Danbnas Vs. DaIllistReBel

Iight, here are the rules:


10lines
No Feedin, no hatin, no d/r votes
check in be4 u type ur verse, anytime tonight would be nice but if u have to, by tomorrow.
5-0 = KO


Checkin in........ the verse will be up very soon. Good Luck

Here I go, 10 lines:


Like any ball in a salad, ur just gettin "tossed a round"(around)//
Ya dumbfound, downed beneath-the-ground, ya just drowned//
On the top I stand alone, like a "seed", ur rhymes haven't fully grown//
Yellin on ur cell, is the only time u be gettin loud on a "micro phone"//
This battle's a nice breeze, winnin w/ ease, the result will leave u displeased//
Composin a piece for the piano, the only time it may "sound good" on "keys"//
A lyrical disease, my bars are used just to make my opponents suffer//
Ya must like "James Bond", cause these lines are leavin you hidin "undercovers"//
Ur standin still, ur surrrounded w/ a "verbal needle", u've just been "pinned"//
This was fun, come battle me whenever u want, I can always use an easy win//

Now just waitin for u...................

Come on man, drop ur shyt so we can get some votes goin.............................................. ........

I destroy your shit, pin point asteroids in orbit, that a hurl ya'll 1000's of miles towards it,god damn heathings, wrap my hands around ur neck region. then start squeezing until u stop breathing, your weaklings is playing tug of war wid ur tongues, i'll knock the teeth out ur gums, and suck the weed out urlungs,your physical frame,can never sustain,u'll probly never walk ever again,sucker,you think your rhymes sick,i'll leave u lying stiff, i'll put ur corpse in a himelick and brake ur spine bitch,the pain to make your voice change octive,from low pitch to high pitch,every hour i kill a hostage.i judge mc's by ther lyrical fitness and punish
DaiLList for putting corny stickers on his mixes,you scratch my back i'll scratch yours bitch, i'll eat your swordfish if suck my sausauge

ok, both verses are in, can we please see some votes now, and please explain your votes and remember to poll..............

Uppppppppppppppppppppin........................... .................................................. ......(1)

Cmon ppl, please drop in a vote upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin................ .................(2)

man we need sum votes pls can we get sum votes, preciate,......................................... ..............1

Aight- I'll vote on this one..............

Flow was much better from Rebel and so were his punches..............Dabnas was aight but basically I wasn't feelin him as much as Rebel..............

Vote = Rebel

Close shit

Hit this up seen as so I voted on your shit...............peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81437

yo i liked the shit of DaIllistReBel more......he came more organized.....better punches.......

vote: DaIllistReBel

look at this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78934

peace........................

may b he was organised cause all that shit was written b 4 hand in word may b, man come vote vote vote

ill break it down fo these niggas

punchs illest
flow dan
wordplay illest
multi's dan
complexity dan
structure dan
vote illest punchs wins battles nuff said

need mre votes 2 votes dnt mean shit he cnt win on 2 votes thn again that was my 1st battle, pls vote who u think itepzzzzz

Thanx for votin every1, as these ppl did, drop a link for one of ur battles and I will fosho hit it up, I can't poll yet cause I don't have enough posts though. Btw, one of the ppl votin didn't poll cause I have 3 votes givin to me but it only says 2-0 me. Anyway, thanx 4 votin uppin this shyt (3)

Please ppl, don't sleep on this uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin............. .................................................. (4)

no point voting n e 1 its obvious daillist has won, pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .

It doesn't matter, ppl still have to vote on the battle otherwise, there was no point in having this battle. Anyway final uppin, please can we get some votes..............................(5)

Givin this battle to Rebel...

Better wordplay. Better punches.

Danbnas came pretty bad ass as well, great metas and imagery...

But I felt he came pretty generic, no personals, not much wordplay.

His shit woulda made a great audio, but not a battle rap against someone specific.

Great closer by the winner as well...

Rebel

The Battle Wasnt Very Strong But It Did have A Good Amount Of Multies On Both Sides.Im Goin Wit Rebel On This One.His Punches Were Stronger Than Dan's And A Bit Of Creativity

Vote-DaIllistRebel

Like any ball in a salad, ur just gettin "tossed a round"(around)//
Ya dumbfound, downed beneath-the-ground, ya just drowned//

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nice lil ryhme scheme their and teh multi with teh double D's

On the top I stand alone, like a "seed", ur rhymes haven't fully grown//
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nice but ive seen many plays on the same punch

A lyrical disease, my bars are used just to make my opponents suffer//
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if you would have reworded that it could of had double the effect


This was fun, come battle me whenever u want, I can always use an easy win//
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to me an EASY WIN at the ending usually means your gonna lose i dont like it when verses end that way

now on to dan

I destroy your shit, pin point asteroids in orbit, that a hurl ya'll 1000's of miles towards it,god damn heathings, wrap my hands

first off your structure is horrible GOOD PUNCHES but so hard to READ nad FIND and LOCaTE and UNDERSTAND

again,sucker,you think your rhymes sick,i'll leave u lying stiff, i'll put ur corpse in a himelick and brake ur spine bitch,the pain to make your voice change octive,
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creative and decent i liked the pitch flair
from low pitch to high pitch,every hour i kill a hostage.i judge mc's by ther lyrical fitness and punish
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my fave of yours
DaiLList for putting corny stickers on his mixes,you scratch my back i'll scratch yours bitch, i'll eat your swordfish if suck my sausauge

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why would you refer to your *SAUSAGE* when battling another male?
i dont get that

hmmmmmmmmm this is hard to vote on but my vote goes to rebel
he had harder more effective punches DAN if we could find your punches im sure they would be great too

hazy
pay back teh favor and vote on one of mine
much appreciated hazy