J-man Vs Gills

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i dont know how to start this off, but i start it with a diss
i aint got a girl, but ya momma gave me a kiss
i once had a bitch then you kissed her
little did i know, that the bitch was your sister
there is nothin to fear in this world but fear itself
you say you got skillz, but why was u askin me for help?
nothin is ever guaranteed in this world, cuz all it is is lies
gills aint a rapper, jus another kid in the corner that cries
i got you breathin for more, cuz this shit isn't even fair
the diss was so bad, that this bitch gills was gaspin for air
i'll make your dream come true, but with only a verse
but this aint a dream, u only ask for that in church
never criticized but its jus because i have too many flaws
gay fagget, u were already in position when u were learning to crawl
i spit lyrical acid, that tears thru your skin
you better tape an emcee battle, cuz that's the last u recorded a win

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Yo my verbal linguistics are kinda ill
Garenteed to kill, I smoke fools like teepees and erase shitty verses like T.P.
Cook up twisted verses like linguini
And serve fools like chef's who wanna battle me...
Yall don't really cook nothing, just small talk like Emeril Lagasse
My lyrics are hot but my demeanor stays frosty
Givin cats the icey deltoid
Hot sound or frigid noise, all spectrums so either or
With an anatomy constructed of pure metaphors
So you can call me Metaphist
Cats who introduced themselve can tell you how they met-a-fist
Tryin to mess with this
I'm gifted like spoiled only-children
Cats get flipped like a fat bitch jumpin on the see-saw of and annerexic

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cmon yall, lets get some votes, i want to get this shit over wit.
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well personally I prefered J-man. Gills had a vocabulary I admit. But I gotta go for J-man. I don't detect any punches its just J-man's is funnier. But both need to elevate. J-man's verse reminds me of a freestyle battle.

J-man Vote

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Vote=Gills

Thought he had a better verse ill break it down

Punches=Gills
Metas=Gills
Flow= Straight up J-Man
Vocab=Gills
Structure=J-man

I think gills took it, jus cuz of his punchlines, weak battle tho


Yo boys please hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81929

Hmm,
Both verses were pretty basic and newbie like....But my vote goes to gills....no exsplaition needed..J-Man please don't talk about his mom that so fucking gay it means you can't come up with creative punches.Please J grow up
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hey if yall vote can yall please vote on the poll to no just in a reply two people voted for me but only one is in the poll..Uppin for votes...............

i definitely think gills took this one, not only was his verse a lot more complex than J-Mans he actually had some punches, i liked the Emeril punch.. anyways vote: gills
much <3 to both

thanks oh and thats your picture man you look good wow....uppin for votes...........................................

hehe thanks but i aint no man :-p



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gills- 2 votes
J-man-1 vote

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gills- 2 votes
J-man-1 vote

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Break Down:

Punches=Gills
Personal=J-man
Multis=Gills
Creativity=Gills
Structure=J-man
Complexity=Gills
Wordplay=Gills
Vocab=Gills

Overall=Gills

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82143
hit this up.........even if jus feedbk

this was an aight battle but heres the three main cats i base my vote on
punches=gills
sustainment of punches=both
originality=gills

vote=gills

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im voting for gills.. better wordplay, vocab and punches.. j-man s flow that sister line was wack.....
vote=gills

slept on like whoa~hit this UUUPPP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1

uppin.............thanx, i need to switch up my shit, i aint text battled in like a long ass time, so say what you want about my verse, i know its whack as fuck,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=severe+lyrics

Punches=Gills
Metas=Gills
Flow= J-Man
Structure=J-man
Vocab=Gills

overall gills thats my vote
hit up my link ya herd