check in and spit my verse will be in later 2 day or tom. b4 the deadline
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check in and spit my verse will be in later 2 day or tom. b4 the deadline
rules:
u spit first
no d/r crew hate votes
10-15 lines
verses due by 5 pm gmt time..................
im gettin sick of this 100 character bull shit...........lol
i gotta bounce cuz im at skool so post ur verse and mine will be in b4 the deadline holla .................................................. ................
9mm of led will end ur life
seperate dome from stalk and bereave the wife//
Then again, fuk the Tek, ima slay 'Lyrics' wit the knife
still 9mm tho but cuts to the bone, creatin strife//
Im swirlin the shit u spit and creatin horror flix
add ur blud to the recipe and serve a 'talkin dik'//
Dik? Yet u still a 'severe pussy' nigga, ridin on luk
where as like 'virgin stewardesses' i jus dont give a 'flyin fuk'//
Non-stop, ma flows like a shotgun shot
stop fukkn duckin mayn, u cant avoid this hed shot//
Like 'genocidal war', i dump my next victim to rot
being too hott leaves u in a home from home...
6ft down in a 6ft box//
...done.
Thas 13 lines kid... unlucky for some!
Post up nukka...
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~Peace~
aight ima start keyin now ill post ina few minutes........................................... ........................
first of all i cant believe im battlin T-his E-asy K-id
my verse? ima drop it like its hot like lil weezy did
bad times is what you'll be goin through when u read my rhymes
cuz this aint malibu's most wanted and u aint in the I nines
13 lines, thats not bad luck it waz jus a waste of ur time
if u do have any tight rhymes u jus-dont-show-it
ur like that dude in the sixth sense there dead u jus-dont-no-it
no personalls in ur verse those puches u could use on any one
the battles you've been involved in... many?......none
its like im on a plane cuz im elevatin that much above you
im gettin the win in this battle cuz im the better of us two
o yea and im 6 foot 2 so i couldnt fit in ur box
the only thing tek is spittin is cum from those cox
battlin u, the votes they jus seem to lean-em-my-way
TEKs 4 cheeks theres a dick between-em-by-day
aight theres my verse
yea ok explenations
the I nines line TEK was the dude in malibus most wanted the leader of the I nines group
i think thats pretty much it
this easy kid the first letter spell tek if u couldnt figure that out
o yea and the sixth sense the guy was dead the whole movie and he didnt no it kinda like teks rhymes
sorry for any body that didnt see that movie i kinda ruined it.....lol
shit i jus realized that i didnt put the date on the deadline it was suppose to be on 9/25/03 at 5 pm thats y in the first post up there i put 2 day or tom.
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Nice battle here...
Tek came pretty generic and his best wordplay was about himself, not dissing.
I liked the play on Em in 8 Mile...
"the battles you've been involved in... many?......none"
From Severe, that was tight and funny. Wasn't a bite, just reminded me of the "You're pop, he's pop, you're pop, none" line.
Aside from that, Severe brought the personals and hit harder.
That's pretty much it, aside from Severe feeding a bit, but it wasn't that big of a feed.
Peace
damn i didnt even think of that 8 mile thing but ok i guess it might be somthin like that.............................................. ..........................
well tek ya battles rhymes gotta be more than just killin.....not one good punch and ya disses were so so....you came hard but ya did'nt show any skills..
severe had a nice opener with his first line.....then that weezy line fucked it up!!! PLAYED!! you attemp to throw some punches but you had maybe two that was good...be a lil more creative...ya disses were betta...
vote severe l
damn u hurt my feelins wit the lil weezy shit sike lol i no wut u mean though............................................ ...............................
wen a nigga gotta go back and explain his shit... c'mon mayn, thas unneccessary rite there... be u, dont explain for ignorant fools kid. Nice verse tho dawggy.
oh yeah one more thing... u should know better than to feed off the guy who mans up first nah mean. Thas y u were desperate for me to post first but blah w/e nigga.
if u wanted no feedin as a rule u should have posted it i got no prob with that .................................................. ...........................
I'd have to go with severe, is disses hit harder, lil played on some parts but his disses hit harde
Vote = Severe
hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81559
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i liked both verses tek was good for a newbie to this shit but severe was nicer he had not many punclines but his overall verse was hotter than teks so vote=SL
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im also from arbutus. do i no you?
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lol can u stop freepostin feeble minded or vote on my battle an clean out ur damn pm box............................................... ..................................................
-_- Aight, This Is How I See It-_-
-_- You Both Did Pretty Good But I Have To Go With Severe-_-
-_- Though You Did Use That "Weezy" Line~Probably As Bulk To Rhyme It-_-
-_- To Me Severe Came A Little Harder Than Tek With Punches And What Not-_-
-_- Only Thing I Didn't Like Is That Weezy Line And The Feeding But Overall It Was Better Verse-_-
-_- Vote=Severe
Lyrigenic could u poll ur vote plz............................................... .
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