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Mentally Kursed gets dispersed quick, no challenge here
He has Ambitionz as a ridah...Even though he already qweer(Check sig)
Cuz its clear that you've prolly taken more dicks than RuPaul (Famous Drag queen)
& now u tryna battle rap just to prove that U have Balls
All I wanna tell ya'll is that round here, his raps aint workin
Plus spittin Half assed played lines will Only gaurantee a Merkin
And thats for certain...Kursed has been cursed to be wack 4ever
So I'm a keep his curse goin..statin that "U not gettin any better"
Maybe you can weather the storm..and accept your herb fate
Cuz I Just finished you off like fat people finish dinner plates
ayo did you notice mentally kursed logged off!!!he also did the same shit in my battle!!!!!!right now!!
Aight check it
Gettin mad at breath mint employees is the only time you need ANGERmanage MINT//
Ill leave you rottin and decomposin sleepin 6 feet deep wit a unpleasant scent//
Your face is open for attacks like presidents without security guards//
I sent my regards, knife hit to the stomach make your blood expel and discard//
Put glue on bullets then send through your stomach so you can say I "sticky your threads"//
Penetratin your head, foamin at the mouth from seizers, changin your shirt from white to red//
Ejaculatin to "off switches" is the only time your "brain cums on"//
Your lifes gone, rippin your brain out like your thoughts were withdrawn//
Sendin threats to niggas like mailin terrorists and deadly toxins//
Putin you dick in niggas mouth is the only place you place you cock in//
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Ok this battles too close for me to call after reading it first time through, plus I'm tired as hell, so........
I will hit this up tomorrow with a bar by bar breakdown, once I've gotten sleep and can think straight
props......
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this battle was tight in both aspects that it was well laid out and the two battlin were average adversarys,honestly i thought both verses had good vocab and good thyme scheme,but i was feelin mentaly kursed more,better punches and better imagery,well thats my vote.keep spittin.~1~
fav line:my vote--mentaly kursedQuote:
Ejaculatin to "off switches" is the only time your "brain cums on"//
Your lifes gone, rippin your brain out like your thoughts were withdrawn//
could yall vote on my battles id appreciate it
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80560
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=81010
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Originally posted by Mentally Kursed
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erm..... but the third bar mentally'd killed you dude..... advise..... capcom.... stay away from gay punchlines totally.... you could use it as metaphors and say this homo couldn't or this faggot wouldn't but nobody wants to read how many dicks he can handle it's gay to think that up as a diss in the first instance... so do that and add multi's, and wordplay.... as regards originality.... just find your own funny way of saying things.... if it doesn't make you laugh don't hope will laugh with you as well....
vote = mentally
Sendin threats to niggas like mailin terrorists and deadly toxins//
Putin you dick in niggas mouth is the only place you place you cock in// (Orignially posted by Mentally Kursed)
Hmm.....Brainsurgeon talked about my one gay bar but yet Mentally Kursed matched it & used it as his closer....But I talk about gays too much LoL fuck it lets keep the votes comin....
aight i cant vote but i will give my opinion i thought kursed killed it ya both came strong both flows i was feelin they were tight punchs i gave it to kursed he came harder wit his punchs than cap but cap had some tight ass punchs as well multi's i thought it was about even on that wordplay i gave it kursed i sein more from him than i did cap complexity i gave it to cap structure i gave it kursed vote kursed if i could and hit this shit up honestly like i did here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81085
^^Quit trying to sway votes for your crew member.Quote:
Originally posted by MR. Spits
aight i cant vote but i will give my opinion i thought kursed killed it ya both came strong both flows i was feelin they were tight punchs i gave it to kursed he came harder wit his punchs than cap but cap had some tight ass punchs as well multi's i thought it was about even on that wordplay i gave it kursed i sein more from him than i did cap complexity i gave it to cap structure i gave it kursed vote kursed if i could and hit this shit up honestly like i did here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81085
Anyway,s I promised you guys a full breakdown so here it comes
Capcom-
Mentally Kursed gets dispersed quick, no challenge here
He has Ambitionz as a ridah...Even though he already qweer
^^hehe. pretty good opener.
Cuz its clear that you've prolly taken more dicks than RuPaul (Famous Drag queen)
& now u tryna battle rap just to prove that U have Balls
^^first line was very nice, second blah.
All I wanna tell ya'll is that round here, his raps aint workin
Plus spittin Half assed played lines will Only gaurantee a Merkin
^^good flow, punch didn't hit to hard though.
And thats for certain...Kursed has been cursed to be wack 4ever
So I'm a keep his curse goin..statin that "U not gettin any better"
^^ok, besides the fact that you repeated cursed/kursed 3 times, this was a pretty good bar, esp. the first line.
Maybe you can weather the storm..and accept your herb fate
Cuz I Just finished you off like fat people finish dinner plates
^^what's up with you in this battle? Each verse has a nice first line, but a bad second line.
Overall-decent verse, your setups were great, but punches just didn't follow through here. 7/10
Mentally-
Gettin mad at breath mint employees is the only time you need ANGERmanage MINT//
Ill leave you rottin and decomposin sleepin 6 feet deep wit a unpleasant scent//
^^line 1=blah, line 2=ok, kinda stretched.
Your face is open for attacks like presidents without security guards//
I sent my regards, knife hit to the stomach make your blood expel and discard//
^^lol, very nice bar, good use of multi's.
Put glue on bullets then send through your stomach so you can say I "sticky your threads"//
Penetratin your head, foamin at the mouth from seizers, changin your shirt from white to red//
^^setup was blah but damn nice punch.
Ejaculatin to "off switches" is the only time your "brain cums on"//
Your lifes gone, rippin your brain out like your thoughts were withdrawn//
Shit...........wow ......
Sendin threats to niggas like mailin terrorists and deadly toxins//
Putin you dick in niggas mouth is the only place you place you cock in
^^weak finisher, played.
overall-opener sucked, finisher sucked, but the rest was ......just damn..........hit hard as hell........I give you 8.5/10 for the verse minus opener and finisher.
Sorry capcom, you still came with a good verse, you were just outpunched here.
Vote=Mentally Kursed
I think mentally cursed edged this one marginally.
Punches were alittle stronger, bit better wordplay, everything else was a tie:
Vote=mentally kursed
Capcom, it was close, but not close enough
this was a close battle.......
so close that what decides my vote is the fact that tonya pointed out......
mental logged off before he drop'd his verse which makes me wonder about him....
with the verses being pretty even overall i give my vote to capcom simply cus we know that his verse was originally his from start.....nice drops to both.....
vote-capcom......
oh yeh .....please both drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...026#post792026
thanks....
^no need to whine... i wasn't trying to be anything other than fair... mentally kursed won thats why i gave you the tips.... get it... peaceQuote:
Originally posted by Capcom
Sendin threats to niggas like mailin terrorists and deadly toxins//
Putin you dick in niggas mouth is the only place you place you cock in// (Orignially posted by Mentally Kursed)
Hmm.....Brainsurgeon talked about my one gay bar but yet Mentally Kursed matched it & used it as his closer....But I talk about gays too much LoL fuck it lets keep the votes comin....
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Capcom IS DQ'D, NEXT TIME FOLLOW THE RULESQuote:
Originally posted by The End
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