Is this cool? I'm answering your callout. I think you said 10-12 lines, correct? If you want, check in and I'll drop first like you said.
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Is this cool? I'm answering your callout. I think you said 10-12 lines, correct? If you want, check in and I'll drop first like you said.
Pale actin biblical cuz he ain't reached elevation.
You know he fears me like god, why he quotin Revelations.
Meetin his maker, and lovin me like I was his moms.
So after losin this battle, betta try quotin psalms.
Pale, it seems like ya Horse has completely come un-glued.
Cuz I killed ya here, so get ya birth certificate renewed.
This is way too easy considering ya interest is Nutrition.
Guess ya suck alotta dick on those religious missions.
So go tell the priest ya failed, got yourself dissed like Moby.
Maybe he'll 'comfort' you cuz ya got beat by a kid named Toby.
You called out and I accepted. I know you haven't checked in, but I'm hoping you'll want to fight back against my verse. If not, I totally understand seeing as how you never really agreed to this, just called out for it. So, if you don't want to respond, don't. I won't be offended that you couldn't answer it. Thank you for the opportunity, though.
sorry dude I know I have been online but been busy at work so havent been on the site.....Yea Would love to battle with ya.....let me hit this up in an hour (nice spit) on my lunch break. sorry for takin long I just didnt see it but I got you kid
(Steps up lookin pissed off and take off his wife beater tank top)
Ima streetsweepa' bleed-ya when I beat-ya into a fuckin seizure
then write a book wit your blood so I can fuckin read-ya!
That will fuckin teach ya to mess wit my flesh man thought you wuz da best man kid your just a freshman
I can tell ya doubt cause you spit like your mouth masterbated
a lot of build up but not much comes out
then rip outcha vocals so you spit outcha neck
so we hear your blood gurgle when ya do a mic check
Im da one who fits da bloody glove nigga slug nigga you'll get plugged nigga betta run nigga get the gun nigga
Bitch Im scary go grab a dictionary I just got literary and rhymed your obituary.
What!
(Pale Horse throws the mic down and walks out still pissed off)
I just bumbed a beat and shot that from da dome a lil pissed off not atchu but jus a bad day.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Lets get to some votes------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
uppin for votes 1................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........
PALE HORSE, would you please hit this up with a vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81320
I don't have enough posts to vote on this or else I would.
Hmm.Very Nice Battle. Vote=Tobias
Tobias Had Some Good Ass Flow And Punches And So Did
Pale Horse But The Line That Caught My Eye Was The
Spittin' Revelation Line.Pale Had Some Good Wordplay
And Vocab.Good Shit To Both Of You.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81897
hit this up.....................
now ima gonna give this pale jus for the fact that his punches caused more damage.........tobias had aight punches and flow and also wordplay but it was too nice........
vote=pale
flow=tie
creativity- tie
punches- tie leanin more towards pale
wordplay- tie
meta- tie
multiz- none really...
vote = pale
closest battle ever....*props* to both ya'll...hot shit from both you newbiez.....
errbody hit dis battle up plz.....FAIR AND HONEST VOTE...NO D/R...NO HATE!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81559
thanx playa for da votes need more especially more poll votes
Uppin #2 100 characters 100 characters
Punches:Tobias
Flow:Pale
Multi:Tie
Personals:Tobias
Open:Tobias
Closer:Tobias
Vocab:Both
Overal:Tobias
I voted for Tobias because I thought his verse was better. It haad good structure and he had some mad personals in there to. I liked both verses but Tobias had the one that stood out more.
Punches:Tobias
Flow:Pale
Multi:Tie
Personals:Tobias
Open:Tobias
Closer:Tobias
Vocab:Both
Overal:Tobias
Tobias got this shit..I just dont appreciate you cursing and sayin chapters of the bible in the same sentence..but ..you get my vote..
can yall hit up the battle in my sig..thanks..
Rush your feakin stupid my rhymes way more complex than Toby's, yea his is good and I would admit if I got beat, but I didnt, and Demontheses my opener came way harder than that freakin cat The only thing he got me on wuz his being a lil more personal thats it period, both ya'll niggas need to check ya selfs before you let garbage come outcha mouth.
Bitch don't even start with me, you was merked plane and simple. Granted Rush is a little bitch and he copied my vote. You better stop being a bitch or I will add another loss to your record noob.
Uppin for votes #3................----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Uppin to get more votes. And, keep in mind. If you read his profile, I just went personal on him. Didn't rip on God or anything because I'm a hater. I just went personal to make the punches more effective. Hope no one freaks out too much. Sorry if you did.
Your either a nice guy or have great people relation skills------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
aiight y'all
TOBIAS u had a nice opener, but the rest if the verse wernt quite as hot
PALE HORSE ya verse was hot, puches wer hot, an it was a nice tight drop
fave lines:
TOBIAS:Pale actin biblical cuz he ain't reached elevation.
You know he fears me like god, why he quotin Revelations
and this one
apart from the MOBY bti
Guess ya suck alotta dick on those religious missions.
So go tell the priest ya failed, got yourself dissed like Moby.
PALE HORE so many nice lines
but here my favorite
the write an book an read ya line was ill as fuck
Ima streetsweepa' bleed-ya when I beat-ya into a fuckin seizure
then write a book wit your blood so I can fuckin read-ya!
an
Im da one who fits da bloody glove nigga slug nigga you'll get plugged nigga betta run nigga get the gun nigga
Bitch Im scary go grab a dictionary I just got literary and rhymed your obituary.
yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82352
and this 1 especially
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82245
I'd have to go wit Pale, his disses basically hit harder than Toby's shit
Toby lacked disses and his "biblical" verse aint workin
vote = Pale
hit dis battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82075
uppin #4---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Thanx for dem votes ya'll keep em comming
Uppin again. Wow. This is quite the heated battle. I was winning him at first, but he has risen to comeback and take the lead. Will he prevail? Will he be vanquished? Stay tuned for more votes and more drama. And, Pale...I like to think I'm both gifted with great people relation skills AND a nice guy. Thanks for the compliment. I'll return the favor, but steady your temper. I see you yelling at Rush up there at the top of the page. That kind of disputing of votes could be seen as swaying by someone who wanted to start a fight and contest the polls. Fortunately for you, I am not that person. But, please, don't do that again. Thank you.
Your right, I wuz having a bad day saw that he had just copied the vote previously made by demontheses and went off, wasnt tryin to sway votes just venting, but I am back on course now, and also no beef wit anything in the battle, I appreciate your mature outlook on things.
(especially on losing this battle, LOL)
uppin for votes #5------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Alright This Was Close As Fuck.. Pale Had Some Less Quality In parts Of His Verse But A Few Nce Punchlines, Tobias Had A Solid Verse All Around And Better Structure. That Gets My Vote..
Good Battle But Vote- Tobias
ima have to go wit pale hear....alot harder ppunches and some nice multi's......
not much wordplay for either.....
Tobias definatly to the flo but that was bout it....
vote-pale horse......
both of ya...hi this up wit an honest vote please thanks.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82498
Pale Horse IS DQ'D, NEXT TIME FOLLOW THE RULESQuote:
Originally posted by The End
IF YOU UP YOUR THREAD MORE THAN 5 TIMES YOU WILL BE DQ'd.
-BROOKLYN