Yo I'ma spit in a Min...
Give me some time yo 1
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Yo I'ma spit in a Min...
Give me some time yo 1
yo check in
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Yo
It's a shame his flame burnt out when he Battled me
Even if you spit acid Like Reptile you still couldn't post a Fatality
Hope~that~reality isn't so harsh when I come wit Text
Gave this Bitch a DJ *Clue* wit *Dirrect Effect* spits he found his ass wrecked//
Jus-10...I be bustin a whole in ya Face
wit punches that munches cells that create ya next date
Ya Fate is like two niggas goin to NY and sayin Fuck The East
I'll make you Suck~tha~beast, that is position'd right above~my~knees....man Fuck Ya Steez//
Yo Mann I key'd a lil sum..sum
Yo I know it's not enough but it should beat yo shit ~1
Come on nigga don't Duck due tomorrow last post date
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In this rap game you crave just to stay rough but my lyrics will shave
BE BRAVE couldn't 'cause a rave if he were an elctromagnetic wave
Bitch talkin' bout my flame burnin out and he must think he's to blame
But the truth is he couldn't last the mile if this were a running game
I proclaim you lame, leave you dead with your picture in a memorial frame
I fed this guy ex-lax and he's still full of shit, I'll have him bleedin like a raggin clit
This is a puzzle but his peices don't fit, if this were a licence he'd never get a permit to spit
Blow a hole in my face what a laughin disgrace, your shit's small to mine like wrote in lower case
This is a blind race, you couldn't construct a rhyme if I handed you a tool case
You didn't even touch base, your flow is gonna get slept on more than a pillow case
MOTHERFUCKER!
These are the rules...BE BRAVE didn't post them:
35 mins from check in
5 -15 lines
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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st
Aiight Uppin
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Jus you fed off of his verse and that is a major no no, goo thing there were no rules but still that isant cool at all fruit.
Vote-Jus
I was feeling his punches way better, the flow was good and he multied all over the place. Good spits from both, but both must elevate, props.
Hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975
be braved merked this cat fo sure..................peace....................... ...............................................
^Man I never said "No Feeding" in the rules but anyway if you were in a "face to face" rap battle the person that spit's 2nd does that all the time...it's like shuting him up about all the bullshit they say about you.
Aiight uppin
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hey can u hit this up dawg honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80971
JUS-10 TOOK THIS
-original punches
-hard hitting punches
-good use of multies
-nice wordplay
-better finisher
^^^I also liked his finisher but the overall verse wasnt consistant enuff...................................
ohh wait nm......i didnt like his finsher...i must have been thinkin bout a different one..................................
^STOP FREEPOSTIN! You don't have 100 posts so your oppinion don't mean shit!
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iight that was an ok battle let me break it down
punches:Jus
flow:be brave
metaphors:Jus
multis:both had alot but Jus first line killed multis- JUS
Enjoyability:be brave
My vote-Jus
good battle to both of yall hit it up my battle honestly against formula once he posts his shit -1-
Jus got this one honestly, more vocab, creative disses (decent but good enuff) a
a break down
Flow = Brave
Multis = Jus
Punches = Jus
metas = Brave
wordplay = Jus
Creativity = Jus
Vote = Jus
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81251
aight be brave took this in punchs wordplay multi's and flow he had a good structure complexity all do good shit he had an all around good drop jus ya whack and thats all i gots to say holla
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^I have to agree with J. Dubya's reasoning on this. However, I can't officialy vote.Quote:
Originally posted by J.Dubya
JUS-10 TOOK THIS
-original punches
-hard hitting punches
-good use of multies
-nice wordplay
-better finisher
^Please don't post if ya can't vote. Thanks anyway though.
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Aight BE BRAVE, you're gonna have to start uppin this because I've used my 5.
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My 5 is gone 2
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UPPIN 4 THIS GUYS
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excuse me for da freepost but for one, I ALREADY VOTED ON IT
so dont ask me to peep it (sry for the temper)
and yo, dont drop ur battle link on ma battle if u aint voting on someone, i cant up ma battle, i cant VOTE ON ANYONE ELSE's shit ....y? I ALREADY VOTED ALMOST ON EVERY MUHFUCKAS VERSE ON PAGE 1 and 2...........so i cant do shit about ma battle being slept on
sry for da anger, but jes dont drop a link if u aint voting on my ish.......im jes in a bad mood dats all
Aight dogg whatever, I never realized you already votes that's all...
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imma go wit jus on this one man..................it was pretty elementary on both sides but i think jus took it.......
^Yo man, I think you forgot to poll vote.
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Originally posted by JUS-10
^Yo man, I think you forgot to poll vote.
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Hey, can y'all hit this up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81382
Jus ten is in my favour
better verse in every aspect
Yo BE REAL, spit in our battle, asap
dont forget bout it dick, unless u pussy, garauntee u r