TaxBack VS Tek

iight..for tha herbs..

TaxBack's Rules
The rules are quite simple
10 to 14 lines note more not less
30 minutes to write big max30 minutes not more
20 posts and up to vote

USE THIS THREAD YA'LL
Juss re-post ya verses...

thx men for redoing this the poll and check out he posted his shit in more then 30 minutes fucked bastard


ah men i'll have to spit first cause your a pussy


Hey yo bitch, I'm turning on the switch, your down there sucking up your dick//
I just saw your pic, what an ugly bastard you are, you wanna win but you have to kick it realy quick//
I'm spitting and dancin, there's no way you can stop me cause your swallowing the white gluey stuff//
Cut it off, put it back in your pants cauze your gonna choke with my lyrical text, there's no joke man no bluff//

Yo,yo, yo yo yo, It's time for better shit now, no more laughing

I'm hiphop, and your a fat drinking and licking pops//
Your in a freestyle with me, but ya have no style and praying to god when will it stops//
Man relax, just put your head on the table and i'll be happy to cut it down with my stone - axe//
You see , you gave it to your max, but it didn't change the rap facts//
Muthafuckah, there's no way back, you have to accept your loss//
I overcomed you bitch and I'm now your boss//

Ma hand on his spine is the only time i got 'tax back'
there's no need to expose him now he's proved wot he lack//
44 posts to ur name... now a .45 poppin holes in ur frame
callin me up yet u goin down on me like a fukkn dame//
I aint been in the game long yet im considered a 'vet' ezee
puttin this wannabe cat under the knife an exposin a pussy//
When i bring heat we aint talkin the weather
and when i turn on u we aint talkin chains and leather//
See wen i gotchu in bondage its coz ur ma bitch
but wen ma mood change i dump 'taxback' in the ditch//
U were desperate to die so i served u... bowl and ladel
now its over recognise that my hand rocks the cradle//

VOTES VOTES VOTES and comments , nice texte Mr burn , but late too you know well the votes will determined betwen me and the late guy

I didnt know this battle was goin down this quick so i posted as soon as i seen this thread... believe what u will.

STOP FUKKN SWAYIN!!!

We could have some votes people, we need your votes
common votes , vote in this people, it's like many hours we have nothing common, theres 100 people online and no one who votes VOTES VOTES

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I think tax bak..................................I think tax bak won this battle cos his punchlines were better and his flow was a little better than Tek

VOTE:Tax Bak

sorry, could ya hit this up, sorry for freepostin........................................ ....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82645

cheers

[B]U serious? Smh @ some heads on this site... wot kinda vote is that?! U need to explain urself more mayn.[B]

alright, he merked you hands down, he was basically too good for you...........................................if ya want beef, I'll battle ya tomorrow you daft bastard..................

Right here's the breakdown:

Flow ; tax
Punches ; tax
structure; tax
originality; tek

OVERALL: Tax

get it now?

Punches: how many had u NOT seen before?
Originality: variations on other punches IS NOT original!
Structure: if a nigga got LINES TWICE THE SIZE OF OTHERS then that aint structured too well!
Flow:thas whether U FEELIN it or not.

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Im not neccessarily talkin bout opponent...
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tek had this but both verses were wack sorry guys but they were..........

tek just had a cleaner verse better structure and flow etc....his hits were sharper aswell, not as many fillers.....

go check any of my battles in frontlines if ya can vote

Vote Tek

I see some potential..............nice structured bars...............so ok punches, some played ones tho...........jus work on being more consistant............but overall you took every category

Tax..........you had some solid lines...............but nothing too great work on your structure...........but stay up you also have some potential.....

Quotables: Tek

U were desperate to die so i served u... bowl and ladel
now its over recognise that my hand rocks the cradle//

^^^^Nice close

teks verse was better he had better puches and the flo was alot nicer it was easy to read tex bac tried squeezen 2 many words into each line it made the flo to difficult

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=severe+lyrics

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This goes to 5 rite?
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Uppn this ish mayn.......................
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the other cat evidently wants this to disappear!

So can we get last few votes plz?

Pz

Erm...Tek Won This Hands Down...

Better Punches, Flow, Structure, Non Streched Lines...No Quotables But OutShone His Opponent..

Vote - Tek

Does this automatically award a win when u get 5 votes?
Im still not sure bout all the details etc, lol!
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Yeh...Wen You Reach 5 On The Polls...It Will Close And You Will Have Your Win On Ya Record..

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still gettin used to the site.

Flow- tax
Punches - tek
structure-tax
originality-tax

OVERALL: Tax

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both verses cuold of been way better
your shit was played out tek

i dontlike to freepost but check this out:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=83335

Firstly... JHustler: wtf @ elevate when jus look at ur disgraceful fukkn record! 0-3! Shit kid... wot world u livin in? Dont be tellin people to elevate when u wack as fuk urself.

Secondly... blackguy: tell me u aint sirius?! U jus put up a link to a verse that got horribly murked u dumb fuk. Played? Yeah alrite u faggot... u dont understand shit kid... re-read ur verse and then talk to me about played.

Smh @ the dumb fukkers on this site!

Common guys vote and then after go vote in the poll, maybe this could be tight you are winning but I don,t know good text men, we

Yo Bro T... maybe this could be tight... unfortunately u being shit means im 4-1 upp so dont talk about close u faggot. Re-match? Bahh... hell naw... i aint wasting no more time on ur useless self.

TEK. . .YOU USED UP ALL YA UPPINS
STOP BITCHIN @ THE VOTERS DAMNIT!
YOU BOTH WACK SO I WONT BOTHER VOTIN, TOO CLOSE

[B]-Falls back from the mighty Brooklyn-

...blah @ u... stfu.

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oh and just a reminder i love to suck cock;)

Vote: T

Better overall verse in every single categorie imaginable

Can u guys Please hit htis up for this honest vote thanks you
Dont avoid it.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84779

Vote: TEK


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Hit this up you guys with an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84779