10 lines MAX
your spittin first...i get too many no shows..
NO:
hate
d/r
crew
feeding
biting
none of that bullshit
5-10 mins to check afta set up
10 mins to drop...NO EXCEPTIONS(afta check in)
10 lines MAX
your spittin first...i get too many no shows..
NO:
hate
d/r
crew
feeding
biting
none of that bullshit
5-10 mins to check afta set up
10 mins to drop...NO EXCEPTIONS(afta check in)
check
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ok im in, ill go 1st
checkin in................................................ ........................................
excuse me, but u look like one of my groupies
mystery how my punches beat u so brutaly
its time for my critiquing cuz i was peeking at ur last rhymes
vocab lacks and u sound like a crowd of lost mimes
ur puches bring no pain like ur personals bring no gain
ill embarass ya and make ya use a fake name like mark twain
ive seen puddles of mud flow better then ur played verse
ill be givven ur mama a hug after they take u away in a blassed hearse
i bet the birth of u was less dissapointing then ur unequal bars
thought u was normal but in ur daddys geanes i guess was traces of retards
10 lines in under ten minutes bitch
hahah umm ok... ehh..here...that took u 3 mins...prewritten? nah...i believe u rote it in 3 cuz it sux...heres my verse...
U Blowin Mics Cuz Significant Aint Ever Had Any Real Spits..//
He's Like Theifing Plumbers Cuz This Cats Known To Steal Shit..//
Need To Practice Speakin See, Gone When I'm Heaving Geeks..//
They Say In God We Trust..So Join The Club & Start Believing N Me..//
I Fight Back Dont Question The Sore Spleenz..//
Ur A Twisted Fuck Like Dyslexics In Porn Scenez..//
Hell Emersion, Significant Wat A Kind Virgin...//
Ill Get Under Your Skin And Let Loose Like A Blind Surgeon..//
Like Profesional Pyros I Know How To Handle The Torch...//
And If You Step Up Again Ill Hang Ya family From The Porch...//
no voting fer him so he can polll on ur battles cuz he has 100 posts....
lets get sum votes...
lol damn man u gove me 10 minutes to write a verse and when i do u say prewritten such a herb/bitch move, nice try tho, uppin for votes
Lyrical Cyanide
CarsonJet-2k4
AbOmInAtIoN
CRYP']['
cannot vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
forgot to tell ya that...exspecially cryp....werd..
and ive never seen a porch that short to hang someone from, u make so much sence lol, ive seen balconys and over looks, but never porches
man u cant put rules in after u checked in, sorry u gota state those things befor verses are posted..
aight thats cool....but cryp if he votes its gonna b hate but w/e..... and u vote swayed ... dont do that again!.....
uppin fo votes....
what u mean i vote swayed? anyways i know lyrical is in my crew but not sure bout the others, so stop bein a bitch
uppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votesuppen for votes
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Quote:
Originally posted by RoyalSickn3ss1
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i'm a go wit royal. cause i thought he had a better flow and harder punches.
hit this up playah:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80586
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Originally posted by RoyalSickn3ss1 uppin 4
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This was an ok Battle, both MC's need elevation though
Punches: Royal
Personals: Royal
Wordplay: Royal
Metas: Gro
Multis: Gro
Flow: Tie
Vote = Royal
Keep battlin ya'll two, and elevation will come....pz
VOTE VOTE VOTE DONT SLEEP VOTE VOTE VOTEQuote:
Originally posted by RoyalSickn3ss1
uppin numba 5
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^^^what kind of explanation is that? anywho back to my explanation, heres how i thought it broke down...
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-royal
wordplay-grotesque
punches-grotesque
enjoyability-tie
overall-grotesque
props to both of ya, but ima say grotesque took this, good battle and keep it up u two
peace.....
oh shit my bad, i was askin the fool on the first page about his explanatin cause to me it seemed he only wanted people to read his battle, so capcom, i wasnt referrin to u dawg, honest mistake...
peace.....
aiight this is wat i thought
punches:royal
wordplay:grotesque
personals:royal
metas:grotesque
flow:royal
nice battle though keep it up
aiight will sum plz vote on this so i can get rid
of this wack ass battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82245
an cud sum 1 plz tell me wat a "multi"............
Easy win for Royal, betta wordplay, punches and everything else
Grotesque came too simple
Hell Emersion, Significant Wat A Kind Virgin...//
Ill Get Under Your Skin And Let Loose Like A Blind Surgeon..//
^had me laughing for more than a hot minute
Vote=Royal
uppin vor votes, and some of those arent explained well enough but thats ok, yo good battle man sorry bout bein a dick the other day
ROYAL...CAME HARDER WITH ORIGINAL PUNCHES.
BREAK IT
punches..royal
flow..tie
metaz..WAT..lol
multies..WAT..lol
vocab...tie...>>but royal,,used it betta
originality....royal
OVERALL....ROYAL..
NOT A BAD SPIT FROM THE OTHER KAT...ROYAL JUST CAME MUCH HARDER..
GOOD JOB BOTH YA...
PEACE
i think royal sickness got this one iun every catagory to tell.....
u the truth.....he had harder hitting punches.....
better usage of wordplay.....and just overall a.......
better all around verse...so my vote goes to ROYAL.....
yep...
pz....