite but didnt come hard enuff...............1
Vote - Brix
I Polled Yours So Do The Same
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1969#post831969