Mc81 VS ~Miraculous~0ne~ (350 post 2 vote)

ight...


5 bars max, dont post more and tell me to match it or its a DQ
u spit first
ill spit tomorrow when i get home from school.
house rules..


this is not my check in.. ill check in tomorrow after school, im goin 2 bed now.. PZ!

checking in........................
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...............I'll drop 10
so match that i guess..................

lil quicky cuz i aint wanna think about it later

You 6-1 luckily for you Dick riding isn't a sin.......
Gave me a framed W, for a picture perfect win....
Rob this diamond of a win with no real hint of a clue....
Kid's got a merk list what a newbish thing to do.....
Dis diamond is fake cuz da punches leave scratches.....
Prewritter,only time u do 10min keys is wit time lapses....
From clouds?After this battle I'll send you to heaven......
Burst your bubble cuz battling me u not reaching seven....
You still online yet you said you have to go and sleep.....
U cant beat me,since there's no limit, I'll give u a few weeks.....


SPIT ASAP kid

Aight.. checkinn in..

ill drop soon dawg, just got back a few minutes ago.

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Aight Look Kid..

My Bars Aimed 'Straight At Ya Face' Like 'Mace, Now Let Me Begin To Tell Ya Why 'Your-A-Discrace'
His Mom's His Role Model, She Writes His Name In 'UpperCase' To Prove She 'Capitalizes On Mistakes'
Cry Bitten, Prewritten, Precision-Killin And Punches So Quick They Can't Be 'Clocked'
Like 'Hurricane Isabella' I Leave Warning, But Destruction Can't Be Stopped
There's No Chance For A Miracle, I'll Fuck You Up So Bad You Can't Utter Moans Or Cries
I'll Fill Ya Legs Up With 'Clips' So Now Peeps Can Call You 'Thunder Thighs'
Graffiti The Signs, Can't Defend It When After I'm Done With You.. Yo Won't Feat Dyin
This Kid Must Have 'Bad Credit' The Way He Was Rejected For 'Diamond Minds'
Like 'Out Of Business Utility Companies' This Man Just Can't Bring-The-Heat
Dawg If Text Is Ya Gift.. God 'Hustled' You, I Hope You 'Got Ya Receipt'

just a lil keystyle^^^



uppin 4 votes...
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o yea.. a few explanations are this...

This Kid Must Have 'Bad Credit' The Way He Was Rejected For 'Diamond Minds'

^^ crew im in he was cut off the roster.

His Mom's His Role Model, She Writes His Name In 'UpperCase' To Prove She 'Capitalizes On Mistakes'

^^^ get it? he is a mistake, his mom had him on accident, yea break out the brain! :)

mc took this with multies, punches, metas and flow
vote=mc for an overall better verse...............

Bein Accused Of D/R... But Also A Crappy Explanation.
-Ambiguous

did u really read the both verses in 3minutes?????
mc81 dropped a vote on ur battle 4:24 EST time
you hit up a reply on this battle 4:27 EST time......

dont calling u a D/R but just saying...........looks lil iffy.........
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i dont know.. i can read fast, if you want go ahead and ask a mod to take it away. i dont cheat, so if you feel he is DRin me just tell a mod to remove it, no big deal..


~1~

I gotta say this battle belongs to Mc81...

He just killed the wordplay, metas, and punches.
Also brought the hard personal.
Plus, his opener was just plain mean and wicked...

Kind of a romp, but Miraculous did his thing and laid out a nice verse.
It just wasn't near what Mc dropped.

Holla back...
Born vs. Rappad

im out to the gym.. so ill hit it ip when i get back.. pz

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bah.. uppin on this..


drop a link with the vote and ill hit it up...

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~1~

I gotta say this battle belongs to Mc81...

He just killed the wordplay, metas, and punches.
Also brought the hard personal.
Plus, his opener was just plain mean and wicked...

Kind of a romp, but Miraculous did his thing and laid out a nice verse.
It just wasn't near what Mc dropped.

..........good shyt....1

Metaphores - Mc81 (MO had none)
Vocabulary - Mc81 (bigger/better words)
Punchlines - Mc81 (hit harder)
Wordplay - Mc81 (good words constructed nicely)
Creativity - Mc81 (not basic)
Personals - Mc81 (more personal)
Structure - MO (lines were more even)
Opener - Mc81 (ill)
Finisher - Mc81 (also ill)
Multies - Mc81 (had more)
Flow - tie
Overall - Mc81 (9-1)
No hate...just stating the facts.

350 To Vote...
-Ambiguous

poll it dawg....
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uppin uppin uppin.......


lets go fellaz one more vote lets close this already..
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UPPIN.. lets close this dawg..


drop a link wit yo shit and ill hit it up. come on juss vote..

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fuck the 350 post rule..


this wasnt even close.....

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last time uppin...



COME THE FUCK ON AND GET THIS SHIT OVER WITH..




:)

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Mc really took this one. Miraculous's verse was a bit tighter and flowed better, but mc had better personals and his punches hit harder, watch the stretched bars tho
Vote=mc81

350 To Vote
-Ambiguous

Three Votes Taken Away... 2 Kids Didn't Have Enough Posts... And One Kid Had A Crappy Explanation.

UPPIN For These Kids At 2-0.

mc81 took dis one, it was pretty close though, your mettas was crazy, that one about to capital mistakes was dope, good shit...miraculous one, that drop was pretty generic, not a good concept,mostly played shit

mc81

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=azztro

There's No Chance For A Miracle, I'll Fuck You Up So Bad You Can't Utter Moans Or Cries
I'll Fill Ya Legs Up With 'Clips' So Now Peeps Can Call You 'Thunder Thighs'

Great Line , Pretty much had it all , flipping , multies , personal , and name rip .... Flow too ...


Like 'Out Of Business Utility Companies' This Man Just Can't Bring-The-Heat
Dawg If Text Is Ya Gift.. God 'Hustled' You, I Hope You 'Got Ya Receipt'

Closer was equally as Dope ....... But these 2 lines won it for MC81 , his whole verse was tight , but closer was Supa Fly ...

Miraculous ..... Yur flow and structure were good , but you focused too much on time limits then actually hitting Punches and Personals in ya verse .... While you were Ducking , Mc81 was Chucking ........Dats what I saw ....

Peace , CrazyE ....

i think mc81 got this reason

punches:mc81
flow:one
wordplay:mc81
structure:one
metas:mc81
multies:mc81
made me laugh more:mc81


final:mc81

there mc81 got it with his funny ass punches