yo dawg u responded to sum shit i sed so i set it up
12 lines max
no dr
no hate
u spit first
no copyin and pastin votes
freepostin to a minum
if u duck i will put u on ma sig lol
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yo dawg u responded to sum shit i sed so i set it up
12 lines max
no dr
no hate
u spit first
no copyin and pastin votes
freepostin to a minum
if u duck i will put u on ma sig lol
I accepted u? Didnt i make a thread callin u out??
i wanted ur ass to spit first
but listen, we both spit in 15 min, no fuckin pre writtin shit, u down for that?
o and if u wana get this battle started, vote honestly on this cuz im in 2 battles right now
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79986
^^Be honest, peace
im dun my verse, when u drop ill drop asap after u................................................. .............................................
iight man dont start bein gay now spittin first is no big deal u sed u wanted it so heres ur chance dawg spit...........................
ok dont worry just spit, ill drop after u dont worry, just hurry up drop before 5................................................. ....15 minutes i know u can do that shit
no prewrittin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL what r u talking about I wasw dun a while ago, i told u 20 minute time limit dawg, then we'd both drop at the same time
wuts the matter wit u?
anyway heres my verse, know you'll enjoy it
Punches u Throw r nuthin, arm ampitated MLB stars Tryin to Pitch/ Its Mostly all real emcees On rapbattles.com, cept for this bitch/ I'll take you out unexpectedly like assasins on a roof top/ have ya runnin faster than fat couples monday mornins at I Hope/ yur nuthin, ill torture u worse than mid evil dungeons, puttin you out "the game for good" like "5th stage concusions/" Ill fuck you up more than a joint thats been laced/ your a discrace, U couldnt spray SHIT if u had an ass actatched to ur face/u probably never even gotcha penis sucked or experiended a Lover/ Ill hitchu wit my punches so hard, you'll Spin around n' Hover/ Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/ My words are so Explisit, more Illegal than Teen Pary Kegs/ IM guna end ya Win RUNNIN streek like troops gettin pegged in the leg/ the difference between me and u is a While/ Ur so low you'de need a fuckin Stool just to lay Floor Tiles/ Im Psycho like Straight Jacket Patients, Wit mind voices who Hate-It/ Like girls "given head", after this loss ur guna have to "Face-It"/ U gettin removed like routes and ploud like a Farm Trackter/ THis fags seen N' Squeezed more nuts than a ball crushen Nut Cracker/ This battles mines, like a crook wen it comes to purses im about to Snatch-It/ Ur jus slopply, bound to "fuck up", replica "Inspecter Gadget"/ (always messes up)
its an okay verses, some parts seemed forced and some bars strectched out into two
for example
Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/
that can't be one bar duke and btw, its best to write yer shit in bar format than like a paragraph
lot of ppl like to see flow and hate to be the one that have to decipher your flow by re-reading, it should be obvious at start
neways, when the battle starts i'll vote on dis ish
it sounds better over the mic
and dont judge this battle over flow i hate when ppl do that
haha apprentice is still not done yet
OO SHIT I WAS WATCHIN THE GIANTS IIGHT FREESTYLE RIGHT HERE WE GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IIGHT DAWg
Shut the fuck UP!.... and battle the goD! ya rhymes feminine, resemble ya broad/(FAGIT)
no safehouse bitch.. spittin circular merkin directions abroad, rhymes comin down tumblin, humblin yall!Rumblin raw, my saliva could.,.....blunder ur jaws,(he is speechless)
come on now beatin me is not happenin, ur just my aprentice kid/
got u tryin to rhyme against me, but its like pissin in the wind, now im spittin 4 the win/
like i was a lyrical miracle, tyrinal syllables, tearin u,
dont duck, ur easily hittable/
(Style Switch)
Im rappin wit a monarchs thought process, ya hawk dick and talk nonsense, fuck deadin our beef, im keepin shit constant/
Im ponderin i stop pop and snap like modelin, then i let go/
rippin thru ur skin to enter the blood flow, im killin free agents like my name was neo/
This ass tearin, shoul TEACH U RESPECT, Cript left, when he seen me wreck the net/
i understand u too scared to spit first, its cuz u wanna take rapid bites/
i kicked u dick faggot pussy like u was a hermaphrodite/
Ur styles got me laughin right, like styles p from police u should take a massive flight, BITCH U AINT GOT APRENTICE's FUCKEN APETITE!! /
Yo faggot ass how many lines did u write i sed fucken 12 man ur a lil dickrider!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
both these nuccas was wack to me real nucca battle on the street puttin ur best flow on the internet for phony nuccas to see man yall nuccas wack i wont vote
ight heres ma vote
Apprentice didnt come so hot as I previously saw him...so that got me in disappointment
even saying that
He took this hands down, no contest (no offense man)
Flow = Aprentice (I caught ya flow Cryp, but he had it packed)
Multis = Aprentice
Punches = Aprentice
Metas = Crypt
Wordplay = Aprentice
Creativity = Tie
Vote = Aprentice
aight here i go...............all i could see in this battle was apprentice wanting it more........breakdown:-
PUNCHES=app
flow=both
orig'=app
personals=tie....not sure
meta's=app
thats all.............
vote =app'
hit this up...................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...did=80805.....
I cant wait to see what mods say to this lol
lol d/r, get the fuck outa here u wack dumb fuck
........................PaYcE..................
uppin this fuckin d/r battle, mods dont seem to care like usual so we'll let it run i guess..................................ide give u props apprentice, butchu honestly dont deserve it
peace
Pretty weak battle on both sides, but I think that the victor who came on top was crypt...he had better wordplay along with punches. apprenticekid was close too, but not enough to pull out a v.
Vote: Crypt
check out my battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80925
IIGHT cryp dont cry about shit man....2-1 me. but u prob dr sane for that pity vote(also unexplained) but nyway uppin on this shittttt
Pitty vote?
Your a lil d/r dawg im just bein straigt........................................... .................................................. ..............
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................................
dis was close, dis is why
punch lines; on both sides
flow;on both sides
similies/metaphorical; CRIP
creative; CRIP
vocab; apprentice
complexity; CRIP
dis was XCRIP, not by dat much do
goodlick niggaz
HOLY SHIT U GOTTA BE JOKIN!!!! iight im cool wit the feedback but lets get some more votes on this,......
Dybj3gang: yo brook its aprentice can u hit this up honestly
Dybj3gang: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80905
Dybj3gang: since i cant pm niggaz i mite as well im em
^
THIS JUST MIGHT BE A REASON TO ADD ANOTHER SUGGESTION IN THE RULE
THATS A WRAP, DONT BOTHER IMING A MOD NEXT TIME.
-BROOKLYN
Decent battle here....Breakdown
Punches: Crypt
Personals: None
Multi's: AK
Flow: Crypt (Even though structure was fucked..he still had a nice flow)
Wordplay: AK
Meta's: Crypt
Vote = Crypt
A hit up my battle against OLI Dogg would ya'll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80874
okay...close battle in my eyez....
BREAKDOWN:
FLOW- TIE LEANIN A LIL TOWARDS APRENTICE
PUNCHEZ- APRENTICE
CREATIVITY- TIE
WORDPLAY= APRENTICE BY A LIL BIT
META4'S- CRYPT
overall nice battle...keep elevatin ya'll.....
*props* to both ya'll emcees
text vote- aprentice
hit dis up ya'll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81130
LOL i know there was d/rin ogin on
punk ass............................................... ........Wheres the loyalty and trust, fuck
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81301
votes needed...................
Yea I have seen apprentice do better but the other cat just needs to elevate. His lines were to streched and lt looked like he just put slop togeather to make it ryhme when it didnt really have flow or make sense. My vote goes to Apprentice
Still uppin............................................. ...............................................Str etched? that prooves ur a d/r, read the fuckinm battles u lil bitch
both battles were tight to the death crypt dropped an ill ass verse and apprentice dropped nasty too crpyt's lines were alittle dragged out didnt really flow to good but everything besides flow i thought was equal so my vote- APPRENTICE
good battle to both of you honestly no hate
uppin............................................. .................................................. ...............
aight im just gonna brea it down
flow even
punchs cryp
worplay apprentice
multi's apprentice
complexity cryp
structure even
vote cyp and hit my battle up wit xl4real please return the favor honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81849
Flow = Aprentice
Multis = Aprentice
Punches = Aprentice
Metas = Crypt
Wordplay = Aprentice
Creativity = Tie
Vote = Aprentice
yea i also though Crypt took this...he had better verse overall...
heres how ima break it down....
flow-AK
structure-AK
punches-Crypt
personals-both
creativity-Crypt
complexity-Crypt
wordplay-AK
comedy-Crypt
enjoyment-both
overall-Crypt
good battle...stay up...
yep..
pz...