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10-12 lines max
NO:
hate
dr
crew
feeding
biting
30 mins to spit after set up
check in right away
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call it how u wanna call it........Lol..........
royal sickness?...Nah....Mo' like dah Royal Mistress'
In a Distress'stripped Thread'less after Chrit dun Stole his Bit'Dress-
He's jus 13 yr old boy from a southern town of detriot...wigga please '
look'd up sicknes on www.ask jeeves-what do I see?-notha 8-mile wannabee...(whatta suprise)
Call Em Motha'Nature'way off Nature Recycle'n offa No'shows'...shows he blows-
Just Antoha Ill faded Homo..wit Skills'so Low Lil' Bow Wow Drop's down to his knees feel his flow-
Head ta Toe-Ya kno....Carson display's spits of arson to Hot Fo'dis Kat-
Ya basic'str8 carbonized while i Flow like Draft,Sicks idol aint shit wit out Aftermath-
I split dis Bitch ripp'n thru his clit...Like Tommy Lee on a Olsen Twin-
some one hand dis kid a garbage bin'so he can see where mom's commit'd mortal sin...
dont bother carson wit pettiness.....an stop lie'n in ya sig...kid
CarsonJet-2k4- "Please go on me Royal....I'm new to this
RoyalSickn3ss1- " Don't worry...the more time it takes for you to spit...the more time for you to live
CarsonJet-2k4- "Oh...thanks for the advice..gotta go now...My mommys callin me
A Newbie Basement?(anb)....its sad that you the worst in the wackest crew...//1
Like TV's with bad broadcast connection..homie this is bad news!...//2
I peeped yo profile....no age you prolly 12..you aint no thug to me...//3
Why don't you leave Rap Battles....Go and visit this dude named Jermaine Dupri..//4
A text cd? That has a punchline in itself so i wont even clown it....//5
But the pathetic part is when you tried to register it for a soundclick...//6
Compete at sumthin different man, Enter a Womens Beauty Competition....//7
Your a dumbass, if ya boy told u to 'Hide The Heat' you'd turn up the Air Condition..//8
Ya weak verse will be 'Worth Shit' like Homework assignments Incomplete....//9
You've juss been Defeated and 'Shut Down' like 'Control-Alt-Delete'//10
lets get some votes in...btw..nice drop
heres the layout
flo-royal
punches-carson
structure-royal
vocab-carson
style-royal
overall-royal
carson it looked like u just dropped words together to make it look decent...well ya had some stretched lines and some lines which made no sense...u tried so much to add wordplay dat u fucked up ur verse...
vote-royal
aight cooll...thanks fer the votes uppin this shit...(1)
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nice battle here..carson drop some nice punches...very creative on the disses...his opener was a killa!! and felt the heat from his barz.......overall this was a tight verse!!
royal came nice also...good punches just that they did'nt hit as hard...disses were iight tho..i see potential but you just got out battled this time...
vote carsonjet{daly} ha ah
aight coo..... uppin fo mo votes.... (2)
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uppin!!
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aight coo..... uppin fo mo votes.... (3)
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uppin!!
uppin for more votes..........................
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You've juss been Defeated and 'Shut Down' like 'Control-Alt-Delete'//10
^^this line is bittin......
once i found out who it came from i will post a name....
but i can guarantee i've seen it before
i think carson took this i was just feelin his shit more dat just determined my vote it was da diffrence maker to me cause it is a close ass battle ya both had good structure good complexity tight ass punchs wordplay and multi's vote carson and hit this shit up honestly to niggas thanx peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81085
my vote goes 2: Carson
Betta punchlines
(that mistress line killed the battle)
One line swayed my opinion and it was Carson's opener
Bote on this shit honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81032
royal more direct... less bullshit... or forced shit... or even more sense.... i saw minor multi's for carl but ya' know since you were wording your verse so awfully the punches came weak ormissing vote= royal
The "Tommy Lee/Olsen Twin" line killed this battle for me...
And the harder punches.
Wordplay, flow, and blah, blah, blah were about the same...
But the punches were much harder than Royal's.
A couple of Royal's were just whack (turn up the heat? I get it, but still...huh?) (Jermaine Dupri? huh?)
Still, he threw tight and except for a couple of lines, came pretty tight.
Just not as hard in my opinion.
Peace
uppin this battle fo mo votes (4)
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overall...good battle
breakin it
flow-royal
punches-tie
enjoyability-tie
metas-werent many
mulites-carson
structure-royal
originality-tie
VERY VERY CLOSE...BUT ROYAL JUST EDGED...IT
GREAT BATTLE U 2...
P-E-A-C-E
C_Drama & Lyrical Cyanide ALWAYS VOTES ON THE SAME BATTLES
THEIR VOTES WILL BE REMOVED LEAVING THIS TIED
I'M REMOVING ALL FREEPOST. . .VOTE FAIRLY OR BE BANNED
STARTING WITH MY VOTE :)
ROYAL WAS PLAYED, STOLE 1 LINE & THE REST WAS BLAH WITH FALSE PERSONALS WHICH I HATE
CARSON, GOOD CONSISTENCY, COOL PUNCHES & SOME NICE WORDPLAY IN THERE
VOTE=CARSONJET. .2004
damn right....them kats right same shit in every vote-
buncha newbie dik ridin BS is what it is........
uppin dis..............shoulda won long time ago'
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Originally posted by CarsonJet-2k4
damn right....them kats right same shit in every vote-
buncha newbie dik ridin BS is what it is........
uppin dis..............shoulda won long time ago'
[size=4]Uppin fo votes...no voting fer him cuz he has 100 posts so he can vote at your battle...uppin for fair votes...i already won but it reopened....[size]
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ED, STOLE 1 LINE & THE REST WAS BLAH WITH FALSE PERSONALS WHICH I HATE
CARSON, GOOD CONSISTENCY, COOL PUNCHES & SOME NICE WORDPLAY IN THERE
VOTE=CARSONJET. .2004
Took the words right out my mouth ~1
Yo vote on this plz ~1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81324
NO QUOTING
uppin for them
royal asked me to upp his battle for you
aight battle but im not votin :)
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Yeah this was a good battle, both had good flow i thought, but i think Carson Jet came harder with the punches, overall i think Carson Jet took this battle, so my vote goes to Carson Jet