Ayo 7-15 lines
No biting feeding.......
No crew hater neewbie or un xplained votes
Peace
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Ayo 7-15 lines
No biting feeding.......
No crew hater neewbie or un xplained votes
Peace
Ayo Ayo JDub, you chekin in yet??????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????
yeah, i'm checkin in. uppin for your verse
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yo this gonna be a walk-over, like a stoll over a fukin foot bridge//
J.dubya you gonna fuked on this battle, like how you got made by ya momma and dadda// (hard)
ima murder you lyricaly and throw your body in the nearest river or creek//
these punches come so hard they make you eat your meals through a straw for a week//
my verbal attack comes like a dictonary equip with a semi-auto mack//
this dude rhymes like a dog tryin to walk with one leg//
your first loss and another victory to me//
cus the only type of flow this bitch gets it at a cetain time of the month//
what you gonna do when young buck come for you?//
i leave you on the cement bleeding, the cops asking witnesses who shot ya?//
my gun leaves your skin with gashing holes and tears and rips//
burn your bdy bring ashes back to ya momma get a comission//
at ure funeral i run out shoot the witnesses in the intermission//
drop soon dude .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............
aight, i'ma start writin my verse now
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Your style changes more than a difference college girl's sexual preference/
You got no flavour and even less cents, so I'll direct you to Vanilla Ice for reference//-1
Am I in a disregarded special care home? Cuz u're lookin like you're retarded/
Couldn't stop my attack if your whole verse were guarded, it shoulda been discarded//-2
Your back's against the wall, seems I'm battlin Goliath the way you were quick to fall/
You couldn't respond to my lines if this were a telelphone call. Sink you like a pool ball//-3
Like those lava lamps soon as you're heated you'll start to glow, eventually even blow/
You a pussy, didn't ya know? Only style you have is down below...a menstrual flow//-4
You're lame in this rap game-you commited treason, I hate you simply for that reason/
This a battle of wits, I'm connecting with so many hits you'd think it was baseball season//-5
It's like I'm Young Buk's brain, the control center that spots every one of his thoughts/
This bitch is startin to flicker, gonna burn out quicker than a light bulb-60 watts//-6
Young Buk's stupid, at school he writes down every new word that was taught/
Here's a new one, "distraught", this herb trying to give me food for thought//-7
Just call me Nas cause it only takes one mic to toss your fifth loss/
This guy couldn't cause a raquet if he were playing a game of lacrosse//-8
He's lame, couldn't claim fame if he took aim and murdered Saddam Hussein/
Like newbies he's the same, lines so played they look copped from a video game//-9
UPPIN (1)
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please no quoted votes, be original...
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Hmmm:
Punches:J
Personals:J
Flow:J
Wordplay:J
Meta:J
Multi:J
Creativenss:J
Vocab:J
Overal:J
Alright to me this was a 2 sided battle. One side was the sick spit by J and the toher side is the spit by Young that probably hurt him more then it helped him, full merk.
FINALLY a voter^. Thanks dogg...
Currently J. Dubya: 1; Younk Buk: 0
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umm, this battle was iight
J got this tho
but even sayin that
his punches were mad basic
still
he had the better shit, Youngbuck shit was weak
Vote = JDubya
oh (poll votes is retarded, moderators can vote more than once without even respondin to the thread)
so...
POLL votes please...
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J got this with ease
Because he won in almost all areas
Punches/wordplay flow......
Vote: J
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...654#post782654
Vote honest
UPPIN (3)
QUIT SLEEPIN
I"LL RETURN THE FAVOR
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I saw this battle the exact same way... young bucks shit just didnt rhyme at times and his flow and structure was off...Quote:
Originally posted by Scrye
Hmmm:
Punches:J
Personals:J
Flow:J
Wordplay:J
Meta:J
Multi:J
Creativenss:J
Vocab:J
Overal:J
Alright to me this was a 2 sided battle. One side was the sick spit by J and the toher side is the spit by Young that probably hurt him more then it helped him, full merk.
had some good wordplay but that doesnt cover for the flow...
VOTE- J DUBYA
Currently J. Dubya: 3; Young Buk: 0
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aiight i didnt even have to read the whole of j dubyas verese.. just from reading his first few lines its obvios that he won this.. the otehr dudes verse was not creative at all while j dubya had lots of punchlines
vote= j dubya
1 more vote for me, or 5 more votes for him...what's it gonna be?
UPPIN!
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hit this up..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80309
well my vote goes to J dubya for obvious reasons.. but good battle.